March 1, 2021
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MOGWAA and ASEUL have won the Best Dance & Electronic Album and Song category, respectively, in the 2021 Korean Music Awards held yesterday.
MOGWAA received the award for “Open Mind,” his EP album from last August, and ASEUL for “Bye Bye Summer,” one of the double title tracks of her studio album “Slow Dance,” which was released last March.
In response to winning the award, MOGWAA took to Instagram yesterday to say, “I am really grateful for everyone who cares, loves and supports me. I will buy many quality instruments and work harder on making better tracks.”
ASEUL also thanked people on her Instagram yesterday. The caption says, “I am really grateful for my friends, fellow artists and selection committee members who congratulated me as if it were their achievements.”
You can check out the winners in the other categories here.
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ASEUL’s "Bye Bye Summer" is like a grade-B SF movie produced by an indie movie director.
ASEUL won the Best Dance & Electronic Song category in the 2021 Korean Music Award yesterday. Since I hadn’t listened to it before, I gave it a shot today.
From the very intro, I got the ominous feeling that her vocal style and melodies might remind me of Neon Bunny. And I was right.
Leaving her debatable vocal abilities aside, I couldn’t get my head around the mixing quality and arrangement of “Bye Bye Summer.” I guess I could get by with the off-mark drone sound in the intro and too much reverb on her voice, which was probably ramped up to hide her incompetent vocals. But the chorus was definitely too much for me. Its instrumentation was bad, so many instruments clashing with each other, and unpleasant resonances popped up everywhere from the upper-mid to the high-end parts.
I even see the nomination of this track is unfair to the other nominees (IDOTAPE, MOGWAA, Jangmyungsun and Two Tone Shape), who produced solid tracks. For me, when it comes to dance music in particular, the sonic quality of a song should be taken more seriously than whatever messages behind it. I mean, who would’ve enjoyed watching “Avengers: Endgame” if its visual effects and aesthetics had reminded viewers of “Godzilla” from 1998?
Listen to ASEUL’s “Bye Bye Summer” and maybe share your thoughts as well.
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In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., must be capitalized in the title.
<2021 KMA>
MOGWAA and ASEUL have won the Best Dance & Electronic Album and Song category, respectively, in the 2021 Korean Music Awards, which was held yesterday.
MOGWAA received the award for “Open Mind",” his EP album from last August, and ASEUL for “Bye Bye Summer",” one of the double title tracks of her studio album “Slow Dance",” which was released last March.
The comma comes after the quotation marks.
In response to winning the award, MOGWAA took to Instagram yesterday to say, “I am really grateful for everyone who cares, loves and supports me.
"I am" is often written/said as "I'm".
I will buy many quality instruments and work harder ton makinge better tracks.”
"I will" is often written/said as "I'll".
ASEUL also thanked people on her Instagram yesterday.
The caption says, “I am really grateful for my friends, fellow artists, and selection committee members who congratulated me as if it were their achievements.”
"I am" is often written/said as "I'm".
You can check out the winners in the other categories here.
<ASEUL>
ASEUL’s "Bye Bye Summer" is like a grade-B SF movie produced by an indie movie director.
ASEUL won the Best Dance & Electronic Song category in the 2021 Korean Music Awards yesterday.
Since I hadn’t listened to it before, I gave it a shot today.
FRight from the very intro, I got the ominous feeling that her vocal style and melodies might remind me of Neon Bunny.
And I was right.
Leaving her debatable vocal abilities aside, I couldn’t get my head around the mixing quality and arrangement of “Bye Bye Summer".” I guess I could get by with the off-mark drone sound in the intro and how there was too much reverb on her voice, which was probably ramped up to hide her incompetent vocals.
Quotation marks go before the period.
But the chorus was definitely too much for me.
Its instrumentation was bad, so many instruments clashing with each other, and unpleasant resonances popped up everywhere from the upper-mid to the high-end parts.
