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Yesterday my two cats waked me up about 9 o`clock in the morning. They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, rubbing with their noses at my hands. It was very nice. Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sick stomach. First two hours awakening I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank water and read Telegram. Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleep. I waked up again when it was dark outside. I felt better, but I still had headache. I had dinner and went out to buy a medicine for my head and some food. Then I walked in the dark and snow about twenty minutes, weakened, returned home and fell asleep again. I waked up once more about midnight, felt better. Thereafter during the night I was listening "Alice in Wanderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep... But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking...

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Yesterday

It was very nice.

I had dinner and went out to buy a medicine for my head and some food.

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Yesterday my two cats waked me up about 9 o`clock in the morning.


Yesterday my two cats waoked me up at about 9 o`'clock in the morning. Yesterday my two cats woke me up at about 9 o'clock in the morning.

Yesterday my two cats waoked me up abroutnd 9 o`'clock in the morning. Yesterday my two cats woke me up around 9 o'clock in the morning.

They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, rubbing with their noses at my hands.


They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for carespets and cuddles, and rubbing my hands with their noses at my hands. They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for pets and cuddles, and rubbing my hands with their noses.

Or "They were purring" Carress if for lovers, pet is for animals.

They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, and rubbing with their noses against my hands. They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, and rubbing with their noses against my hands.

It was very nice.


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Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sick stomach.


Then I got up, gave food to the cats, and (rejoiced / celebrated) that I was feeling better than then day before, when I had had a hell of a(horrible / horrific / massive / killer) headache and sickan upset stomach. Then I got up, gave food to the cats, and (rejoiced / celebrated) that I was feeling better than the day before, when I had had a (horrible / horrific / massive / killer) headache and an upset stomach.

I would avoid "hell of a" unless talking with close friends. It comes off as very casual and some people may find it rude.

Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better than then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sickan upset stomach. Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better than the day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and an upset stomach.

First two hours awakening I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank water and read Telegram.


For the first two hours awakeningfter I woke up, I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank waterm and read Telegram. For the first two hours after I woke up, I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank waterm and read Telegram.

FI spent my first two hours awakening Ihours learneding Italian with Duolingo, drainking water and reading Telegram. I spent my first two waking hours learning Italian with Duolingo, drinking water and reading Telegram.

Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleep.


Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleepstarted to hurt again, so I (went back to sleep / took a nap). Then I worked a bit and my head started to hurt again, so I (went back to sleep / took a nap).

Then I worked a bit time and my head became sickfor a while before my head started to hurt again, so I fell awent to sleep. Then I worked for a while before my head started to hurt again, so I went to sleep.

I waked up again when it was dark outside.


I waoked up again when it was dark outside. I woke up again when it was dark outside.

I waked upWhen I awoke again when, it was dark outside. When I awoke again, it was dark outside.

I felt better, but I still had headache.


I felt better, but I still had a headache. I felt better, but I still had a headache.

I felt better, but I still had a headache. I felt better, but I still had a headache.

I had dinner and went out to buy a medicine for my head and some food.


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I had dinner and went out to buy apain medicine for my headation and some food. I had dinner and went out to buy pain medication and some food.

Then I walked in the dark and snow about twenty minutes, weakened, returned home and fell asleep again.


Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes, weakened, before I got too tired and returned home andwhere I fell asleep again. Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes before I got too tired and returned home where I fell asleep again.

Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes, weakened,. Then, feeling weak, I returned home and fell asleep again. I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes. Then, feeling weak, I returned home and fell asleep again.

I waked up once more about midnight, felt better.


I waoked up once more at about midnight, felteling better. I woke up once more at about midnight, feeling better.

I waked up once moreWhen I next woke up abroutnd midnight, I felt better. When I next woke up around midnight, I felt better.

Thereafter during the night I was listening "Alice in Wanderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep...


Thereafter during theat night I was listening to "Alice in Waonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamplayed "Hogwarts Mystery," and tried to sleep... That night I was listening to "Alice in Wonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, played "Hogwarts Mystery," and tried to sleep...

"Thereafter" is very, very formal.

Thereafter, during the night, I was listeninged to "Alice in Waonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamplayed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep... Thereafter, during the night, I listened to "Alice in Wonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, played "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep...

But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking...


But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to the two cups of coffee, which I had I druank after my walking... But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to the two cups of coffee I drank after my walk...

But I couldn`'t, maybe because ofperhaps due to my sad thoughts and maybe due tohaving drunk two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking... But I couldn't, perhaps due to my sad thoughts and having drunk two cups of coffee after my walk...

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