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My Famorite Composer

My favorite music is the original sound track of movies.

When listening to the music, I can remind the scene of the movie as well as remember feelings at the moment.

My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone who is the greatest composer in the movie world.

You might listen to his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on.

When tuning into a ratio, I listened to his songs on every program.

And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.

Now he passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.

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My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone who is the greatest composer in the movie world.

And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.

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My Famorite Composer


My Famvorite Composer My Favorite Composer

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My Famvorite Composer My Favorite Composer

My favorite music is the original sound track of movies.


My favorite music is the original sound track of movies. My favorite music is the original soundtrack of movies.

Soundtrack is one word

My favorite kind of music is the original sound track of movies. My favorite kind of music is the original sound track of movies.

Alternative and more natural way of expressing it in the US.

When listening to the music, I can remind the scene of the movie as well as remember feelings at the moment.


When listening to the music, I can remindember the scene of the movie as well as remember the feelings I was feeling at the moment. When listening to the music, I can remember the scene of the movie as well as remember the feelings I was feeling at the moment.

Whilen listening to the music, I can remindember the scene of the movie as well as rememberwhat I feelingst at theat moment. While listening to the music, I can remember the scene of the movie as well as what I felt at that moment.

or While listening to the music, I'm reminded of the scene in the movie as well as my feelings when I saw it.

My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone who is the greatest composer in the movie world.


My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone, who is the greatest composer in the movie world. My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone, who is the greatest composer in the movie world.

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You might listen to his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on.


You might have listened to his songs if you have watched ET, mThe Mission, Once uUpon a tTime in America and so on. You might have listened to his songs if you have watched ET, The Mission, Once Upon a Time in America and so on.

Words in movie titles are capitalized, except for words like "a", "in", "of", etc.

You might listen toay have heard his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on. You may have heard his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on.

heard vs listen: heard is passive while listen is more active.

When tuning into a ratio, I listened to his songs on every program.


When I tuninged in to athe ratdio, I listened to his songs on every program. When I tuned in to the radio, I listened to his songs on every program.

"in to" is two words here

When tuning into a ratio, I listened toheard his songs on every program. When tuning into a ratio, I heard his songs on every program.

And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.


And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood. I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.

Try not to begin sentences with "and". It is not necessary here.

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Now he passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.


Now he has passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think. Now he has passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.

Now he's passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think. Now he's passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.

Since he just passed away, we use, "He has passed away," or "He's passed away."

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