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Hello, peopleveryone. Hello, everyone.

Hello, peopl everyone. Hello everyone.

Hello people makes sense but sounds a bit odd

Hello, peopleveryone. Hello, everyone.

“Hello, people” sounds really odd, in some cases rude depending on the tone (English is dumb, I know), and it’s better to say “Hello, everyone”

This is my first time doing thisa post. This is my first time doing a post.

Don’t use “this” as the object here

This is my first time doing thiswriting on here. This is my first time writing on here.

You haven’t explained what you’re doing for the first time, so it’s better to be more specific

I'm bad in eat English. I'm bad at English.

I'm bad inat english. I'm bad at english.

I'm bad inat english. I'm bad at english.

AndThough my english is vaery basic but, I try to do thisimprove. Though my english is very basic, I try to improve.

Be more specific instead of using “do this”. What are you trying to do?

And mMy english is vaery basic but I try to do thisam trying to work on it. My english is very basic but I am trying to work on it.

And my english is vaery basic, but I try to do this.’m t trying. And my english is very basic, but I’m t trying.

I really want to improve my english, especially my Wwriting and grammar skills. I really want to improve my english, especially my writing and grammar skills.

I really want to improve my english, especially my Wwriting and grammar skills. I really want to improve my english, especially my writing and grammar skills.

I really want to improve my english, specifically my Wwriting and grammar skills. I really want to improve my english, specifically my writing and grammar skills.

Please, be gookind. Please be kind.

Please, be goodnice. Please, be nice.

“Please, be good” means to tell someone to have good behavior