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There is an ongoing discussion around whether governments should spend money on programs encouraging the public to be active and healthy, instead of training a few athletes to win medals at the Olympics. While I partially agree that the general population no compete in high sports events, I also believe that it is still important to invest in High-performance athletes.

Firstly, training athletes for the Olympics incentives the general population to do more exercise. When a country is recognized for a sport, it becomes mainstream in the media and in public discussion. For instance, after Colombia started to be better known in cycling, my whole neighbor created a cycling club to gather people who wanted to do some exercise. However, the number of these athletes is usually very low compared with the general population, that is the reason I believe that governments should invest in programs aimed to the public.

Secondly, investing on high-perform athletes is beneficial to the public because it provides well-equipped infrastructure. For example, when governments decide to hold the Olympics games, they also put a lot of money on building to do a variety of sports, which can be used later by the public. When I visited Canada, I skated on ice in an ice rink that was built for the Winter Olympics game. The infrastructure was being used by the public to skate.

In conclusion, investing in talented athletes can encourage people to exercise more, and also the infrastructure investment for sport events can be used later by the public.

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30/04 Another opinion essay :) Thank you

There is an ongoing discussion around whether governments should spend money on programs encouraging the public to be active and healthy, instead of training a few athletes to win medals at the Olympics.

When a country is recognized for a sport, it becomes mainstream in the media and in public discussion.

The infrastructure was being used by the public to skate.

In conclusion, investing in talented athletes can encourage people to exercise more, and also the infrastructure investment for sport events can be used later by the public.

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30/04 Another opinion essay :) Thank you

When a country is recognized for a sport, it becomes mainstream in the media and in public discussion.

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30/04 Another opinion essay :) Thank you

There is an ongoing discussion around whether governments should spend money on programs encouraging the public to be active and healthy, instead of training a few athletes to win medals at the Olympics.

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There is an ongoing discussion around whether governments should spend money on programs encouraging the public to be active and healthy, instead of training a few athletes to win medals at the Olympics.

When a country is recognized for a sport, it becomes mainstream in the media and in public discussion.

For example, when governments decide to hold the Olympics games, they also put a lot of money on building to do a variety of sports, which can be used later by the public.

The infrastructure was being used by the public to skate.

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30/04 Another opinion essay :) Thank you


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There is an ongoing discussion around whether governments should spend money on programs encouraging the public to be active and healthy, instead of training a few athletes to win medals at the Olympics.


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While I partially agree that the general population no compete in high sports events, I also believe that it is still important to invest in High-performance athletes.


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For instance, after Colombia started to be better known in cycling, my whole neighbor created a cycling club to gather people who wanted to do some exercise.


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In conclusion, investing in talented athletes can encourage people to exercise more, and also the infrastructure investment for sport events can be used later by the public.


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