April 8, 2021
About my brother.
Actually, I don't know so much about my brother's symptoms/condition.
I also don't know how to say it in English.
I've heard the word "ちえおくれ" in the past, so I googled how to say it in English.
I found the term "Intellectual disability."
My brother was in a special class because it was tough taking normal class due to his behind of speak, listen, write and read.
Now, he doesn't have any jobs, so I worry.
Kyoto city is supporting him with welfare services.
He lives with our mother in Kyoto.
By the way, my mother said he had saved his allowance for a while and bought Nintendo Switch to play his favorite games.
The game gadget is expensive, so I feel he has kept patience saving money.
実は、弟の症状・状態については、私はあまり詳しくありません。英語での言い方もわかりません。
過去に「ちえおくれ」という言葉を聞いたことがあったので、それを英語で何と言うかグーグル検索してみました。「Intellectual disability」という言葉を見つけました。
弟は、話す、聞く、書く、読むのが遅れていたため、通常のクラスを受講するのが大変だったため、特別なクラスにいました。
今は、彼は仕事がないので心配です。
京都市の福祉サービスを受けています。
彼は母と京都に住んでいます。
ところで、母によると、彼はお小遣いをしばらくのあいだコツコツと貯めて、NintendoSwitchを買ったそうです。
このゲーム機は高いですから、彼は辛抱強くお金を節約してがんばったんだなぁ、と感じました。
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About my brother.
Actually, I don't know so much about my brother's symptoms/condition.
I also don't know how to say it in English.
I've heard the of the word "ちえおくれ" in the past, so I googled how to say it in English. I've heard the of the word "ちえおくれ" in the past, so I googled how to say it in English.
Make it sound native.
I found the term "Intellectual disability.”
I found the term "Intellectual disability”
You forgot an extra quotation mark “.
My brother was put into in a special class because it was tough taking normal class due to his behind of speak, listen, write and readinstead normal classes. The normal classes were tough for him because of his disability. Due his disability school subjects and social skills are hard for him. He struggles in writing, reading and listening.
My brother was put into in a special class instead normal classes. The normal classes were tough for him because of his disability. Due his disability school subjects and social skills are hard for him. He struggles in writing, reading and listening.
I tried to make it sound more native.
Now, he doesn't have any jobs opportunities , so I am worry.ied for him
Now, he doesn't have any job opportunities , so I am worried for him
Kyoto city is supporting him with welfare services.
He lives with our mother in Kyoto.
By the way, my mother said he had saved his allowance for a while and bought a Nintendo Switch to play his favorite games. By the way, my mother said he had saved his allowance for a while and bought a Nintendo Switch to play his favorite games.
The game gadget is expensive, so I feel he has keptlearned patience savingand saved money.
The gadget is expensive, so I feel he has learned patience and saved money.
Feedback
I enjoyed reading this. You are good older sibling you really care about your brother. I wish your brother success in future.
April 9, 2021
Thank you for your feedback and corrections. I appreciate it.
April 9, 2021
You’re welcome!!!!
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Now, he doesn't have any jobs, so I worry.
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Actually, I don't know so much about my brother's symptoms/condition. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also don't know how to say it in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've heard the word "ちえおくれ" in the past, so I googled how to say it in English. I've heard the of the word "ちえおくれ" in the past, so I googled how to say it in English. I've heard the of the word "ちえおくれ" in the past, so I googled how to say it in English. Make it sound native. |
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I found the term "Intellectual disability.
I found the term "Intellectual disability You forgot an extra quotation mark “. |
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My brother was in a special class because it was tough taking normal class due to his behind of speak, listen, write and read.
My brother was put into in a special class I tried to make it sound more native. |
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Kyoto city is supporting him with welfare services. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He lives with our mother in Kyoto. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By the way, my mother said he had saved his allowance for a while and bought Nintendo Switch to play his favorite games. By the way, my mother said he had saved his allowance for a while and bought a Nintendo Switch to play his favorite games. By the way, my mother said he had saved his allowance for a while and bought a Nintendo Switch to play his favorite games. |
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The game gadget is expensive, so I feel he has kept patience saving money.
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