June 6, 2021
Day Six
What I want to do most before I die is going to space. I want to feel zero gravity and see the earth and its beautiful blue. Now, the Artemis plan is going on, which seeks to build a moon base. Therefore, I believe it will be feasible for all people to go to space or the moon within 50 years. However, I don't want space burial for my bones because it will be space debris.
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Day Six
What I want to do most before I die is going to space.
I want to feel zero gravity and see the eEarth and its beautiful blue.
I want to feel zero gravity and see the Earth and its beautiful blue.
If you're talking about the planet Earth, you should capitalize it.
Use lowercase ("earth") if you're talking about the soil, the ground, etc.
https://www.dictionary.com/e/earth/
Now, the Artemis plan is going on, which seeks to build a moon base, is going on.
Now, the Artemis plan, which seeks to build a moon base, is going on.
Therefore, I believe it will be feasible for all people to go to space or the moon within 50 years.
However, I don't want spacto be burial for my bones because it will beed in space because my remains will turn into space debris.
However, I don't want to be buried in space because my remains will turn into space debris.
That might be a really expensive burial lol
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Nice! If you ever do make it to space, be sure to write another journal and tell us about it ;)
June 7, 2021
Thank you so much, and if so I'll definitely do it!
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What I want to do most before I die is going to space. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to feel zero gravity and see the earth and its beautiful blue.
I want to feel zero gravity and see the If you're talking about the planet Earth, you should capitalize it. Use lowercase ("earth") if you're talking about the soil, the ground, etc. https://www.dictionary.com/e/earth/ |
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Now, the Artemis plan is going on, which seeks to build a moon base.
Now, the Artemis plan |
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Therefore, I believe it will be feasible for all people to go to space or the moon within 50 years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I don't want space burial for my bones because it will be space debris.
However, I don't want That might be a really expensive burial lol |
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