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30/05 Technology and transportation: another opinion essay :

The advance of technology will affect various aspects of people's life, and transportation is one of them. One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless and the only people traveling inside the vehicle will be passengers. I tend to think that this is a negative change with more disadvantages than advantages.

Firstly, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents. In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police usually allows this behavior in exchange for brides. In consequence, driverless vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior. Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk.

Secondly, many workers will lose their job in response to this technology, which will tighten the current unemployment crisis. Many people rely on this type of jobs to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs. In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock on the labor market would be worsening the crisis. Many workers will be unemployed and unable to cover their expenses.

In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles do not bring many advantages for today's society. Many cities are not prepared to use this future cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and also that would be worsening the current unemployment crisis.

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30/05 Technology and transportation: another opinion essay :

One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless and the only people traveling inside the vehicle will be passengers.

I tend to think that this is a negative change with more disadvantages than advantages.

Many workers will be unemployed and unable to cover their expenses.

I tend to think that this is a negative change with more disadvantages than advantages.

Many workers will be unemployed and unable to cover their expenses.

I tend to think that this is a negative change with more disadvantages than advantages.

Firstly, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents.

Many workers will be unemployed and unable to cover their expenses.

In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles do not bring many advantages for today's society.

I tend to think that this is a negative change with more disadvantages than advantages.

30/05 Technology and transportation: another opinion essay :


30/05 Technology and transportation: aAnother opinion essay : 30/05 Technology and transportation: Another opinion essay

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The advance of technology will affect various aspects of people's life, and transportation is one of them.


The advancement of technology will affect various aspects of people's life, and transportation is one of them. The advancement of technology will affect various aspects of people's life, and transportation is one of them.

The advancement of technology will affect various aspects of people's lifeves, and transportation is one of them. The advancement of technology will affect various aspects of people's lives, and transportation is one of them.

The advance of technology willechnological advancement will continue to affect variousmany aspects of people's lifeves, and transportation is one of them. Technological advancement will continue to affect many aspects of people's lives, and transportation is one of them.

The advance of technology will affect various aspects of people's life, andves, including transportation is one of them. The advance of technology will affect various aspects of people's lives, including transportation.

Could also replace “people’s lives” with “life”. “Including transportation” is more concise, but it’s optional.

One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless and the only people traveling inside the vehicle will be passengers.


One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverlesscome self-driving, and the only people traveling inside the vehicle will be passengers. One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will become self-driving, and the only people traveling inside the vehicle will be passengers.

One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless and the only people traveling inside the vehicles will be passengers. One of these projections is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless and the only people traveling inside the vehicles will be passengers.

One of these proje most common predictions is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless, and the only peoplassengers will be traveling inside the vehicle will be passengers. One of the most common predictions is that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless, and only passengers will be traveling inside the vehicles.

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I tend to think that this is a negative change with more disadvantages than advantages.


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Firstly, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents.


Firstly, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents. First, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents.

"Firstly" is used in spoken speech sometimes, but I don't think it's technically a word.

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Firstly, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents. Firstly, not all cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult to avoid accidents.

Firstly, not all the cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents. Firstly, not all cities are equally strict with traffic rules, which will make it very difficult for technology to avoid accidents.

In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police usually allows this behavior in exchange for brides.


In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police usually allows this behavior in exchange for bridbes. In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police usually allow this behavior in exchange for bribes.

In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police officers usually allows this behavior in exchange for bridbes. In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police officers usually allow this behavior in exchange for bribes.

When talking about the police as a noun and in the middle of a sentence, it is common to either include the article "the" (i.e. "the police") or to specify "police officers/policemen/policewomen" etc. So you could've also said "the police usually allow this behaviour..." However, if using the word "police" as a verb then you don't have to include an article before it.

In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not reckless driving often goes unpunished, and police usually allows this behavior in exchange for bridbes. In certain countries like Colombia, reckless driving often goes unpunished, and police usually allows this behavior in exchange for bribes.

I think you mean bribes, not brides xD

In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police usually allows this behavior in exchange for bridbes. In certain countries like Colombia, driving recklessly is not punished and police usually allow this behavior in exchange for bribes.

In consequence, driverless vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior.


In cConsequence, driverlesstly, self-driving vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior. Consequently, self-driving vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior.

In cConsequencetly, driverless vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior. Consequently, driverless vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior.

InAs a consequence, driverless vehicles will be more prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudensuch corrupt behavior. As a consequence, driverless vehicles will be more prone to accidents because they would not anticipate such corrupt behavior.