I even see the nomination of this track ias unfair to the other nominees (IDOTAPE, MOGWAA, Jangmyungsun and Two Tone Shape), who produced solid tracks.
For me, when it comes to dance music in particular, the sonic quality of a song should be taken more seriously than whatever message is behind it.
I mean, who would’ve enjoyed watching “Avengers: Endgame” if its visual effects and aesthetics had reminded viewers of “Godzilla” from 1998?
Listen to ASEUL’s “Bye Bye Summer” and maybe share your thoughts as well.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
March 1, 2021
Thank you very much! :)
(Oh, btw, I just follow AP style, and I think that it asks writers to put periods and commas within quotation marks? :) )
March 1, 2021
I think it really might depend on where you are and what style your using. However, the commas and periods outside the quotation marks is helpful, especially on this site, because sometimes it will split the sentence.
I hope this helps! :)
March 2, 2021
Oh, that makes sense :) Thanks! :)
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MOGWAA and ASEUL have won the Best Dance & Electronic Album and Song category, respectively, in the 2021 Korean Music Awards held yesterday. MOGWAA and ASEUL have won the Best Dance & Electronic Album and Song category, respectively, in the 2021 Korean Music Awards, which was held yesterday. |
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MOGWAA received the award for “Open Mind,” his EP album from last August, and ASEUL for “Bye Bye Summer,” one of the double title tracks of her studio album “Slow Dance,” which was released last March. MOGWAA received the award for “Open Mind", The comma comes after the quotation marks. |
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In response to winning the award, MOGWAA took to Instagram yesterday to say, “I am really grateful for everyone who cares, loves and supports me. In response to winning the award, MOGWAA took to Instagram yesterday to say, “I am really grateful for everyone who cares, loves and supports me. "I am" is often written/said as "I'm". |
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I will buy many quality instruments and work harder on making better tracks.” I will buy many quality instruments and work harder to "I will" is often written/said as "I'll". |
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ASEUL also thanked people on her Instagram yesterday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The caption says, “I am really grateful for my friends, fellow artists and selection committee members who congratulated me as if it were their achievements.” The caption says, “I am really grateful for my friends, fellow artists, and selection committee members who congratulated me as if it were their achievement "I am" is often written/said as "I'm". |
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You can check out the winners in the other categories here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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<ASEUL> This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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ASEUL’s "Bye Bye Summer" is like a grade-B SF movie produced by an indie movie director. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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ASEUL won the Best Dance & Electronic Song category in the 2021 Korean Music Award yesterday. ASEUL won the Best Dance & Electronic Song category in the 2021 Korean Music Awards yesterday. |
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Since I hadn’t listened to it before, I gave it a shot today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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From the very intro, I got the ominous feeling that her vocal style and melodies might remind me of Neon Bunny.
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And I was right. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Leaving her debatable vocal abilities aside, I couldn’t get my head around the mixing quality and arrangement of “Bye Bye Summer.” I guess I could get by with the off-mark drone sound in the intro and too much reverb on her voice, which was probably ramped up to hide her incompetent vocals. Leaving her debatable vocal abilities aside, I couldn’t get my head around the mixing quality and arrangement of “Bye Bye Summer". Quotation marks go before the period. |
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But the chorus was definitely too much for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its instrumentation was bad, so many instruments clashing with each other, and unpleasant resonances popped up everywhere from the upper-mid to the high-end parts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I even see the nomination of this track is unfair to the other nominees (IDOTAPE, MOGWAA, Jangmyungsun and Two Tone Shape), who produced solid tracks. I even see the nomination of this track |
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For me, when it comes to dance music in particular, the sonic quality of a song should be taken more seriously than whatever messages behind it. For me, when it comes to dance music in particular, the sonic quality of a song should be taken more seriously than whatever message is behind it. |
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I mean, who would’ve enjoyed watching “Avengers: Endgame” if its visual effects and aesthetics had reminded viewers of “Godzilla” from 1998? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Listen to ASEUL’s “Bye Bye Summer” and maybe share your thoughts as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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