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092402 - Where could I learn English in person?

Today I just spent the whole day on my computer to catch my homework due. Yet, I still waste lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed it again and again. Next time I would ask others' advice when I was stuck in a bottleneck.

Where is a good place to learn English? I watched some videos about how to behave in a bar. But I lack the courage to go to a bar alone. Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who only talk with me naturally in Mandarin. I love Mandarin, it's a part of my spirit, but it's a comfort zone, I mean that studying in a different country gives me more chances to discover diversity, why just clone the same situation?

I have to deal with issues in English. I think I should create some situations to push myself to practice. I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.

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092402 - Where could I learn English in person?

Where is a good place to learn English?

I watched some videos about how to behave in a bar.

But I lack the courage to go to a bar alone.

I have to deal with issues in English.

I think I should create some situations to push myself to practice.

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tana_gao

Sept. 25, 2022

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Yet, I still wasted lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed itcutting down my work again and again.

I'm a bit confused about the tenses in the original sentence. If my corrected version isn't what you meant, please let me know in the comments. :P

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Hello lunabunn, thanks for your supporting feedback! I love your correction style!

092402 - Where could I learn English in person?


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092402 - Where couldan I learn English in person? 092402 - Where can I learn English in person?

Today I just spent the whole day on my computer to catch my homework due.


Today, I just spent the whole day on my computer to catchmeet my homework due date. Today, I just spent the whole day on my computer to meet my homework due date.

Make sure to set off introductory phrases with commas.

Today I just spent the whole day on my computer to catcfinish my homework, which was due. Today I just spent the whole day on my computer to finish my homework, which was due.

Yet, I still waste lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed it again and again.


Yet, I still wasted lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed itcutting down my work again and again. Yet, I still wasted lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get perfect grades, cutting down my work again and again.

I'm a bit confused about the tenses in the original sentence. If my corrected version isn't what you meant, please let me know in the comments. :P

Yet, I still waste lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could nodidn't get the perfect grades, so I trimmedited it again and again. Yet, I still waste lots of time worrying about what would happen if I didn't get perfect grades, so I edited it again and again.

Next time I would ask others' advice when I was stuck in a bottleneck.


Next time I wouldill ask others' advice when I was stuck in a bottleneck. Next time I will ask others' advice when I was stuck in a bottleneck.

If this a thought you are currently having, will is correct. If this is a thought you had earlier when you were doing your homework, you could say something like "I thought next time, I would ask ..."

Where is a good place to learn English?


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I watched some videos about how to behave in a bar.


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But I lack the courage to go to a bar alone.


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Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who only talk with me naturally in Mandarin.


Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who usually only talk with me naturallyto me in Mandarin. Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who usually only talk to me in Mandarin.

Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who only talk with me naturally in Mandarin. Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who only talk with me in Mandarin.

I love Mandarin, it's a part of my spirit, but it's a comfort zone, I mean that studying in a different country gives me more chances to discover diversity, why just clone the same situation?


I love Mandarin, --it's a part of my spirit, --but it's a comfort zone, I mean that. What I'm trying to say is: studying in a different country gives me more chances to discovencounter diversity, so why just cloneput myself in the same situation as back home? I love Mandarin--it's a part of my spirit--but it's a comfort zone. What I'm trying to say is: studying in a different country gives me more chances to encounter diversity, so why put myself in the same situation as back home?

This kind of sentence structure works fine in Mandarin, but English is a lot more restrictive when it comes to stringing clauses together. A lot of times, you will find that you need to split your sentences and add extra bits to clear up what you're talking about.

I love Mandarin, it's a part of my spirit, but it's a comfort zone,. I mean that, studying in a different country gives me more chances to discover diversity, why just clonestay in the same situation? I love Mandarin, it's a part of my spirit, but it's a comfort zone. I mean, studying in a different country gives me more chances to discover diversity, why just stay in the same situation?

I have to deal with issues in English.


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I have to deal with my issues in English. I have to deal with my issues in English.

I think I should create some situations to push myself to practice.


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I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.


I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on. I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.

I personally think "take any chance" or "grab any chance" might be slightly more common. This is also fine, though, and others may disagree, so I left it as is.

I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on. I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.

Good idea!

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