April 3, 2021
Tomb Sweeping Day
Tomb Sweeping Day comes, and today is the first day of this festival. How would I spend this festival? I don't have any plans for it. Usually, I don't go anywhere, and I just stay home to accompany my mom. If it was several years ago, possibly I would have taken a road trip to go cities around to have a break, but nowadays, no matter what festival comes, I no longer have a desire to go out for a trip. I don't know why, maybe it is because of my age. I will stay home with my mom doing nothing, just stay with her, and let the time flow silently.
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Tomb Sweeping Day
Tomb Sweeping Day comes, and today is the first day of this festival. Tomb Sweeping Day comes, and today is the first day of this festival.
Your sentence is perfect but you can also say 'Tomb Sweeping Day has arrived' :)
How would Iam I going to spend this festival?
How am I going to spend this festival?
'Would' is ok if you are implying that you cannot attend the festival this year. However, if you are going to attend then 'going to' is better :)
I don't have any plans for it.
Usually, I don't go anywhere, and I just stay home to accompany my mom.
If it was several years ago, I possibly I would have taken a road trip to go cities aroundaround cities to have a break, but nowadays, no matter what festival comes, I no longer have a desire to go out for a trip.
If it was several years ago, I possibly would have taken a road trip to go around cities to have a break, but nowadays, no matter what festival comes, I no longer have a desire to go out for a trip.
'possibly I would' is fine but 'I possibly would' is more common!
Changed word order for 'around cities'
I don't know why, maybe it is because of my age.
I will stay home with my mom doing nothing, j. Just stay with her, and let the time flow silently.
I will stay home with my mom doing nothing. Just stay with her, and let the time flow silently.
Not incorrect but flows better as a new sentence before 'just'
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Really clear and well structured sentences with great vocabulary! Changed some word orders and offered some suggestions which will help you sound more like a native speaker. I hope you still have a nice time with your mom :)
April 3, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Tomb Sweeping Day This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tomb Sweeping Day comes, and today is the first day of this festival. Tomb Sweeping Day comes, and today is the first day of this festival. Tomb Sweeping Day comes, and today is the first day of this festival. Your sentence is perfect but you can also say 'Tomb Sweeping Day has arrived' :) |
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How would I spend this festival?
How 'Would' is ok if you are implying that you cannot attend the festival this year. However, if you are going to attend then 'going to' is better :) |
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I don't have any plans for it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Usually, I don't go anywhere, and I just stay home to accompany my mom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If it was several years ago, possibly I would have taken a road trip to go cities around to have a break, but nowadays, no matter what festival comes, I no longer have a desire to go out for a trip.
If it was several years ago, I possibly 'possibly I would' is fine but 'I possibly would' is more common! Changed word order for 'around cities' |
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I don't know why, maybe it is because of my age. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will stay home with my mom doing nothing, just stay with her, and let the time flow silently.
I will stay home with my mom doing nothing Not incorrect but flows better as a new sentence before 'just' |
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