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Shark-eat-shark world

I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc. from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into (a) meaningful sentence(s) or a short story.

SPONDULICKS, MOOLAH, MAKE A BREAK (FOR IT), OFFBEAT, FULL-BLOWN, SCINTILLATING

The investment project was presented by him, the great business shark as he called himself, at the first sight looks offbeat and even suspicious. He proposed start a scientific research that eventually has to be ended up all sorts of wars, conflicts and crises had been occurring during the previous human history.
The main task was to find the answer the question that tortured humankind all along. What came first, the chicken or the egg?
At the beginning not having found many supporters Dr. Wash Brainer started active campaign on TV. Every time he gives speeches his eloquent and scintillating manner attract to him more and more investors, until eventually money starts flow like a river.
For couple months company stocks spike drastically, became the fastest-growing active New-Yolk Stock Exchange have ever seen.
The fairy tale didn’t last long. One day I-don’t-know-what-it-called-illions was withdrawn from all accounts, and the media broken out the news that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud.
He made a break for his carefully prepared secret place to one of the offshore country with sunny weather and surrounded by the ocean.
This morning, having lain in a hammock he mumbled a simple song that makes him smiling widely.
Spondulicks or moolah or let just call it money.
It better, it nicer then super sweetest honey.
It flowing, it growing, it never makes me boring.
In a six months after of pushing his luck, hiding, millions spent to cover his tracks, two face plastic surgeries he will be eaten by sharks in a pool when he slip over a sixpence during his usual morning feed.

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It is flowing, it is growing, it never makes me boringed.

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In a sSix months lafter of, after pushing his luck, hiding, spending millions spent to cover his tracks, two faceial plastic surgeries, he will be eaten by sharks in a pool when he slips overn a sixpence during his usual morning feedmeal.

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One day I-don’t-know-what-it-called-millions/billions/trillions/quadrillions wasere withdrawn from all accounts, and the media broken out the news that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud.

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Shark-eat-sharkDog-eat-dog world

I have never heard the "shark-eat-shark" expression..."dog-eat-dog" is the right way to say it.

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For a couple months, the company stocks spikrose drastically, became – the fastest-growing activthat the New- Yolrk Stock Exchange haved ever seen.

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One day I-don’t-know-what-it-called-illions was, millions of dollars were withdrawn from allthe accounts, and the media broken out the news. The news broke that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud.

I think your native language is Russian, right? English sentences tend to be shorter than in Russian (that's why I broke this one up into two).

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Shark-eat-shark world


Shark-eat-sharkDog-eat-dog world Dog-eat-dog world

I have never heard the "shark-eat-shark" expression..."dog-eat-dog" is the right way to say it.

I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc.


from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into (a) meaningful sentence(s) or a short story.


SPONDULICKS, MOOLAH, MAKE A BREAK (FOR IT), OFFBEAT, FULL-BLOWN, SCINTILLATING


SPONDULICKS, MOOLAH, MAKE A BREAK (FOR IT), OFFBEAT, FULL-BLOWN, SCINTILLATING SPONDULICKS, MOOLAH, MAKE A BREAK (FOR IT), OFFBEAT, FULL-BLOWN, SCINTILLATING

Just so you know, I have never heard "spondulicks" before. I think it's a pretty old-fashioned term. "Moolah" is also a very casual slang word.

SPONDULICKSX, MOOLAH, MAKE A BREAK (FOR IT), OFFBEAT, FULL-BLOWN, SCINTILLATING SPONDULIX, MOOLAH, MAKE A BREAK (FOR IT), OFFBEAT, FULL-BLOWN, SCINTILLATING

I've never heard of "Spondulix," a slang term that peaked in usage in 1891.

The investment project was presented by him, the great business shark as he called himself, at the first sight looks offbeat and even suspicious.


The investment project was presented by him, the great business shark as he called himself, at the first sight looks offbeat and even suspicious. The investment project was presented by him, the great business shark as he called himself, at the first sight looks offbeat and even suspicious.

I'm not sure I fully understand what you mean here. I wonder if it might be more useful to write simpler sentence with more straightforward words.

The investment project was presented by him, the great business shark as he called himself, at the first sight it looksed offbeat and even suspicious. The investment project was presented by him, the great business shark as he called himself, at first sight it looked offbeat and even suspicious.

He proposed start a scientific research that eventually has to be ended up all sorts of wars, conflicts and crises had been occurring during the previous human history.


He proposed start adecided to conduct scientific research that eventually has to be ended upaddressing all sorts of wars, conflicts and crises had been occurring during the previousover the course of human history. He decided to conduct scientific research addressing all sorts of wars, conflicts and crises over the course of human history.

