I became a fan of Metallica's fan. I became a fan of Metallica.

I became a Metallica's fan. I became a Metallica fan.

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Then I gowent on with a bunch of metal bands,. I especially I liked Swedish melodic death metal. Then I went on with a bunch of metal bands. I especially liked Swedish melodic death metal.

The band called In Flames was my favorite ofrom that music scene. The band called In Flames was my favorite from that music scene.

There was also a band called Estatic Fear, that made very sophisticated metal music mixed with classical gothic and folk genres. There was also a band called Estatic Fear that made very sophisticated metal music mixed with classical gothic and folk genres.

I continued listening to metal mostly untill my late teen years. I continued listening to metal until my late teen years.

I continued listening mostly to metal mostly till my late teen years. I continued listening mostly to metal till my late teen years.

Moving "mostly" earlier makes it clear that "mostly" modifies "listening" instead of modifying "my late teenage years."

Of course, to begin with, I listened toI started with Pink Floyd. Of course, I started with Pink Floyd.

I fell in love with their music instantly, thus it. It's so beautiful and magnificent, that it can drag you away from this world. I fell in love with their music instantly. It's so beautiful and magnificent that it can drag you away from this world.

I fell in love with their music instantly, th because it's so beautiful and magnificent, that it drags you away from this world. I fell in love with their music instantly because it's so beautiful and magnificent that it drags you away from this world.

The other one, King Crimson, is my second of that kind of musicMy next discovery, King Crimson, became my favorite and. I put away other music for a pretty long time. My next discovery, King Crimson, became my favorite. I put away other music for a pretty long time.

I used to listen to their albums almost exclusively for two tor three years,. They have such a rich musical legacy they have. I used to listen to their albums almost exclusively for two to three years. They have such a rich musical legacy.

I used to listen their albums almost exclusively for two or three years, s. Such a rich musical legacy they have. I used to listen their albums almost exclusively for two or three years. Such a rich musical legacy they have.

This sentence would usually be written as "They have such a rich musical legacy." Sometimes that order is inverted for poetic effect. Personally, I'd choose the standard order in this case.

Their music is diverse ranging from aggressive rough songs to melodic ephemeral sonegs. Their music is diverse ranging from aggressive to melodic ephemeral songs.

Their music is diverse, from aggressive rough songs to melodic ephemeral ones. Their music is diverse, from aggressive rough songs to melodic ephemeral ones.

Still, tThese two are still my favorites and I listen to them now and again. These two are still my favorites and I listen to them now and again.

If you put "still" at the beginning, it sounds like you are contrasting this statement with something else. For example, if the previous sentence said, "I have moved on to other music," then putting "still" at the beginning would make a natural follow-up.