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alexwong2164

Sept. 23, 2020

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30 days speaking challenge



Thanks to my best friend who introduce a very good website.


I really wish to knew that kind of website long time ago.


Anyway, I will introduce this website to all my friends.


Especially, the one who currently stay in other country.


Or someone just want to improve their language skill.

But just like the title speaking a non-mother language for 30 days.


Is never an easy challenge to anyone.


I have tried before but give up within the first week.


So, maybe the website can lower down the challenge to 1 week, 2 weeks…


I wish someday I can face such tough challenge.

Corrections

30 days s-Day Speaking cChallenge

Thanks to mMy best friend who introduced me to a very good website.

I really wish toI knew about that kind of website a long time ago.

Anyway, I will introduce this website to all my friends.

EAnyway, I will introduce this website to all my friends, especially, the one who is currently staying in another country.

This sentence on its own was not complete so either it needs to be combined with the previous sentence like my correction, or made complete like: "I will especially introduce it to my friend staying in another country."

Or someone justI will also introduce it to anyone who wants to improve their language skills.

But just lLike the title speaking a non-, there is a challenge to speak a language besides your mother language for 30 days.

It is never an easy challenge tofor anyone.

I have tried it before but given up within the first week.

So, mMaybe the website canould lower down the challenge to 1 week, 2duration down to one or two weeks.

I wish someday I can faccomplete such a tough challenge.

I think "hope" sounds slightly better than "wish" here but both work.

Feedback

Good job!

30 dDays speakof Writing cChallenge

For titles use title case

Thanks to my best friend whofor introduceing me to a very good website.

I really wish toI knew thatabout this kind of website a long time ago.

Anyway, I will introduce this website to all my friends.

Especially, the ones who are currently stay in other countryliving abroad.

Or someone who just wants to improve their language skill.

I have tried before but giave up within the first week.

make this past tense

So, maybe the website can lower down the challenge to 1 week, 2 weeks…

I'm not sure exactly how the site can lower the challenge. If you can explain it to me I will correct this sentence.

I wish someday I can face such a tough challenge.

Feedback

You reminded me of 三日坊主 in Japanese. It literally means three day monk. It's someone who starts something and ends up quitting within three days. Writing consistently is definitely a challenge, but I know that you can do it. We are a really cool and supporting community, so please try your best!

Welcome to the site! If you have any questions about my corrections, please let me know :)

alexwong2164's avatar
alexwong2164

Sept. 23, 2020

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you help me = i help u

30 days speaking challenge


30 dDays speakof Writing cChallenge

For titles use title case

30 days s-Day Speaking cChallenge

Thanks to my best friend who introduce a very good website.


Thanks to my best friend whofor introduceing me to a very good website.

Thanks to mMy best friend who introduced me to a very good website.

I really wish to knew that kind of website long time ago.


I really wish toI knew thatabout this kind of website a long time ago.

I really wish toI knew about that kind of website a long time ago.

Anyway, I will introduce this website to all my friends.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Especially, the one who currently stay in other country.


Especially, the ones who are currently stay in other countryliving abroad.

EAnyway, I will introduce this website to all my friends, especially, the one who is currently staying in another country.

This sentence on its own was not complete so either it needs to be combined with the previous sentence like my correction, or made complete like: "I will especially introduce it to my friend staying in another country."

Or someone just want to improve their language skill.


Or someone who just wants to improve their language skill.

Or someone justI will also introduce it to anyone who wants to improve their language skills.

But just like the title speaking a non-mother language for 30 days.


But just lLike the title speaking a non-, there is a challenge to speak a language besides your mother language for 30 days.

Is never an easy challenge to anyone.


It is never an easy challenge tofor anyone.

I have tried before but give up within the first week.


I have tried before but giave up within the first week.

make this past tense

I have tried it before but given up within the first week.

So, maybe the website can lower down the challenge to 1 week, 2 weeks…


So, maybe the website can lower down the challenge to 1 week, 2 weeks…

I'm not sure exactly how the site can lower the challenge. If you can explain it to me I will correct this sentence.

So, mMaybe the website canould lower down the challenge to 1 week, 2duration down to one or two weeks.

I wish someday I can face such tough challenge.


I wish someday I can face such a tough challenge.

I wish someday I can faccomplete such a tough challenge.

I think "hope" sounds slightly better than "wish" here but both work.

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