He proposed start aing scientific research that eventually has to be ended up all sorts ofwould end all the wars, conflicts and crises that had been occurring during the previthroughoust human history. He proposed starting scientific research that eventually would end all the wars, conflicts and crises that had been occurring throughout human history.

The main task was to find the answer the question that tortured humankind all along.


The main task was to find the answer to the question that had tortured humankind all along. The main task was to find the answer to the question that had tortured humankind all along.

What came first, the chicken or the egg?


Whatich came first, the chicken or the egg? Which came first, the chicken or the egg?

At the beginning not having found many supporters Dr. Wash Brainer started active campaign on TV.


At the beginning, not having found many supporters, Dr. Wash Brainer started actively campaigning on TV. At the beginning, not having found many supporters, Dr. Wash Brainer started actively campaigning on TV.

AtIn the beginning not having found many supporters Dr. Wash Brainer started an active campaign on TV. In the beginning not having found many supporters Dr. Wash Brainer started an active campaign on TV.

Every time he gives speeches his eloquent and scintillating manner attract to him more and more investors, until eventually money starts flow like a river.


Every time he giaves speeches, his eloquent and scintillating manner attract to himed more and more investors, until eventually money starts flow like a river. Every time he gave speeches, his eloquent manner attracted more and more investors.

"Scintillating" seems just a little off in this context, but "eloquent" is a great word to use.

Every time he giaves speeches his eloquent and scintillating manner attract to himed more and more investors, until eventually his money startwas flowing like a river. Every time he gave speeches his eloquent and scintillating manner attracted more and more investors, until eventually his money was flowing like a river.

For couple months company stocks spike drastically, became the fastest-growing active New-Yolk Stock Exchange have ever seen.


For a couple months, the company stocks spikrose drastically, became – the fastest-growing activthat the New- Yolrk Stock Exchange haved ever seen. For a couple months, the company stocks rose drastically – the fastest-growing that the New York Stock Exchange had ever seen.

For couple months the company stocks spiked drastically, and became the fastest-growing activcompany the New-Yolk Stock Exchange haved ever seen. For couple months the company stock spiked drastically, and became the fastest-growing company the New-Yolk Stock Exchange had ever seen.

The fairy tale didn’t last long.


One day I-don’t-know-what-it-called-illions was withdrawn from all accounts, and the media broken out the news that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud.


One day I-don’t-know-what-it-called-illions was, millions of dollars were withdrawn from allthe accounts, and the media broken out the news. The news broke that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud. One day, millions of dollars were withdrawn from the accounts. The news broke that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud.

I think your native language is Russian, right? English sentences tend to be shorter than in Russian (that's why I broke this one up into two).

One day I-don’t-know-what-it-called-millions/billions/trillions/quadrillions wasere withdrawn from all accounts, and the media broken out the news that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud. One day millions/billions/trillions/quadrillions were withdrawn from all accounts, and the media broke the news that millions of people were involved in a full-blown fraud.

He made a break for his carefully prepared secret place to one of the offshore country with sunny weather and surrounded by the ocean.


He made a break for his carefully prepared secret place to one of the offshore country with sunny weather and surrounded by the ocean, located in a foreign country on a sunny beach. He made a break for his carefully prepared secret place, located in a foreign country on a sunny beach.

He made a break for his carefully prepared secret place to one of the offshore countryies with sunny weather and surrounded by the ocean. He made a break for his carefully prepared secret place to one of the offshore countries with sunny weather and surrounded by the ocean.

This morning, having lain in a hammock he mumbled a simple song that makes him smiling widely.


This morning, havinge lainy in a hammock he mumbleding a simple song that makes himand smiling widely. This morning, he lay in a hammock mumbling a simple song and smiling widely.

This morning, having lalying in a hammock he mumbleds a simple song that makes him smilinge widely. This morning, lying in a hammock he mumbles a simple song that makes him smile widely.

Spondulicks or moolah or let just call it money.


Spondulicks or moolah or let just call it money.

It better, it nicer then super sweetest honey.


It is better, it is nicer thean superthe sweetest honey. It is better, it is nicer than the sweetest honey.

It flowing, it growing, it never makes me boring.


It is flowing, it is growing, it never makes me boringed. It is flowing, it is growing, it never makes me bored.

In a six months after of pushing his luck, hiding, millions spent to cover his tracks, two face plastic surgeries he will be eaten by sharks in a pool when he slip over a sixpence during his usual morning feed.


In a sSix months lafter of, after pushing his luck, hiding, spending millions spent to cover his tracks, two faceial plastic surgeries, he will be eaten by sharks in a pool when he slips overn a sixpence during his usual morning feedmeal. Six months later, after pushing his luck, hiding, spending millions to cover his tracks, two facial plastic surgeries, he will be eaten by sharks in a pool when he slips on a sixpence during his usual morning meal.

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