Nov. 23, 2021
Meeting An Old Friend
It was cold. I spent a long time on transportation. I met an old friend. We had dinner together. After that, we hang out on a shopping mall but bought nothing. We chatted a lot. We both had fun.
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Meeting An Old Friend
It was cold.
I spentt took a long time on transportationto get there.
It took a long time to get there.
You could say I spent a long time on the train or bus, but not transportation.
I met an old friend.
We had dinner together.
After that, we haung out onat a shopping mall but we bought nothing.
After that, we hung out at a shopping mall but we bought nothing.
Hung out is past tense, and not on the mall but at the mall
We chatttalked a lot.
We talked a lot.
Talked a lot sounds better
We both had fun.
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Meeting An Old Friend This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was cold. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I spent a long time on transportation.
I You could say I spent a long time on the train or bus, but not transportation. |
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I met an old friend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We had dinner together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that, we hang out on a shopping mall but bought nothing.
After that, we h Hung out is past tense, and not on the mall but at the mall |
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We chatted a lot.
We Talked a lot sounds better |
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We both had fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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