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Oct. 26, 2021

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A letter to a friend struggling with her son.

[Task: a friend of yours who has a problem with her teenage son who has changed dramatically in the last months. He was very communicative, and he's not any longer, he does not help at all, to sum up, he's a dark horse. ]

Dear Martina,
I hope you are well and everything is OK. Sorry, I haven’t written for so long, but I’m very busy these days at work. I’m writing to let you know my perspective, but maybe a better source of information about it would be a pedagogue.

Changes come and go along our growing time. Maybe he is being so rude due to a certain thing that is happening in his life, or perhaps it is just a bad week. Sometimes, when I try to figure out what happens, I’m being too invasive to my daughter. Most of the time I end barking up the wrong tree, and she just needed his space.

On the other hand, my daughter has problems when she needs help. She struggles to try to express his feeling. I think that is a common thing among young people.

Bad behaviour, even from your son, is a way that he has to communicate and “speak out”, in a certain way, his feelings.
Sorry, I hadn’t been as helpful as you need, but I’m in the same dilemma as you.

Drop me a line and let me know how is he doing and if you have found a way to pick up the situation.

Take care,
Papadopoulos.

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Dear Martina,

I hope you are well and everything is OK.

Sorry, I haven’t written for so long, but I’m very busy these days at work.

I think that is a common thing among young people.

Dear Martina,


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A letter to a friend struggling with her son.


[Task: a friend of yours who has a problem with her teenage son who has changed dramatically in the last months.


He was very communicative, and he's not any longer, he does not help at all, to sum up, he's a dark horse.


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I hope you are well and everything is OK.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sorry, I haven’t written for so long, but I’m very busy these days at work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m writing to let you know my perspective, but maybe a better source of information about it would be a pedagogue.


Changes come and go along our growing time.


Changes come and go along our growing timethroughout our lives. Changes come and go throughout our lives.

Maybe he is being so rude due to a certain thing that is happening in his life, or perhaps it is just a bad week.


Maybe he is being so rude due to a certain something that is happening in his own life, or perhaps ithe is just having a bad week. Maybe he is being so rude due to something that is happening in his own life, or perhaps he is just having a bad week.

Sometimes, when I try to figure out what happens, I’m being too invasive to my daughter.


Sometimes, when I try to figure out what happens, I’m being too invasive towith my daughter. Sometimes, when I try to figure out what happens, I’m being too invasive with my daughter.

Most of the time I end barking up the wrong tree, and she just needed his space.


Most of the time I end barking up the wrong tree, and she just needed hiss her space. Most of the time I end barking up the wrong tree, and she just needs her space.

On the other hand, my daughter has problems when she needs help.


On the other hand, my daughter has problems when she needstrying to ask for help. On the other hand, my daughter has problems trying to ask for help.

She struggles to try to express his feeling.


She struggles to try to express hiser feelings. She struggles to try to express her feelings.

I think that is a common thing among young people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Bad behaviour, even from your son, is a way that he has to communicate and “speak out”, in a certain way, his feelings.


Bad behaviour, even from your son, is a way that he has to communicate and “speak out”, in a certain way, his feelings. Bad behaviour, even from your son, is a way to communicate and “speak out”, in a certain way, his feelings.

Sorry, I hadn’t been as helpful as you need, but I’m in the same dilemma as you.


Sorry, I hadn’ven't been as helpful as you need, but I’m in the same dilemma as you. Sorry, I haven't been as helpful as you need, but I’m in the same dilemma as you.

Drop me a line and let me know how is he doing and if you have found a way to pick up the situation.


Drop me a line and let me know how is he doing and if you have found a way to pick upimprove the situation. Drop me a line and let me know how is he doing and if you have found a way to improve the situation.

Take care,


Papadopoulos.


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