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Journal 17/12/20

This morning, I ate breakfast out and I found a small dish there that reminded me of a dish I used to eat when I was a child in my village. Our village had a habit of growing Chinese cabbage and every family planted it each year. When winter came, the cabbage was harvested. Some of them were sold out and some of them were put somewhere to eat later. Now let me tell you how to make a simple dish. When my relatives visited my family, my mom would make a few dishes to treat them. One of the dishes was a cool Chinese cabbage core. First, remove the old leaves from Chinese cabbage and just use its core. Second, cut the cabbage core into small pieces and wash them clean. Third, put the proper amount of salt, sesame oil into them and mix them together, but remember not to add soy sauce because it will damage the cabbage’s color. Now the dish is done. This dish tasted fresh, refreshing and it was very popular at that time. But now it is difficult to have the opportunity to eat it.

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Now let me tell you how to make a simple dish.

When my relatives visited my family, my mom would make a few dishes to treat them.

Second, cut the cabbage core into small pieces and wash them clean.

Now the dish is done.

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When winter cawould come, the cabbages wasould be harvested.

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Journal 17/12/20


This morning, I ate breakfast out and I found a small dish there that reminded me of a dish I used to eat when I was a child in my village.


This morning, I ate out for breakfast out, and I found a small dish (there) that reminded me of a dish I used to eat when I was a child in my village/hometown. This morning, I ate out for breakfast, and I found a small dish (there) that reminded me of a dish I used to eat when I was a child in my village/hometown.

This morning, I ate breakfast out and I found a small dish at the restaurant that reminded me of a dish I used to eat, when I was a child in my village. This morning, I ate breakfast and I found a small dish at the restaurant that reminded me of a dish I used to eat, when I was a child in my village.

Our village had a habit of growing Chinese cabbage and every family planted it each year.


Our village had a habit of growing Chinese cabbages and every family planted itsome/them each year. Our village had a habit of growing Chinese cabbages and every family planted some/them each year.

Our village had a habittradition/custom of growing Chinese cabbage and every family planted it each year. Our village had a tradition/custom of growing Chinese cabbage and every family planted it each year.

When winter came, the cabbage was harvested.


When winter cawould come, the cabbages wasould be harvested. When winter would come, the cabbages would be harvested.

When winter came, the cabbage was harvestedwe would harvest cabbage. When winter came, we would harvest cabbage.

Some of them were sold out and some of them were put somewhere to eat later.


Some of them were sold out and some of them were putstored somewhere to eat later. Some of them were sold and some of them were stored somewhere to eat later.

sold out 的意思就是 卖完

Some of them were sold out and some of them were putsaved and stored somewhere else to eat later. Some of them were sold out and some of them were saved and stored somewhere else to eat later.

Now let me tell you how to make a simple dish.


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Now, let me tell you how to make a simple dish out of cabbage. Now, let me tell you how to make a simple dish out of cabbage.

When my relatives visited my family, my mom would make a few dishes to treat them.


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Whenever my relatives visited my familycame to visit, my mom would always make a few dishes to treat them. Whenever my relatives came to visit, my mom would always make a few dishes to treat them.

One of the dishes was a cool Chinese cabbage core.


First, remove the old leaves from Chinese cabbage and just use its core.


First, remove the old leaves from the Chinese cabbage and just use its core. First, remove the old leaves from the Chinese cabbage and just use its core.

First, you have to remove the old leaves from the Chinese cabbage and just use its core. First, you have to remove the old leaves from the Chinese cabbage and just use its core.

Second, cut the cabbage core into small pieces and wash them clean.


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Second, cut the cabbage coryou have to cut the core of the cabbage into small pieces and wash them until they are clean . Second, you have to cut the core of the cabbage into small pieces and wash them until they are clean .

Third, put the proper amount of salt, sesame oil into them and mix them together, but remember not to add soy sauce because it will damage the cabbage’s color.


Third, put the proper amount of salt, and sesame oil into them and mix them together/altogether, but remember not to add soy sauce because it will damage the cabbage’s color. Third, put the proper amount of salt and sesame oil in them and mix them together/altogether, but remember not to add soy sauce because it will damage the cabbage’s color.

Third, you have to put the proper amount of salt, and sesame oil into them andto mix them together, but remember not to add soy sauce because it will damage the cabbage’s color. Third, you have to put the proper amount of salt, and sesame oil to mix them together, but remember not to add soy sauce because it will damage the cabbage’s color.

Now the dish is done.


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This dish tasted fresh, refreshing and it was very popular at that time.


This dish tasted fresh,is refreshing and it was very popular at that time. This dish is refreshing and was very popular at that time.

tastes fresh 和 refreshing 的意思差不多,所以用一个就好

This dish tasteds fresh, refreshing and it was very popular at that time. This dish tastes fresh, refreshing and it was very popular at that time.

But now it is difficult to have the opportunity to eat it.


But now it is difficult to have the opportunity/chance to eat it. But now it is difficult to have the opportunity/chance to eat it.

have the chance to do something 比较自然

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