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The triple happiness of hike

I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk

I enjoy making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.

The first one is the time when I was hiking. It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike. It's about the pleasant memories.

The third one is the time when I share with my old friends and you folks about it. At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.


刚刚上传了一小段上周六山洞探险的视频。你可以在这里观看:https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk

我喜欢作这个视频,因为它让我觉得我又回到了山上。

每次我远足,我都能获得三倍的快乐。

第一次是我徒步的时候。这是关于自然,山,植物和我身边的人。

第二个是当我看徒步的视频和照片时。这是关于愉快的回忆。

第三个是我与我的老朋友和你们分享时。这时候,我希望你能在我所曾拥有的大自然中度过一段美好的时光。

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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.

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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.

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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.

The first one is the time when I was hiking.

It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

It's about the pleasant memories.

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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoy making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

The first one is the time when I was hiking.

It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

It's about the pleasant memories.

The third one is the time when I share with my old friends and you folks about it.

At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.

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Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.

It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

It's about the pleasant memories.

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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.

It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

It's about the pleasant memories.

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Sept. 3, 2024

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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.

It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

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The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.


The second one is the timehappens when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike. The second one happens when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.

The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike. The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.

Again, let's change "is the time" to "comes from" -- "The second one comes from when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike."

The second one is about the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike. The second one is about the time when I watch videos and pictures of the hike.

The second one is the time when I watch the videos and see pictures of the hike. The second one is the time when I watch the videos and see pictures of the hike.

The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures I took of the hike. The second one is when I watch the videos and pictures I took of the hike.

The second one is the timesource of joy is when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike. The second source of joy is when I watch videos and pictures of the hike.

It's about the pleasant memories.


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It's about relive the pleasant memories. I relive the pleasant memories.

It'That brings about the pleasant memories. That brings about pleasant memories.

The third one is the time when I share with my old friends and you folks about it.


The third one is the time when I share about it with my old friends and you folks about it. The third one is when I share about it with my old friends and you folks about it.

The third one is the timecomes from when I share my experience with my old friends and, as well as you folks about it. The third one comes from when I share my experience with my old friends, as well as you folks.

The phrase "my old friends and you folks" sounds a little unnatural, so I changed the sentence to make it sound more natural.

The third one is about the time when I share it with my goold friends and you folks about it. The third one is about the time when I share it with my good friends and you folks about it.

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The third one is the time when I share them with my old friends and you folks about it. The third one is when I share them with my old friends and you folks.

The third one is the time when I sharsource of happiness is sharing information about the hike with my old friends and you folks about itonline. The third source of happiness is sharing information about the hike with my friends and folks online.

At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.


At this moment, I hope you can have as nice of a time in the nature as I have had. At this moment, I hope you can have as nice of a time in nature as I have had.

At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have halike I did. At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in nature like I did.

I corrected your grammar for this sentence, but I think the better way to say it is: "I hope I can convey to you the nice time I had in nature."

At this moment, I hope you can have as nice time in the nature I have had. At this moment, I hope you can have as nice time in the nature I had.

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At this moment, I hope you can shavre ain nice time in the nature that I have had. At this moment, I hope you can share in nice time in the nature that I have had.

At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had. At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.

At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature as I have had. At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in nature as I have had.

At this moment, I hope you can have a niceI hope you can get a taste/glimpse of the wonderful time in the nature I have had. I hope you can get a taste/glimpse of the wonderful time in nature I have had.

The triple happiness of hike


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"The triple happiness of hiking" = You are talking about the activity of hiking "The triple happiness of a hike" = You are talking about the experience of taking a hike "The triple happiness of the (or 'my') hike" = You are talking about a specific hike, or the hike you just went on

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"The Triple Happiness of Hiking" is also ok, or "The Threefold Joys of Hiking". "Hiking" is the important change.

The triple happiness of hikeing The triple happiness of hiking

The triple happiness of hike建议标题:Threefold hiking joy 建议标题:Threefold hiking joy

I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.


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I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition to a cave. I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's expedition to a cave.

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You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoy making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.


You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it made me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it made me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

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You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it made me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

You have completed the action of making the video so you can use past tense.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

是以前的事,不是现在的。

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it made me feel like I am back on the mountain again.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it makeshelped me feel like I amas if I were back on the mountain again. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoyed making this video because it helped me feel as if I were back on the mountain again.

Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.


Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness. Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.

Not gramatically incorrect, but I think based on the context of what follows to rephrase it as "Every time I hike, I experience 3 moments of happiness". "Triple happiness" sounds a bit odd.

Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness. Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.

It might be more clear to say "triple the happiness" or "thrice the happiness".

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Every time I hike, I can gain triple amount of happiness. Every time I hike, I gain triple amount of happiness.

Every time I hike, I can gain triple the happiness. Every time I hike, I can gain triple the happiness.

You can also say, "Every time I hike, I gain happiness in three ways."

Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness'm always elated. Every time I hike, I'm always elated.

This is better

Every time I hike, I can gain triplhree times the happiness. Every time I hike, I can gain three times the happiness.

OPTION A: Every time I hike, I can gain triplehreefold happiness. OPTION B: Each time I hike, I gain much happiness. OPTION A: Every time I hike, I can gain threefold happiness. OPTION B: Each time I hike, I gain much happiness.

选项B听起来比选项A更自然。(选项A感觉像是直接翻译。)

The first one is the time when I was hiking.


The first one is the timeoccurs when I wasgo hiking. The first one occurs when I go hiking.

Following the note above, I think it's best if it's reworded this way.

The first one is the time when I was hiking. The first one is the time when I was hiking.

This grammar is correct, but here is a more native way to say it: "The first one comes from when I hike".

The first one is about the time when I was hiking. The first one is about the time when I was hiking.

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The first one is the time when I wasam hiking. The first one is the time when I am hiking.

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The first one is the time when I wasI spend hiking. The first one is the time I spend hiking.

The first one is the timesource of joy is when I wasam hiking. The first source of joy is when I am hiking.

It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.


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It's about can appreciate nature, the mountains, the plants, and the people witharound me. I can appreciate nature, the mountains, the plants, and the people around me.

It's about natureThen I can enjoy the natural environment, the mountains, the plants and the people with me. Then I can enjoy the natural environment, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.

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