Dec. 31, 2025
Would you like to be a doctor?
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. I am31-year old now and I have a lot to do on my work and private, so I think it’s too late to try again. Our aim to the future has been changed as we grow up.
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I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at (that time / the time). I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at (that time / the time).
"the time" reads a little more natural here I think, but "that time" is fine too.
I am (31- years old / 31) now and I have a lot to do on my work and private life, so I think it’s too late to try again.
I am (31 years old / 31) now and I have a lot to do on my work and private life, so I think it’s too late to try again.
You can say "years old" like the 歳 in 31歳 but in English it's often omitted entirely.
Option 1: "Our aim tos for the future chas beennge as we grow up."
Option 2: "My goals for the future changed as weI groew up."
Option 1: "Our aims for the future change as we grow up."
Option 2: "My goals for the future changed as I grew up"
Option 1 is making a statement about how things change for people in general.
Option 2 is making a statement about your life.
Dec. 31, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at thate time.
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at the time.
I am 31- years old now and I have a lot to do on myat work and privatin my personal life, so I think it’s too late to try again.
I am 31 years old now and I have a lot to do at work and in my personal life, so I think it’s too late to try again.
Our aim tos for the future has been changed as we grow up.
Our aims for the future change as we grow up.
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I think it's still possible to change careers, as long as you have money.
Dec. 31, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time.
Maybe you, or the adults in your life, didn't think you were smart enough?
Are you stating a fact or a perception?
I am 31- years old now, and I have a lot to do onfor my work and in my private life, so I think it’s too late to try agat this point.
I am 31 years old now, and I have a lot to do for my work and in my private life, so I think it’s too late to try at this point.
"again" means that you tried before. You could repeat "now," but to avoid using it twice in this sentence, "at this point" (which is a little less formal than "at this time") works well.
Our aim togoals for the future has been changed as we grow up.
Our goals for the future change as we grow up.
This is a general statement, so it should be written in the present tense.
Dec. 31, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
Dec. 31, 2025
Pronouncing the sentences while writing them is a good idea. Often we can hear if something sounds right or wrong.
You can also try typing your sentence into Google search and asking if it is correct.
Someone mentioned she uses Grammerly. Here is an example: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/parts-of-speech/prep-in-on-at/
Would you like to be a doctor?
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time.
I am31-year old'm 31 now and I have a lot to do oin my work and in my private live, so I think it’s too late to try again.
I'm 31 now and I have a lot to do in work and in my private live, so I think it’s too late to try again.
Our aim togoals for the future has been changeds as we grow up.
Our goals for the future changes as we grow up.
Dec. 31, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
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I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. Maybe you, or the adults in your life, didn't think you were smart enough? Are you stating a fact or a perception?
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at th I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at (that time / the time). I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at (that time / the time). "the time" reads a little more natural here I think, but "that time" is fine too. |
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I am31-year old now and I have a lot to do on my work and private, so I think it’s too late to try again.
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I am 31 "again" means that you tried before. You could repeat "now," but to avoid using it twice in this sentence, "at this point" (which is a little less formal than "at this time") works well.
I am 31
I am (31 You can say "years old" like the 歳 in 31歳 but in English it's often omitted entirely. |
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Our aim to the future has been changed as we grow up.
Our
Our This is a general statement, so it should be written in the present tense.
Our aim
Option 1: "Our aim Option 1 is making a statement about how things change for people in general. Option 2 is making a statement about your life. |
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