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ponta

Sept. 3, 2021

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There is a meme on the Internet of Japan. The meme is 33-4, coming from baseball. A baseball team, Hanshin Tigers, won in the league in 2005 and advanced to the Japan Series. However, the Tigers lose in four games and the score was 33-4 in total. Because of the surprising score difference, netizens associate the number, 334, with Hanshin Tigers.

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There is a meme on the Internet ofin Japan.

When you talk about a meme, it is implied that it is on the internet. While what you said is correct, you could also just say "There is a meme in Japan."

The meme is 33-4, coming from baseball.

A baseball team, the Hanshin Tigers, won in their league in 2005 and advanced to the Japan Series.

I'm guessing that there is more than one league that is represented in the Japan Series, so you should say that the Hanshin Tigers won in their league.

However, the Tigers loset in four games and the score was 33-4 in total.

Because of the surprising score difference, netizens associate the number, 334, with the Hanshin Tigers.

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Nice job! Netizen is a very uncommon word in conversational English. Native speakers would be more likely to say "internet users." Some people might be confused by netizen, but I like it!

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ponta

Sept. 4, 2021

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I'll keep it in mind, and thanks for the corrections!

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There is a meme on the Internet of Japan.


There is a meme on the Internet ofin Japan.

When you talk about a meme, it is implied that it is on the internet. While what you said is correct, you could also just say "There is a meme in Japan."

The meme is 33-4, coming from baseball.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A baseball team, Hanshin Tigers, won in the league in 2005 and advanced to the Japan Series.


A baseball team, the Hanshin Tigers, won in their league in 2005 and advanced to the Japan Series.

I'm guessing that there is more than one league that is represented in the Japan Series, so you should say that the Hanshin Tigers won in their league.

However, the Tigers lose in four games and the score was 33-4 in total.


However, the Tigers loset in four games and the score was 33-4 in total.

Because of the surprising score difference, netizens associate the number, 334, with Hanshin Tigers.


Because of the surprising score difference, netizens associate the number, 334, with the Hanshin Tigers.

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