Feb. 23, 2022
Right now I'm working in the mountains, but it really feels like holidays. I'm hired by a family who needs a nanny to take care of their two kids. The thing is, the kids are almost all the time skiing with the parents, and meanwhile I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading. When one of the kids is too tired, they let them with me, but I don't need to entertain the kid because he plays in the snow. In the afternoon we go down to our chalet, I supervise the kids while they shower and let them watch TV, or we play some games. The parents stay in the mountain and maybe have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner. So far, this is the easiest job I had in my whole life, I wish they hired me for more than one week.
The thing is, the kids are alskiing most allof the time skiing with the parents, and meanwhile I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
The thing is, the kids are skiing most of the time with the parents, while I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
When one of the kids is too tired, they let themstay with me, but I don't need to entertain the kid because he plays in the snow.
When one kid is too tired, they stay with me, but I don't need to entertain the kid because he plays in the snow.
In the afternoon we go down to our chalet,. I supervise the kids while they shower and let them watch TV, or we play some games.
In the afternoon we go down to our chalet. I supervise the kids while they shower and let them watch TV or we play some games.
The parents stay in the mountain and maybeprobably have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner.
The parents stay in the mountain and probably have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner.
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So far, this is the easiest job I had in my whole life,. I wish they hired me for more than one week.
So far, this is the easiest job I had in my whole life. I wish they hired me for more than one week.
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Holidays in the Mountains
I'm not sure about other places, but on the East Coast we tend to only use "Holidays" to refer to Christmas Eve, Christmas, and New Year. We tend to use the word "vacation" instead of "holidays" in other occasions.
Right now I'm working in the mountains, but it really feels like holidays.
I'm was hired by a family who needs a nanny to take care of their two kids.
I was hired by a family who needs a nanny to take care of their two kids.
The thing is, the kids are almost all the time skiing with their parents, and meanwhilelmost all the time, and, while they're doing that, I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
The thing is, the kids are skiing with their parents almost all the time, and, while they're doing that, I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
When one of the kids is too tired, they letave them with me, but I don't need to entertain the kidhim because he plays in the snow.
When one of the kids is too tired, they leave them with me, but I don't need to entertain him because he plays in the snow.
In the afternoon we go down to ourthe chalet, and I supervise the kids while they shower and let them watch TV, or we play some games.
In the afternoon we go down to the chalet and I supervise the kids while they shower and let them watch TV, or we play some games.
The parents stay ion the mountain and maybe have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner.
The parents stay on the mountain and maybe have some drinks or a fancy dinner.
So far, this is the easiest job I've had in my whole life,; I wish they hired me for more than onea week.
So far, this is the easiest job I've had in my whole life; I wish they hired me for more than a week.
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Holidays in the mountains
Right now I'm working in the mountains, but it really feels like holidays.
I'm hired by a family who needs a nanny to take care of their two kids.
The thing is, the kids are almost all the timeconstantly skiing with the parents, and meanwhile I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
The thing is the kids are almost constantly skiing with the parents, while I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
Whenever one of the kids is too tired, they let them withave him to me, but I don't need to entertain the kid because he plays in the snow.
Whenever one of the kids is too tired, they leave him to me, but I don't need to entertain the kid because he plays in the snow.
IOn the afternoon, we go down to our chalet, where I supervise the kids while they shower and. Then, I let them watch TV, or we play some games together.
On the afternoon, we go down to our chalet where I supervise the kids while they shower. Then, I let them watch TV or we play some games together.
The parents stay in the mountains and maybe have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner.
The parents stay in the mountains and maybe have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner.
So far, this is the easiest job I have had in my whole life, I wish they had hired me for more than one week. So far, this is the easiest job I have had in my whole life, I wish they had hired me for more than one week.
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The thing is, the kids are almost all the time skiing with the parents, and meanwhile I'm in a restaurant drinking coffee and reading.
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When one of the kids is too tired, they let them with me, but I don't need to entertain the kid because he plays in the snow.
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In the afternoon we go down to our chalet, I supervise the kids while they shower and let them watch TV, or we play some games.
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In the afternoon we go down to our chalet |
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The parents stay in the mountain and maybe have some drinks or go to a fancy dinner.
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So far, this is the easiest job I had in my whole life, I wish they hired me for more than one week. So far, this is the easiest job I have had in my whole life, I wish they had hired me for more than one week. So far, this is the easiest job I have had in my whole life, I wish they had hired me for more than one week.
So far, this is the easiest job I've had in my whole life
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