The oOne and the Only The One and the Only

Titles usually have non-trivial words capitalized

The oOne and the Only The One and Only

Usually said this way, but I don't think your way is wrong either

The oOne and the Only The One and Only

Using "the" twice makes it seem like there are two different things you are talking about.

I had my first cat in mywhen I was 8 years old and named her "Maomao". I had my first cat when I was 8 years old and named her "Maomao".

I had my first cat in mywhen I was 8 years old and (I) named her "Maomao". I had my first cat when I was 8 years old and (I) named her "Maomao".

I had my first cat in my 8when I was eight years old and named her "Maomao". I had my first cat when I was eight years old and named her "Maomao".

The pattern is "when I was x years old", instead of using "in".

"Maomao" in Chinese means furry. "Maomao" in Chinese means furry.

I think you mean furry? Fury means anger haha.

"Maomao" in Chinese means "furry". "Maomao" in Chinese means "furry".

It was a surprised that my parents gave me. It was a surprise that my parents gave me.

It was a surprised that my parents gave me. It was a surprise that my parents gave me.

Surprise is the noun. Surprised is the adjective

It was a surprised that my parents gave me. It was a surprise that my parents gave me.

I had no idea what was her type was, I think pit was Persian or something. I had no idea what her type was, I think it was Persian or something.

I had no idea what was her type was, I think persian or something. I had no idea what her type was, I think persian or something.

Or "I have no idea what type/kind (of cat) she was"

I had no idea what was her typebreed she was, I think pa Persian or something. I had no idea what breed she was, I think a Persian or something.

We usually speak of a "breed" of cat or dog, at least in the English I speak. You could also say: - what kind of cat she was - what type of cat she was Also there is a mistake in the word order. "What was her type?" is the way we would ask a question. But if "what" is being used as a relative pronoun, it should be "what type she was". If you're interested, here is a link that has some examples: https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/relative-clauses/

She had a beautiful fury in with a color somewhere between yellow and white. She had a beautiful fur with a color somewhere between yellow and white.

She had a beautiful fury in that was (a color) between yellow and white. She had beautiful fur that was (a color) between yellow and white.

She had a beautiful fury, in between yellow and white. She had beautiful fur, in between yellow and white.

You could also say "She had a beautiful coat of fur", or just "She had a beautiful coat".

AShe also had a round head with pure big blue eyes. She also had a round head with pure big blue eyes.

She didn't meowing a lot. She didn't meow a lot.

She didn't meowing a lot. She didn't meow a lot.

She didn't meowing a lot. She didn't meow a lot.

There is a mistake in forming the past tense, it should be "she wasn't meowing a lot" for the continuous or "she didn't meow a lot" for the simple. Here we should use the simple tense. Here's an example of how to form the tense, if you are interested: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/past-simple-i-worked?q=Past+simple%3A+form . The reason why to use the simple tense here is given under "Single or habitual events or states" on the page I linked.

Most of the time she laid on the chair like an elegant princess. Most of the time she laid on the chair like an elegant princess.

Most of the time she laid on the chair like an elegant princess. Most of the time she laid on the chair like an elegant princess.

Most of time she laid oin the chair like a elegant princess. Most of time she laid in the chair like a elegant princess.

We lie "in" a chair, but we lie "on" a bed.

But every time you shakedook any jars, she will ran to you immediately. But every time you shook any jars, she ran to you immediately.

But every time you shaked anyook a jars, she willould raun to you immediately. But every time you shook a jar, she would run to you immediately.

But every time you shakedook any jars, she willould raun to you immediately. But every time you shook any jar, she would run to you immediately.

- "shake" is an irregular verb, the past simple should be "shook" - you can use "would" to talk about habitual actions in the past: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/would

It' was not long that I had her company, and I cried so hard when she passed away. It was not long that I had her company, and I cried so hard when she passed away.

It's not long that I had her company,She didn't accompany me for long, and I cried so hard when she passed away. She didn't accompany me for long, and I cried so hard when she passed away.

I think it sounds more natural this way

It's not long that I had her company didn't enjoy her company for very long, I cried so hard when she passed away. I didn't enjoy her company for very long, I cried so hard when she passed away.

I missed her so much. I miss her so much.

I missed her so much. I miss her so much.

"Missed" is past tense, which would imply that you used to miss her, but you don't miss her anymore