Jan. 8, 2025
Almost people are bored when see typical presentation with bullet points. And everyone is heard about how to important to have a story in presentation. But how to use story in visualizing? I have a three not trivial advise.
1) Use a nerd and ugly chart or map. Perfect is stopping to think, but hand sketch can help to improve or ask a question
2) Human think of image, so use metaphors. You should only ensure to clearly understanding
3) Change a bit metaphor, develop your ideas. If you can to build a sequence, it seems more convincingly
https://www.ted.com/talks/martin_j_eppler_want_to_give_a_great_presentation_use_ugly_sketches
Want to give a great presentation?
AlmMost people are bored when they see a typical presentation with bullet points.
Most people are bored when they see a typical presentation with bullet points.
And everyone ihas heard about how to important it is to have a story in your presentation.
And everyone has heard about how important it is to have a story in your presentation.
But how to ustell the story inwith visualizings?
But how to tell the story with visuals?
I have a three not trivialpieces of important advisce.
I have three pieces of important advice.
1) Use a nerd and ugly chart or map.
1) Use a chart or map.
Perfect is stopping to think, but hIt is perfect for people to stop and think. Hand sketches can helpalso help people to improve or ask a question
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2) Humans think ofin images, so use metaphors.
It is perfect for people to stop and think. Hand sketches can also help people to improve or ask questions.
2) Humans think in images, so use metaphors.
You should only ensure to clearly understanding
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3) Change a bitthe metaphor, a bit to develop your ideas.
You should ensure clear understanding.
3) Change the metaphor a bit to develop your ideas.
If you can to build a sequence, it will seems more convincingly.
If you can to build a sequence, it will seem more convincing.
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I couldn't quite understand what you were trying to express so I changed it according to my guesses.
Want to give a great presentation?
AlmMost people are bored when they see a typical presentation with bullet points.
Most people are bored when they see a typical presentation with bullet points.
And everyone ihas heard about how to important it is to have a story in a presentation.
And everyone has heard about how important it is to have a story in a presentation.
But how tocan we use a story in visualizing?
But how can we use a story in visualizing?
I have a three pieces of important (= not trivial) advisce.
I have three pieces of important (= not trivial) advice.
Perfect is sStopping to think is perfect, but hand sketches can help to improve or ask a question
2) Humans think of images, so use metaphors.
Stopping to think is perfect, but hand sketches can help to improve or ask a question
2) Humans think of images, so use metaphors.
You should only ensure to clearly understanding
3) Change a bitthe metaphors a bit, develop your ideas.
You should only ensure clear understanding
3) Change the metaphors a bit, develop your ideas.
If you can to build a sequence, it seems more convincingly
If you can build a sequence, it seems more convincing
Want to give a great presentation?
AlmMost people are bored when they see a typical presentation with bullet points.
Most people are bored when they see a typical presentation with bullet points.
And everyone ihas heard about how to important it is to have a story inwithin the presentation.
And everyone has heard about how important it is to have a story within the presentation.
But how to use story in visualizingvisuals within a story?
But how to use visuals within a story?
I have a three not trivialimportant pieces of advisce.
I have a three important pieces of advice.
1) Use a "nerd and ugly chart or map" or a chart with poorly drawn sketches..
1) Use a "nerd" or a chart with poorly drawn sketches..
Perfect is stopping toIt's okay to stop and think, but hand sketches can help to improve or asknswer a question
2) Human think ofusing image, so use metaphors.
It's okay to stop and think, but hand sketches can help to improve or answer a question
2) Human think using image, so use metaphors.
You should only ensure to clearly understanding
focus on clearly conveying your ideas
3) Change a bitsome metaphors, develop your ideas.
You should focus on clearly conveying your ideas
3) Change some metaphors, develop your ideas.
If you can to build a sequence, itYou should build a narrative because it will seems more convincingly.
You should build a narrative because it will seem more convincing.
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Good try! It was a bit hard to understand so practice your grammar. Dont give up!
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And everyone is heard about how to important to have a story in presentation.
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