Why so tired?

asahan2013

Feb. 8, 2026

On the first day, God created the cow and said to it: "I will give you 50 years of life, and you will work tirelessly all day long."
The cow heard this, frowned and said: "This is so much hard work, I'll have to live 50 years in the fields, it's pure torture. Just give me 20 years and take back the remaining 30 years."
God agreed, "Alright, since you've requested it this way."
On the second day, God created the dog and said to it: "I will give you 20 years of life, and your task is to guard the house, and you must keep watch around the clock."
The dog wagged its tail and said softly: "Guard the house? That's so monotonous. I'd rather live just 10 years, give the other 10 years back to you." God smiled and nodded.
On the third day, God created the monkey and gave it 20 years of life, asking it to entertain humans, and perform tricks to make them happy.
The monkey wrinkled its nose and said, "Entertaining others? That's too exhausting. I just want 10 years, and the other 10 years you can keep for yourself."
On the final day, God created humans and said to them: "I will give you 20 years of life, and you can eat, drink, play, and enjoy life."
The human immediately frowned upon hearing this.
"20 years is too short, and I don't want to live like this."
"The extra 30 years of the cow, the dog's leftover 10 years, and the unused 10 years of the monkey, please give them all to me."
"In that way, I can live for 70 years."
God smiled and said, "Alright, I'll grant your wish."
For the first 20 years, we live like humans, enjoying life to the fullest.
The next 30 years, we live like cows, working hard to support our families, then for ten years, we do everything we can entertain our children and make them happy.
And the last ten years are spent like dogs, staying at home, lingering at the door and constantly nagging others.

第一天，上帝创造了奶牛并对它说：我给你50年的寿命，你将终日耕作。
牛听了皱眉说：这么辛苦，简直折磨，给我20年寿命就好，剩下30年你收回。
上帝同意了：“好吧，既然你这样要求。”
第二天，上帝创造了狗并对它说：我给你20年的寿命，你的任务是守卫家门，全天看守。
狗听了摇了摇尾巴，低声说：守门，这么单调，我只要活10年，剩下的10年还给你。
上帝微笑答应了。
第三天，上帝创造了猴子，并给它20年的寿命，要求它逗乐人类。
猴子皱了皱鼻说，逗笑别人，太累了，我要10年寿命足矣。
最后一天，上帝创造了人，对他说：我给你20年寿命，你可以吃喝玩乐，享受生活。
人一听立刻皱起眉头，20年太短，我不愿意这么活下去。
牛多余的30年，狗剩下的10年，猴子剩下的10年都给我吧！
这样，我可以活70年了。
上帝笑了笑说，好吧，我让你如愿以偿。
前20年，像人一样我们尽情享乐，接下来的30年，我们像牛一样，辛苦劳作，养家糊口。再过十年，我们想尽办法逗乐孩子开心。剩下的十年我们过狗的日子，终日在家门口，忍不住对人唠叨。

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Corrections

curious_owl

Why so tired?

This is missing a subject, ie. why are we all so tired, why are humans always so tired, why you always feel tired, why am I always so tired, etc.

On the first day, God created the cow and said to it: "I will give you 50 years of life, and you will work tirelessly all day long."

The cow heard this, frowned and said: "This is so much hard work, I'll have to live 50 years in the fields, it's pure torture.

Just give me 20 years and take back the remaining 30 years."

God agreed, "Alright, since you've requested it this way."

On the second day, God created the dog and said to it: "I will give you 20 years of life, and your task is to guard the house, and you must keep watch around the clock."

The dog wagged its tail and said softly: "Guard the house?

That's so monotonous.

I'd rather live just 10 years, give the other 10 years back to you."

God smiled and nodded.

On the third day, God created the monkey and gave it 20 years of life, asking it to entertain humans, and perform tricks to make them happy.

The monkey wrinkled its nose and said, "Entertaining others?

That's too exhausting.

I just want 10 years, and the other 10 years you can keep for yourself."

On the final day, God created humans and said to them: "I will give you 20 years of life, and you can eat, drink, play, and enjoy life."

The human immediately frowned upon hearing this.

"20 years is too short, and I don't want to live like this."

"The extra 30 years of the cow, the dog's leftover 10 years, and the unused 10 years of the monkey, please give them all to me."

"In that way, I can live for 70 years."

God smiled and said, "Alright, I'll grant your wish."

For the first 20 years, we live like humans, enjoying life to the fullest.

The next 30 years, we live like cows, working hard to support our families, then for ten years, we do everything we can entertain our children and make them happy.

And the last ten years are spent like dogs, staying at home, lingering at the door and constantly nagging others.

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This is an excellently written paragraph! It has lots of great word choices, it flows well, and it's interesting to read.

On the third day, God created the monkey and gave it 20 years of life, asking it to entertain humans, and perform tricks to make them happy.