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kader

July 6, 2025

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Help me

Dear friends
Hello everyone i want to learn English so please can you help me with wraiting ,speking and vocabullary
Thanks

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Dear friends , Hello, everyone iI want to learn English, so please can you help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary . Thanks. Dear friends, Hello, everyone I want to learn English, so please can you help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary. Thanks.

I corrected "dear friends" as if you were writing a letter.

Dear friends , Hello everyone i, I want to learn English so please can you, can you please help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary ? Thanks. Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English, can you please help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks.

1. If you’re writing this like a letter, there should be an indent after “Dear friends,”
2. The way you phrased it can sound a bit odd, and depending on your tone can be taken as rude. A better way to phrase it is to drop the “so” and rephrase “please can you help me” to “can you please help me”
3. When using commas in lists, they go after every item in the list except for the final item, and an “an” goes before the final item
4. Also some spelling errors here

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Very good! I don’t think I can help much with speaking, but I can with writing and maybe vocabulary. Good luck with learning English!

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PacificOcean

July 6, 2025

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Made a mistake with the 3rd correction, I meant to say “and” not “an”

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Very good!

remember spelling: pleas => please, wraitting => writing, and so on

have a list? ( wraitting ,speking ,vocabollary) 1. no brackets "()", the last word in the list has and before it writing, speaking and vocabulary

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kader

July 6, 2025

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Thanks for the advace what about speaking i want to talk to native speakers if you can help please

Dear friends , Hello everyone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks. Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English, so please can you help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks.

Include a question mark when you're asking a question. Also, you should probably check the spelling of long words in a dictionary. Knowing how to spell words in English often isn't intuitive, unfortunately.

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Good job with the syntax, just keep working on the spelling!

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kader

July 6, 2025

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Thanks for motivation what about speaking i want to talk to native speakers if you can help please

Dear friends, Hello everyone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) . Thanks Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English, so please can you help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary. Thanks

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Dear friends Hello Hey everyone i, I want to learn English, so pleas can you please help me in ( wrait with writing ,speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks! Hey everyone, I want to learn English, so can you please help me with writing ,speaking , and vocabulary? Thanks!

Dear friends , Hello everyone i, I want to learn English so pleas can you please help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English so can you please help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks

Dear friends Hello everyone i, I want to learn English so please can you help me in ( wraitwriting , speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks Dear friends Hello everyone, I want to learn English so please can you help me in writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks

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kader

July 6, 2025

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Thanks , what about speaking and vocabulary 😅

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Help mMe Help Me

Dear friends Hello evryone i want to learn English so pleas can you help me in ( wraitting ,speking ,vocabollary) Thanks


Dear friends Hello everyone i, I want to learn English so please can you help me in ( wraitwriting , speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks Dear friends Hello everyone, I want to learn English so please can you help me in writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks

Dear friends , Hello everyone i, I want to learn English so pleas can you please help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English so can you please help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks

Dear friends Hello Hey everyone i, I want to learn English, so pleas can you please help me in ( wrait with writing ,speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks! Hey everyone, I want to learn English, so can you please help me with writing ,speaking , and vocabulary? Thanks!

Dear friends, Hello everyone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) . Thanks Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English, so please can you help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary. Thanks

Dear friends , Hello everyone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ? Thanks. Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English, so please can you help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks.

Include a question mark when you're asking a question. Also, you should probably check the spelling of long words in a dictionary. Knowing how to spell words in English often isn't intuitive, unfortunately.

Dear friends Hello everyone i want to learn English so please can you help me with wraiting ,speking and vocabullary Thanks


Dear friends , Hello everyone i, I want to learn English so please can you, can you please help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary ? Thanks. Dear friends, Hello everyone, I want to learn English, can you please help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary? Thanks.

1. If you’re writing this like a letter, there should be an indent after “Dear friends,” 2. The way you phrased it can sound a bit odd, and depending on your tone can be taken as rude. A better way to phrase it is to drop the “so” and rephrase “please can you help me” to “can you please help me” 3. When using commas in lists, they go after every item in the list except for the final item, and an “an” goes before the final item 4. Also some spelling errors here

Dear friends , Hello, everyone iI want to learn English, so please can you help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary . Thanks. Dear friends, Hello, everyone I want to learn English, so please can you help me with writing, speaking, and vocabulary. Thanks.

I corrected "dear friends" as if you were writing a letter.

Dear friends Hello everyone i want to learn English so please can you help me with wraitting ,speking and vocabullary Thanks


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