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Bike sharing

In recent years, the economic development of cities and towns over China has grown rapidly, in which public services and infrastructures has been improved to meet people’s demands better, especially the transportation systems. Roads has been built almost everywhere, even the remote rural areas, so people can drive car back and forth between their homes and workplaces. However, with the increasing number of automobiles, accidents and traffic jaws increased which impacts people’s life. Also, out of the concern to air pollution that is mainly caused by the exhaust gas, riding bike is a great choice for people. In this context, the appearance of bike sharing immediately draw people’s attention. It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but the other say it also has many disadvantages. In my view, bike sharing is an innovative idea and an environmental friendly solution.

There are many positive effects. First, bike sharing is helpful for environmental protection. Riding bike does not harm to the air and the environment. Second, it is a healthy lifestyle. No matter in busy cities or countrysides, people can ride bikes to work and schools and back to homes, by which can help them keep healthy. Third, its low prices and locations near to crowded places, such as communities, bus stations, central business districts, schools and universities, make it popular with the general public. Last but not least, it is a wise way to gradually improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment. Day by day, not only they would acquire a habit, but also they would influence people around them. With the new choice, I believe more and more people would like the idea is both good for nature and human.

As the other side of the some coin, bike sharing also has some headaches. Among all, the most outstanding problem is random parking of bikes. According to news reports, many bikes are parked by the sides of every streets and roads randomly, which causes a lot of accidents and makes the cities seem to be in a mess. Besides, some bikes were stolen. Without strict rules and regulations for using the bikes, many residents take these bikes as their own properties, some one even steal them to sale. Those negative events urge related men, companies and governments to take action to maintain the public order and set up new laws and rules to ensure the proper functions of bike sharing plans. As long as those problems are addressed, the bike sharing must be more efficient and convenient.

To sum up, the bike sharing is still on the start stage which needs to be improved and strengthened. Although there are some disadvantages of it, its advantages are more attractive and its great potentials needs to be explored in the future.

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In my view, bike sharing is an innovative idea and an environmental friendly solution.

There are many positive effects.

First, bike sharing is helpful for environmental protection.

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Bike sharing

In recent years, the economic development of cities and towns over China has grown rapidly, in which public services and infrastructures has been improved to meet people’s demands better, especially the transportation systems.

In my view, bike sharing is an innovative idea and an environmental friendly solution.

There are many positive effects.

First, bike sharing is helpful for environmental protection.

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Dec. 1, 2022

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Dec. 1, 2022

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With the new choice, I believe more and more people would like the idea of bike sharing, as it is both good for nature and humans.

I added back in the bike sharing as it makes the what you're talking about easy to follow.

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In recent years, the economic development of cities and towns over China has grown rapidly, in which public services and infrastructures has been improved to meet people’s demands better, especially the transportation systems.


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Roads has been built almost everywhere, even the remote rural areas, so people can drive car back and forth between their homes and workplaces.


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However, with the increasing number of automobiles, accidents and traffic jaws increased which impacts people’s life.


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Also, out of the concern to air pollution that is mainly caused by the exhaust gas, riding bike is a great choice for people.


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In this context, the appearance of bike sharing immediately draw people’s attention.


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It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but the other say it also has many disadvantages.


It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but the others say it also has many disadvantages. It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but others say it also has many disadvantages.

It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but the others say it also has many disadvantages. It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but others say it also has many disadvantages.

In my view, bike sharing is an innovative idea and an environmental friendly solution.


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There are many positive effects.


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First, bike sharing is helpful for environmental protection.


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Riding bike does not harm to the air and the environment.


Riding bikes does not harm to the air andor the environment. Riding bikes does not harm the air or the environment.

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Second, it is a healthy lifestyle.


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No matter in busy cities or countrysides, people can ride bikes to work and schools and back to homes, by which can help them keep healthy.


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Third, its low prices and locations near to crowded places, such as communities, bus stations, central business districts, schools and universities, make it popular with the general public.


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Third, its low prices and locations near to crowded places, such as communities, bus stations, central business districts, schools and universities, make it popular with the general public. Third, its low prices and locations near crowded places, such as communities, bus stations, central business districts, schools and universities, make it popular with the general public.

Last but not least, it is a wise way to gradually improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment.


Last but not leastly, it is a wise way to gradually improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment. Lastly, it is a wise way to gradually improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment.

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Day by day, not only they would acquire a habit, but also they would influence people around them.


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With the new choice, I believe more and more people would like the idea is both good for nature and human.


With the new choice, I believe more and more people would like the idea of bike sharing, as it is both good for nature and humans. I believe more and more people would like the idea of bike sharing, as it is both good for nature and humans.

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As the other side of the some coin, bike sharing also has some headaches.


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Among all, the most outstanding problem is random parking of bikes.


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According to news reports, many bikes are parked by the sides of every streets and roads randomly, which causes a lot of accidents and makes the cities seem to be in a mess.


According to news reports, many bikes are randomly parked by the sides of every streets and roads randomly, which causes a lot of accidents, and makes the cities seem to be into a mess. According to news reports many bikes are randomly parked by the sides of streets and roads, which causes a lot of accidents, and makes the cities into a mess.

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Besides, some bikes were stolen.


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Without strict rules and regulations for using the bikes, many residents take these bikes as their own properties, some one even steal them to sale.


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Those negative events urge related men, companies and governments to take action to maintain the public order and set up new laws and rules to ensure the proper functions of bike sharing plans.


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As long as those problems are addressed, the bike sharing must be more efficient and convenient.


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To sum up, the bike sharing is still on the start stage which needs to be improved and strengthened.


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Although there are some disadvantages of it, its advantages are more attractive and its great potentials needs to be explored in the future.


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