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Graduation from university

I graduated from university last week. I had enjoyed for four years, and learned a lot of things. There are a lot of opportunity to communicate with many people. While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communication skills. Now, I can naturally talk with people whom I meet at first time. I made a lot of friends there. University is not only studying, but also nurture important things. However my friends is working in a scattered state in Japan. I'm going to study in the United States, but I will be able to go there three month later because of COVID-19. I am irritating because my friends are taking the new first step, but I only wait to go there.
I want to go studying as soon as possible.

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Graduation from university

I graduated from university last week.

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April 7, 2021

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Graduation from university

I graduated from university last week.

While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communication skills.

I made a lot of friends there.

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April 7, 2021

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Now, I can naturally talk with people whom I meet at first time.


Now, I can naturally talk with people whom I meet athe first time. Now, I can naturally talk with people whom I meet the first time.

Now, I can naturally talk with people whomen I meet athem for the first time. Now, I can naturally talk with people when I meet them for the first time.

I made a lot of friends there.


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Graduation from university


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I graduated from university last week.


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I had enjoyed for four years, and learned a lot of things.


I had enjoyed it for four years, and learned a lot of things. I had enjoyed it for four years, and learned a lot of things.

I had enjoyed it for four years, and learned a lot ofmany things. I enjoyed it for four years and learned many things.

There are a lot of opportunity to communicate with many people.


There are a lot of opportunityies to communicate with many people. There are a lot of opportunities to communicate with many people.

There awere a lot ofmany opportunityies to communicate with manyvarious kinds of people. There were many opportunities to communicate with various kinds of people.

While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communication skills.


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While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communications skills because I was able to talk to so many people. I was able to brush up on my communications skills because I was able to talk to so many people.

University is not only studying, but also nurture important things.


University is not only for studying, but also nurtures important things. University is not only for studying, but also nurtures important things.

University is not only about studying, but also about nurtureing important things. University is not only about studying, but also about nurturing important things.

However my friends is working in a scattered state in Japan.


However my friends isare working in a scattered state in Japan. However my friends are working in a scattered state in Japan.

However my friends is working in a scattered state in Japan. However my friends is working in a scattered state in Japan.

Not sure what you want to say here. Did you mean that your friends are scattered all over Japan working in different places?

I'm going to study in the United States, but I will be able to go there three month later because of COVID-19.


I'm going to study in the United States, but I will not be able to go there for three month laters because of COVID-19. I'm going to study in the United States, but I will not be able to go there for three months because of COVID-19.

I assume you mean that you cannot come to the states until 3 months from now. Just a quick fix to make it flow a little bit better :)

I'm going to study in the United States, but I will be able to go there three month later because of COVID-19. However, because of COVID-19 I will go in three months. I'm going to study in the United States. However, because of COVID-19 I will go in three months.

I am irritating because my friends are taking the new first step, but I only wait to go there.


I am irritatinged because my friends are taking the new first step, but I only wait to go there. I am irritated because my friends are taking the new first step, but I only wait to go there.

I am irritatinged because my friends are now taking the newir first steps, but I onlywhile I'm stuck waiting to go thereo America. I am irritated because my friends are now taking their first steps, while I'm stuck waiting to go to America.

I want to go studying as soon as possible.


I want to go studying as soon as possible. I want to go study as soon as possible.

I want to go studying as soon as possible. I want to go studying as soon as possible.

I want to go study abroad as soon as possible.

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