My lLaptop My Laptop

I bought mya laptop in January. I bought a laptop in January.

It cost me nearly 600 bucks. It cost nearly 600 bucks.

Now it is even more expensive as the our economy has fallen downdeteriorated/crashed. Now it is even more expensive as the our economy has deteriorated/crashed.

Using "fallen down" sounds a bit strange because people tend to say "fallen down" in a more literal manner. (Example: The tower has fallen down.)

Now it is even more expensive asbecause/since the our economy has fallen downcollapsed. Now it is even more expensive because/since the economy has collapsed.

I'm pleased with itsthe keyboard, screen and configuration. I'm pleased with the keyboard, screen and configuration.

KThe keyboard is good and comfortable for typing. The keyboard is good and comfortable for typing.

KThe keyboard is good and comfortable for typing. The keyboard is good and comfortable for typing.

But, as because it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found out that it needs toshould be shifted a lbittle bit to the right, so that the main keyboard is in the centrer for a balanced hand position of hands. But because it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found that it should be shifted a bit to the right so that the main keyboard is in the center for a balanced hand position.

"Needs to be" is again grammatically correct, but it conveys more urgency. It's like saying something needs to be done immediately. In this case, I would use "should be" because it sounds more like a suggestion.

But, as it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found outrealized that it needs to be shifted a little bit to the right, so that the main keyboard is in the centre for a balanced position of hands. But, as it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I realized that it needs to be shifted a little bit to the right, so that the main keyboard is in the centre for a balanced position of hands.

"Centre" is British English and "center" is American English. "Found out" is ok too, but I'd say "realized."

I think next time I'll buy a 14 inch or lesslaptop that is 14 inches wide or smaller because they don't have a numpad section. I think next time I'll buy a laptop that is 14 inches wide or smaller because they don't have a numpad section.