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What is flash-panning?

Have you heard this before? Recently, i’ discovered this when I was bored, and i stop to read this and found out more. Seems like a meet with two people, of course, seems romantic, but both don’t want something serious, so, in the beginning of a relationship, the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up. Is literally like the relationships current. And particularly, It is more common in younger people. What do you guys think about this? I’am younger too and it is hard to me, find a relationship with people who want something serious and lasting.

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What is flash-panning?

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What is flash-panning?


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Have you heard this before?


Have you heard this before?ere is a new topic. Here is a new topic.

Have you heard (about) this before? Have you heard (about) this before?

It sounds very casual to omit the "about" - you normally wouldn't in writing, but people might when speaking.

Have you heard about this before? Have you heard about this before?

Have you heard of this before? Have you heard of this before?

For "heard ___" the blank would be what/who you heard from Usually "heard of ____" involves the topic

ALSO POSSIBLE: Have you heard this term before? ALSO POSSIBLE: Have you heard this term before?

ALSO POSSIBLE: Have you heard of flash-panning previously?

Recently, i’ discovered this when I was bored, and i stop to read this and found out more.


Recently, i’I've discovered thisat when I wasam bored, and iI stop to read this and fou, I find out more. Recently, I've discovered that when I am bored and I stop to read, I find out more.

Recently, i’I discovered this when I was bored, and iI stopped to read about this and found out more. Recently, I discovered this when I was bored, and I stopped to read about this and found out more.

Recently, i’I discovered this when I was bored, and iI stopped to read about this and found out more. Recently, I discovered this when I was bored, and I stopped to read about this and found out more.

Recently, i’I discovered this whilen I was bored, and iI stopped to read this and fouind out more. Recently, I discovered this while I was bored, and I stopped to read and find out more.

Since "read" and "find" are with to "stopped" which is already in past tense, you don't need them to be in past tense as well

Recently, i’I discovered this when I was bored, and i stopped to read about this andto found out more. Recently, I discovered this when bored, and stopped to read about this to found out more.

Seems like a meet with two people, of course, seems romantic, but both don’t want something serious, so, in the beginning of a relationship, the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up.


Seems like a meet with two people, of course, seems romantic, but both don’t want something serious, so, in the beginning of a relationship, the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up. Seems like a meet with two people, of course, seems romantic, but both don’t want something serious, so, in the beginning of a relationship, the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up.

SIt seems like a meeting with two people, which of course, seems romantic, but both don’tneither want something serious, so, in the beginning of a relationship, when the first troubles that appear, even something easy to solve, they just give up. It seems like a meeting with two people, which of course, seems romantic, but neither want something serious, so, in the beginning of a relationship, when the first troubles appear, even something easy to solve, they just give up.

SIt seems to be like a meet withing between two people, o. Of course, seemit sounds romantic, but both don’tneither want something serious, s. So, in the beginning of a relationship, when the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up. It seems to be like a meeting between two people. Of course, it sounds romantic, but neither want something serious. So, in the beginning of a relationship, when the first troubles appear, something easy to solve, they just give up.

Be careful with double negatives. It's better to say "neither want" than "both don't want".

SIt seems likethat a meet withing between two people, of course, seemswould be romantic, but both don’tneither want something serious, so, in the beginning of atheir relationship, after the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up. It seems that a meeting between two people, of course, would be romantic, but neither want something serious, so, in the beginning of their relationship, after the first troubles that appear, something easy to solve, they just give up.

Needs a subject so add "it" at the beginning "Meet with ___" would be a verb, and "meeting between" is a noun (I believe that meeting between is for 2 people that aren't you and meeting with is when you're part of it, but I'm not entirely sure) After seems you use the verb would Replace "both dont'" with "neither" "Their" sounds better than "a"

SIt seems like a meeting with two people, o. Of course, it seems romantic, but. However, both don’t want someanything serious, so, in the beginning of atheir relationship, twhe firstn troubles that appear, if something not easy to solve, they just give up. It seems like a meeting with two people. Of course, it seems romantic. However, both don’t want anything serious, so, in the beginning of their relationship, when troubles appear, if something not easy to solve, they just give up.

Is literally like the relationships current.


It is literally like the relationships current(?). It is literally like the relationships (?).

Not quite sure what you meant by current here.

Is literally like the relationships current. Is literally like the relationship current.

It's literally like the relationships currently. It's literally like relationships currently.

Or "current relationships"

Is literally like the relationships currentMany current relations seems like this. Many current relations seems like this.

And particularly, It is more common in younger people.


And particularly, Iit is more common inamong younger people. And particularly, it is more common among younger people.

And particularly, Iit is more common in younger people. And particularly, it is more common in younger people.

And particularly, Iit is more common in younger people. And particularly, it is more common in younger people.

And particularly, ItThis is more common inamong younger people than in older folks. This is more common among younger people than in older folks.

What do you guys think about this?


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I’am younger too and it is hard to me, find a relationship with people who want something serious and lasting.


I’am younger too and it is hard to me,for me to find a relationship with people who want something serious and lasting. I’m younger too and it is hard for me to find a relationship with people who want something serious and lasting.

Again "younger" without a point of comparison is pretty casual/slangy. I think you have a pretty casual tone for this piece, so it fits, but formally it should just be "young"

I’am younger too and it is hard to me,for me to find a relationship with people who want something serious and lasting. I’m younger too and it is hard for me to find a relationship with people who want something serious and lasting.

I’am'm also younger too, and it is hard to me,for me to find a relationship with peoplsomeone who wants something serious and lasting. I'm also younger, and it is hard for me to find a relationship with someone who wants something serious and lasting.

"[adjective] for me" instead of "[adjective] to me" "Someone" for one unknown person

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