In cConsequencetly, driverless vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior. Consequently, driverless vehicles will be prone to accidents because they would not anticipate imprudent behavior.

“In consequence” isn’t really a phrase that you would use. “Consequently” would be a better choice here.

Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk.


Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact that they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk. Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact that they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk.

Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact that they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk. Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact that they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk.

Buses are particularly dangerous due to the factbecause they transport a lot of people and theirwhose lives may be at risk. Buses are particularly dangerous because they transport a lot of people whose lives may be at risk.

Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact that they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk. Buses are particularly dangerous due to the fact that they transport a lot of people and their lives may be at risk.

When using “fact” in this kind of situation, you would add in “that” afterwards so it becomes “the fact that…”

Secondly, many workers will lose their job in response to this technology, which will tighten the current unemployment crisis.


Secondly, many workers will lose their job in response to this technology, which will tightworsen the current unemployment crisis. Secondly, many workers will lose their job in response to this technology, which will worsen the current unemployment crisis.

Secondly, many workers will lose their job in response to this technology, which will tightworsen the current unemployment crisis. Secondly, many workers will lose their job in response to this technology, which will worsen the current unemployment crisis.

Secondly, many workers will lose their jobs in response to this technology, which will tightonly worsen the current unemployment crisis. Secondly, many workers will lose their jobs in response to this technology, which will only worsen the current unemployment crisis.

Secondly, many workers will lose their jobs in response to this technology, which will tightworsen the current unemployment crisis. Secondly, many workers will lose their jobs in response to this technology, which will worsen the current unemployment crisis.

Many people rely on this type of jobs to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs.


Many people rely on this type of jobs to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs. Many people rely on this type of job to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs.

Many people rely on this type of jobs to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs. Many people rely on this type of job to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs.

Many people rely on this type of jobs to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs. Many people rely on this type of job to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs.

Many people rely on this type of jobs to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs. Many people rely on this type of job to survive because it does not require the same training and experience as other jobs.

Or “these types of jobs”.

In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock on the labor market would be worsening the crisis.


In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock on the labor market would be worsening the crisis. In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock on the labor market would worsen the crisis.

In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock ton the labor market would beonly worsening the crisis. In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock to the labor market would only worsen the crisis.

In many countries, the current unemployability rate iss are high, and a new shock on the labor market would be worsening the crisis. In many countries, the current unemployability rates are high, and a new shock on the labor market would worsen the crisis.

In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock on the labor market would be worsening the crisis. In many countries, the current unemployability rate is high and a new shock on the labor market would worsen the crisis.

Many workers will be unemployed and unable to cover their expenses.


Many workers will become unemployed and unable to cover their expenses. Many workers will become unemployed and unable to cover their expenses.

Changing "be" to "become" makes it speculation, so it fits better with the rest of the writing.

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In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles do not bring many advantages for today's society.


In conclusion, I believe that driverlessself-driving vehicles do not bring too many disadvantages for today's society. In conclusion, I believe that self-driving vehicles bring too many disadvantages for today's society.

This way makes more sense as a conclusion, since your writing talked about disadvantages.

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In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles dowill not bring many advantages forin today's society. In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles will not bring many advantages in today's society.

In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles dowill not bring many advantages forto today's society. In conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles will not bring many advantages to today's society.

“Will” instead of “do” because you’re talking about the future.

Many cities are not prepared to use this future cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and also that would be worsening the current unemployment crisis.


Many cities are not prepared to use this futurekind of futuristic cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and also thait would bealso worsening the current unemployment crisis. Many cities are not prepared to use this kind of futuristic car because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and it would also worsen the current unemployment crisis.

Many cities are not prepared to use thisese futureistic cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and also that would be worsening the currentthe risk of a worsened unemployment crisis. Many cities are not prepared to use these futuristic cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules and the risk of a worsened unemployment crisis.

Many cities are not prepared to use this futuredriverless cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and also thataffic infrastructure and regulations, and they would bealso worsening the current unemployment crisis. Many cities are not prepared to use driverless cars because of their lack of traffic infrastructure and regulations, and they would also worsen the current unemployment crisis.

Many cities are not prepared to use thisese futureistic cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and alsohow thatey would bealso worsening the current unemployment crisis. Many cities are not prepared to use these futuristic cars because of their lack of strict traffic rules, and how they would also worsen the current unemployment crisis.

“This” for singular words, “these” for plurals (like cars).

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