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Shaobing
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I tried to find the English name for this food, but failed. So I just call it Shaobing, based on the tone of its Chinese name.
The small shop in the video is just 100 meters away from my apartment. It's one of my favourites recently.
I like to buy four small shaobing at one time, which exactly amounts to 10 yuan. There are several different flavors. Sometimes I would order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors.
The owner is very kind, never taking my choice as a bother.
When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said, "Go ahead! If your friends want to learn how to do the shaobing, I can teach them in person."
After I told him I just filmed this due to curiosity and fun, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video.
When my shaobing are ready, I can’t wait to take them home and enjoy them with my homemade coffee.
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P.S.
If there are any English mistakes in the video, feel free to tell me.
Thanks in advance again!
I noticed an instance where I read the word "and" in a way that it should have been more lightly.
Shaobing
This entry is about this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/C8xLpwDuuVY
I tried to find the English name for this food, but failed.
So I just call it Shaobing, based on the tone of its Chinese name.
The small shop in the video is just 100 meters away from my apartment.
It's one of my favourites recently.
I like to buy four small shaobing at one time, which exactly amountsamounts exactly to 10 yuan.
There are several different flavors.
Sometimes I would order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors.
"Sometimes" already adds the conditional context so you don't need to have "would" in there!
The owner is very kind, never taking my choiceorder as a bother.
"Choice" is a little too stiff. Better alternatives would be "my order" or "my selection".
When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said,: "Go ahead!
Instead of "," you should use ":" here. This is a little more advance, but since your quote is a complete statement and not just a partial phrase we use ":"!
After I told him I just filmed this due to curiosity and fun, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video.
When my shaobing awere ready, I can’ouldn't wait to take them home and enjoy them with my homemade coffee.
Minor tweaks! The rest of your post describing your encounter is in the past tense, so changes made here reflect that.
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Good job! TIL what shaobing is!
I didn't notice any errors in the video so good work there too!
Shaobing
This entry is about this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/C8xLpwDuuVY
I tried to find the English name for this food, but failed.
So I’ll just call it Shaobing, based on the tonesound of its Chinese name.
“I’ll” is better because you’re telling us what you’re calling it in this post, not what you call it all the time.
The small shop in the video is just 100 meters away from my apartment.
It's been one of my favourites recently.
Alternative:
It’s one of my favorites these days.
I like to buy four small shaobing at onea time, which exactly amounts to 10 yuan.
Suggestion:
which costs exactly 10 yuan.
There are several different flavors.
Sometimes I would order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors.
It’s better without “would,” since you’re describing what you still do habitually now.
The owner is very kind, never taking my choice (?) as a bother.
I’m not sure what you mean by “choice” here. Why might your choice be taken as a bother?
When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said, "Go ahead!
If your friends want to learn how to do thmake shaobing, I can teach them in person."
After I told him I was just filmeding this {due to curiosity and fun | out of curiosity and for fun}, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video.
When my shaobing are ready, I can’t wait to take them home and enjoy them with my homemade coffee.
P.S.
If there are any English mistakes in the video, feel free to tell me.
Thanks in advance again!
I noticed an instance where I read the word "and" in a way that it should have been {more lightly | lighter}.
I didn’t notice this, so I’m not sure what you mean by “more lightly.” 🙂
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I used to buy shaobing from a vendor with an oven like that in Taipei!
One correction for the video: “charcoal” is usually uncountable, so I would say “charcoal burns in the center.”
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@JoeTofu "The owner is very kind, never taking my choice (?) as a bother."
I understood this to mean the time Tammy takes to make her choice.
If that is the case, then maybe slightly different wording would work.
"The owner is very kind. The time I take to make my choice / to choose never bothers him.
"The owner is very kind and is never bothered by how long takes me to make my choice / to choose."
I was pleased to see that you heard the extra "ah" on the end of "and" because that means you can now self correct the pronunciation of that word. That's fantastic!
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I really enjoyed the video!
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So I just call it Shaobing, based on the tone of its Chinese name. So I’ll just call it Shaobing, based on the “I’ll” is better because you’re telling us what you’re calling it in this post, not what you call it all the time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's one of my favourites recently. It's been one of my favourites recently. Alternative: It’s one of my favorites these days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like to buy four small shaobing at one time, which exactly amounts to 10 yuan. I like to buy four small shaobing at Suggestion: which costs exactly 10 yuan. I like to buy four small shaobing at one time, which |
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Sometimes I would order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors. Sometimes I It’s better without “would,” since you’re describing what you still do habitually now. Sometimes I "Sometimes" already adds the conditional context so you don't need to have "would" in there! |
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The owner is very kind, never taking my choice as a bother. The owner is very kind, never taking my choice (?) as a bother. I’m not sure what you mean by “choice” here. Why might your choice be taken as a bother? The owner is very kind, never taking my "Choice" is a little too stiff. Better alternatives would be "my order" or "my selection". |
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When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said, "Go ahead! This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said Instead of "," you should use ":" here. This is a little more advance, but since your quote is a complete statement and not just a partial phrase we use ":"! |
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If your friends want to learn how to do the shaobing, I can teach them in person." If your friends want to learn how to |
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After I told him I just filmed this due to curiosity and fun, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video. After I told him I was just film After I told him I just filmed this due to curiosity and fun, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven |
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When my shaobing are ready, I can’t wait to take them home and enjoy them with my homemade coffee. This sentence has been marked as perfect! When my shaobing Minor tweaks! The rest of your post describing your encounter is in the past tense, so changes made here reflect that. |
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If there are any English mistakes in the video, feel free to tell me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thanks in advance again! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I noticed an instance where I read the word "and" in a way that it should have been more lightly. I noticed an instance where I read the word "and" in a way that I didn’t notice this, so I’m not sure what you mean by “more lightly.” 🙂 |
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