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Drawing at the Morning

Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching. We meet in a park close of Sant Pau hospital. In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930. The morning was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky. I drawing seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted. After two hours, the meet was over. We make a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later. Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

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After two hours, the meet was over.

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After two hours, the meet was over.

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Drawing at the Morning


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Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching.


On Saturday morning I went out to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching. On Saturday morning I went out to draw in a meeting of Urban Sketching.

A few changes make this sentence more natural :)

Saturday morning, I went to drawing in a meeting of Uan urban Ssketching meet-up. Saturday morning, I went to an urban sketching meet-up.

Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketchingan Urban Sketching meeting to draw. Saturday morning I went to an Urban Sketching meeting to draw.

We meet in a park close of Sant Pau hospital.


We meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital. We meet in a park close to Sant Pau hospital.

Preposition

We meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital. We met in a park close to Sant Pau hospital.

We all meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital. We all met in a park close to Sant Pau hospital.

In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.


In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an big interesting big house built in 1930. In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", a big interesting house built in 1930.

English usually follows an adjective ordering: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/adjective-order/

InAt thise park, I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930. At the park, I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.

In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930. I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.

We already know where you are :) we can exclude the location.

The morning was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky.


The morningIt was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky. It was a sunny day without any clouds in the sky.

Theat morning was a sunny day and without anywith no clouds in the sky. That morning was sunny with no clouds in the sky.

I drawing seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted.


I drawingew seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted. I drew seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted.

Or, "was drawing" to match past tense.

I drawing seated in the best place with shadowsat in drew in the best spot I fcound, andld find, a shady place with the view I wanted. I sat in drew in the best spot I could find, a shady place with the view I wanted.

I drawing seatedsat in the best place wi, in the shadow I found, and with the view I wanteds with an amazing view. I sat in the best place, in the shadows with an amazing view.

After two hours, the meet was over.


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We make a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later.


We maketook a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later. We took a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later.

I take/took/have taken photos He takes/took/has taken photos They take/took/have taken photos

We make atook photo tos of all the drawings first, and with all of us latthen we took pictures of ourselves together. We took photos of all the drawings first, then we took pictures of ourselves together.

We makeFirst, we took a photo tof all the drawings first, and, then with all of us later. First, we took a photo of all the drawings, then with all of us.

Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.


Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home. Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

In the United States it's always a "subway" or "metro", but this is probably correct for UK English.

Soon after, I wenthortly after that, I walkinged to the underground to come backreturn home. Shortly after that, I walked to the underground to return home.

Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home. Soon after, I went underground to come back home.

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