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So I’ll just call it Shaobing, based on the tonesound of its Chinese name. So I’ll just call it Shaobing, based on the sound of its Chinese name.

“I’ll” is better because you’re telling us what you’re calling it in this post, not what you call it all the time.

It's been one of my favourites recently. It's been one of my favourites recently.

Alternative: It’s one of my favorites these days.

I like to buy four small shaobing at onea time, which exactly amounts to 10 yuan. I like to buy four small shaobing at a time, which exactly amounts to 10 yuan.

Suggestion: which costs exactly 10 yuan.

I like to buy four small shaobing at one time, which exactly amountsamounts exactly to 10 yuan. I like to buy four small shaobing at one time, which amounts exactly to 10 yuan.

Sometimes I would order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors. Sometimes I order four different flavors, and sometimes I choose two or three of my favorite flavors.

It’s better without “would,” since you’re describing what you still do habitually now.

Sometimes I would order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors. Sometimes I order four different flavors, and sometimes I would choose two or three of my favorite flavors.

"Sometimes" already adds the conditional context so you don't need to have "would" in there!

The owner is very kind, never taking my choice (?) as a bother. The owner is very kind, never taking my choice (?) as a bother.

I’m not sure what you mean by “choice” here. Why might your choice be taken as a bother?

The owner is very kind, never taking my choiceorder as a bother. The owner is very kind, never taking my order as a bother.

"Choice" is a little too stiff. Better alternatives would be "my order" or "my selection".

When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said,: "Go ahead! When I asked him if I could film the process for my friends, he smiled and said: "Go ahead!

Instead of "," you should use ":" here. This is a little more advance, but since your quote is a complete statement and not just a partial phrase we use ":"!

If your friends want to learn how to do thmake shaobing, I can teach them in person." If your friends want to learn how to make shaobing, I can teach them in person."

After I told him I was just filmeding this {due to curiosity and fun | out of curiosity and for fun}, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video. After I told him I was just filming this {due to curiosity and fun | out of curiosity and for fun}, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video.

After I told him I just filmed this due to curiosity and fun, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven, which you can see a little bit in the video. After I told him I just filmed this due to curiosity and fun, he showed me the fun rotating function of the oven which you can see a little bit in the video.

When my shaobing awere ready, I can’ouldn't wait to take them home and enjoy them with my homemade coffee. When my shaobing were ready, I couldn't wait to take them home and enjoy them with my homemade coffee.

Minor tweaks! The rest of your post describing your encounter is in the past tense, so changes made here reflect that.

I noticed an instance where I read the word "and" in a way that it should have been {more lightly | lighter}. I noticed an instance where I read the word "and" in a way that should have been {more lightly | lighter}.

I didn’t notice this, so I’m not sure what you mean by “more lightly.” 🙂