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I started trying an online English conversation class from this week, and today's topic was the univers. The teacher asked each student if we were insrested in the universe when we were little or what the hardest thing would be for the astronauts.

Personnaly, being a food lover, I'm sure that I'm going to miss Japanese foods. Though the technology of space food has been développed and studies continuously, the restrain to the choice of daily diet should exist, which is unthinkable for me. Their curiosity of sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to the society should be outweigning the interest for food. It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personnality, strong and tough physics, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mental matureness, intelligence etc. Thus, it is a extreme priviledge to be able to go out of Earth and see what's there in the universe.

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The universe


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The uUniverse The Universe

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I started trying an online English conversation class from this week, and today's topic was the univers.


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This week I started trying an online English conversation class from this week, and today's topic was the universe. This week I started trying an online English conversation class, and today's topic was the universe.

The teacher asked each student if we were insrested in the universe when we were little or what the hardest thing would be for the astronauts.


The teacher asked each student questions like if we were insterested in the universe when we were little or what the hardest thingpart would be for theof being an astronauts. The teacher asked each student questions like if we were interested in the universe when we were little or what the hardest part would be of being an astronaut.

With the structure of your original sentence, the conjunction should be "and" not "or."

The teacher asked each student if we were insterested in the universe when we were little or what the hardest thing would be for the astronauts. The teacher asked each student if we were interested in the universe when we were little or what the hardest thing would be for astronauts.

The teacher asked each student if we were insterested in the universe when we were little, or what the hardest thing would be for the astronauts. The teacher asked each student if we were interested in the universe when we were little, or what the hardest thing would be for astronauts.

Personnaly, being a food lover, I'm sure that I'm going to miss Japanese foods.


Personnally, being a food loverie, I'm sure that I'm going to miss Japanese foods. Personally, being a foodie, I'm sure that I'm going to miss Japanese food.

"food" in this sense is always used in the singular form.

Personnally, being a food lover, I'm sure that I'm going to would miss Japanese foods. Personally, being a food lover, I'm sure that I would miss Japanese food.

Subjunctive casse

Personnally, being a food lover, I'm sure that I'm going to would miss Japanese foods. Personally, being a food lover, I'm sure that I would miss Japanese food.

If you say "I'm going to", it sounds like you are an astronaut and you will go to space! "I would" sounds more hypothetical, like you would IF you did go to space.

Though the technology of space food has been développed and studies continuously, the restrain to the choice of daily diet should exist, which is unthinkable for me.


Though thespace food technology of space food has been déevelopped and studiesd continuously, there would be restraints to theone's choice of daily diet should exist, which is unthinkable for me. Though space food technology has been developed and studied continuously, there would be restraints to one's choice of daily diet, which is unthinkable for me.

Though the technology of space food has beenis continuously déevelopped and studies continuously, the restrain to the choice ofd, the restrictions of a daily diet should exist, which is unthinkable for me. Though the technology of space food is continuously developed and studied, the restrictions of a daily diet should exist, which is unthinkable for me.

Though the technology of space food has been déevelopped and studieis continuously, the studied, there is a restraint to the choice of your daily diet should exist, which is unthinkable for me. Though the technology of space food has been developed and is continuously studied, there is a restraint to the choice of your daily diet, which is unthinkable for me.

"should exist" => "there is" or "there would be"

Their curiosity of sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to the society should be outweigning the interest for food.


TFor someone to become an astronaut, their curiosity ofand sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to the society should be outweigningh their interest for food. For someone to become an astronaut, their curiosity and sense of duty to discover the truth or contribute to society should outweigh their interest for food.

It is unclear who "they" is here, which is why I saw fit to add that first part. Saying "or to" is fine but because there are two layers of "or" here it's clearer in my opinion to just say "or contribute."

Their curiosity ofand sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to the society should be outweigningh the interest ofor food. Their curiosity and sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to society should outweigh the interest of food.

Their curiosity ofand sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to the society should bemust outweigningh their interest forin food. Their curiosity and sense of duty to discover the truth or to contribute to society must outweigh their interest in food.

It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personnality, strong and tough physics, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mental matureness, intelligence etc.


It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personnality, a strong and tough physicsque, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mental matureness, intelligence, etc. It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personality, a strong and tough physique, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mental matureness, intelligence, etc.

"Physique" (pronounced fi-ZEEK) is the word you are looking for.

It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personnality, a strong and toughknowledge of physics, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mentemotional maturenessity, intelligence etc. It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personality, a strong knowledge of physics, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), emotional maturity, intelligence etc.

Yes, good eyesight is still a requirement for US astronauts.

It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personnality, a strong and tough physicsque, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mental maturenessity, intelligence, etc. It also seems like becoming an astronaut requires a certain personality, a strong and tough physique, good eyesight (if I'm not mistaken), mental maturity, intelligence, etc.

"physique" is about your body, "physics" is a kind of science.

Thus, it is a extreme priviledge to be able to go out of Earth and see what's there in the universe.


Thus, it is an extreme priviledge to be able to go out ofleave Earth and see what's out there in the universe. Thus, it is an extreme priviledge to be able to leave Earth and see what's out there in the universe.

Thus, it is an extreme priviledge to be able to go out ofleave Earth and see what's out there in the universe. Thus, it is an extreme privilege to be able to leave Earth and see what's out there in the universe.

Thus, it is a extreme priviledge to be able to go out ofleave Earth and see what's there in the universe. Thus, it is a extreme privilege to be able to leave Earth and see what's there in the universe.

"go out of" makes it seem like you're inside the Earth.

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