I asked:, “So, why did you weardress like that?” I asked, “So, why did you dress like that?”

Good job using 'so' and 'like that' so well! 'wear' needs the clothing that the person is wearing when you use it. You could say: "So, why did you wear a coat and face mask like that?" 'dress' can be used without any mention of the clothes that the person wore.

I asked:, “So, why didare you weardressed like that?” I asked, “So, why are you dressed like that?”

I asked:, “So, why didare you wear likeing that?” I asked, “So, why are you wearing that?”

'wearing that' as in the coat and mask

Today is a hot day, it’s really really hot. Today is a hot day, really really hot.

Or: Today is a hot day. It's really, really hot.

Today iwas a hot day, it’. It was really, really hot. Today was a hot day. It was really, really hot.

"Is" could also work, if this is set later in the same day, but if it's towards the end of the day, the past tense makes more sense.

Today is a hot day, it’. It's really, really hot. Today is a hot day. It's really, really hot.

I canould not even sleep or sit in my house. I could not even sleep or sit in my house.

I can no't even sleep or sit in my house. I can't even sleep or sit in my house.

My cat was also hot like me,. It’s went out and went to the big tree near my house and sleep apt there. My cat was also hot like me. It went out and went to the big tree near my house and slept there.

I don't know which tense you're trying to use here. If it's past tense: My cat was also hot like me. It went outside to the big tree near my house and slept there. If it's present: My cat was also hot like me. It's gone outside to the big tree near my house and is sleeping there. If you didn't mean that your cat is also hot but that your cat also can't sleep or stay in the house, then say it like this: Like me, my cat was also too hot to sleep or stay in the house. It went outside to the big tree near my house and slept there.

My cat was also hot like me,. It’s went out and went to the big tree near my house and sleep apt there. My cat was also hot like me. It went out to the big tree near my house and slept there.

"went out" and "went to" sound redundant, so unless you're trying to achieve a certain effect, you should combine them.

My cat was also hot like me,. It’s went out and wentside to the big tree near my house and sleep apt there. My cat was also hot like me. It went outside to the big tree near my house and slept there.

My dad was almost naked, h. He just wear aore shorts and didn’t wear a shirt. My dad was almost naked. He just wore shorts and didn’t wear a shirt.

'shorts' is a mass noun. It isn't used with an article. 'shirt' is a count noun, so it needs an article.

My dad was almost naked,; he just wearore a shorts and didn’t wear a shirt. My dad was almost naked; he just wore a shorts and didn’t wear a shirt.

My dad was almost naked, he just wear aore shorts and didn’t wear a shirt. My dad was almost naked, he just wore shorts and didn’t wear a shirt.

But my mother,- I think she has super power because she wearore a coat and a face-mask. But my mother- I think she has super power because she wore a coat and a face-mask.

Starting a sentence with 'but' is grammatically incorrect. But native speakers do it all the time in casual writing haha. So you can also start a sentence with 'but', just be aware that it sounds very casual. A more natural way to say this is: But I think my mother must have a super power because she wore a coat and face mask. Or even better: But my mother must have a super power because she wore a coat and a face mask. 'must' can mean both 'have to' like 'I have to go to the store/I must go to the store' or that you guess something is true about the sentence subject, like 'He has so many friends. I guess he is an awesome guy/He must be an awesome guy." Unlike Vietnamese, English is subject-prominent language. This means that mentioning the topic at the beginning of the sentence is rarely done and sounds like you're interrupting your own thoughts. In this sentence, your topic is 'my mother', but your subject is 'I'. Starting your sentence with your subject 'I' or making 'my mother' the sentence subject will make your sentence sound like much more natural English.

But as to my mother, I think she has super powers because she wearore a coat and a face-mask. But as to my mother, I think she has superpowers because she wore a coat and a face-mask.

But my mother, I think she has a super power because she could wear a coat and a face-mask. But my mother, I think she has a super power because she could wear a coat and a face-mask.

I asked her:, “Waseren't you hot?” I asked her, “Weren't you hot?”

You could also say: "Were you hot?" But using 'not' is more natural in this situation. It makes the question surprised or incredulous.

I asked her:, “WasAre you hot?” I asked her, “Are you hot?”

The tense inside the dialogue should be the actual tense used when speaking.

I asked her:, “Was you hot?” I asked her, “Was you hot?”

She said:, “yes, really hot”. She said, “yes, really hot”.

This is the more common way to write quoted speech

She said:, “yYes, really hot.” She said, “Yes, really hot.”

She said:, “yYes, really hot” She said, “Yes, really hot”

She said:, “Because, She think the sunshine and heat will make hermy skin terrible”." She said, “Because the sunshine and heat will make my skin terrible."

Or: She said it was because she thought the sunshine and heat would wreck her skin. 'wreck/ruin your skin' is used a lot more than 'make your skin terrible', but both are grammatically correct and very easy to understand.

She said: “B that it was because, S she thinkought the sunshine and heat willould make her skin terrible”. She said that it was because she thought the sunshine and heat would make her skin terrible.

Or, "She said, 'Because I think the sunshine and the heat will make my skin terrible.'"

She said:, “Because, SheI think the sunshine and heat will make hermy skin terrible”. She said, “Because, I think the sunshine and heat will make my skin terrible”.

I can not believe she could afford to do that. I can not believe she could afford to do that.

'afford' is a little weird to use here. That's mostly used with money or time, not willpower or endurance. I think a better way to express what you're trying to say would be: "I can not believe she could handle doing that." This means that you can't believe she was able to endure the heat in those clothes. Or you could say: "I can not believe she thought that was worth it." This means you can't believe she was willing to be so miserably hot just to stay beautiful.

I can not believe she could afford to do that. I cannot believe she could afford to do that.

"can" + "not": "cannot," unless you're writing informally and trying to indicate that someone doesn't have to do something.

I canould not believe she afford to docould handle that. I could not believe she could handle that.