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Feb. 17, 2026

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Harry´s Birthday

One sunny morning Dobby woke up with a happy thought: " Today is Harry´s Potter birthday". Dobby wanted to do something very special. He wanted to make a birthday cake. Maybe, you might ask, who is Dobby? Well, Dobby is a small house elf with big green eyes and long ears. Getting back to the story. Dobby made a great chocolate cake, he added pink frosting, red berries, blue berries and yellow sprinkles. The cake looked bight and happy. Boddy held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room, It´s quite and warm. He sat on the soft chair and waited. Soon Harr went down and saw Boddy. What are you doing here? , he asked. Dobby stood up proudly," Happy birthday, Harry Potter" ¡Dobby made a cake!
"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, thank you" Harry said. Ron and Hermione came downstairs; they both praised the cake. They all sat together. They ate a cake and laughed. They told stories and felt safe and warm. When the cake was finished, Harry thanked Boddy. Boddy felt like belonged. He knew that Harry was his best friend.

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Harry´'s Birthday

One sunny morning, Dobby woke up with a happy thought: " Today is Harry´s Potter's birthday".

Maybe, yYou might ask, who is Dobby?

Getting back to the story.

I would take this out completely, it doesn't feel very natural

Dobby made a great chocolate cake, h. He added pink frosting, red berries, blue berries, and yellow sprinkles.

BoddDobby held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room,.

It´ was quitet and warm.

Soon, Harr wenty came down and saw BoddDobby.

"What are you doing here?"

Dobby stood up proudly,"

"Happy birthday, Harry Potter".

¡Dobby made a cake!"

"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, tgive. Thank you" Harry said.

They ate athe cake and laughed.

When the cake was finished, Harry thanked BoddDobby.

BoddDobby felt like he belonged.

Harry´s Birthday

One sunny morning, Dobby woke up with a happy thought:, " Today is Harry´s Potter’s birthday".

Dobby made a great chocolate cake, h. He added pink frosting, red berries, blue berries, and yellow sprinkles.

The cake looked bright and happy.

BoddDobby held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room,.

It´s quitet and warm.

Soon, Harry went down and saw BoddDobby.

What are you doing here?

, he asked.

Dobby stood up proudly,"

Happy birthday, Harry Potter"!

¡Dobby made a cake!

"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, thank you",” Harry said.

Ron and Hermione camealso went downstairs; they both praised the cake.

They ate athe cake and laughed.

They told stories and felt safe and warm.

When the cake was finished, Harry thanked BoddDobby.

BoddDobby felt like he belonged.

He knew that Harry was his best friend.

Harry´s Birthday


Harry´s Birthday

Harry´'s Birthday

One sunny morning Dobby woke up with a happy thought: " Today is Harry´s Potter birthday".


One sunny morning Dobby woke up with a happy thought:, " Today is Harry´s Potter birthday"."

Put the punctuation (in this case a period) inside the quotation marks.

One sunny morning, Dobby woke up with a happy thought:, " Today is Harry´s Potter’s birthday".

One sunny morning, Dobby woke up with a happy thought: " Today is Harry´s Potter's birthday".

Dobby wanted to do something very special.


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He wanted to make a birthday cake.


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Maybe, you might ask, who is Dobby?


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Maybe, yYou might ask, who is Dobby?

Well, Dobby is a small house elf with big green eyes and long ears.


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Getting back to the story.


Getting back to the story.,

This is the lead in for your next line, so it is best to keep them together.

Getting back to the story.

I would take this out completely, it doesn't feel very natural

Dobby made a great chocolate cake, he added pink frosting, red berries, blue berries and yellow sprinkles.


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Dobby made a great chocolate cake, h. He added pink frosting, red berries, blue berries, and yellow sprinkles.

Dobby made a great chocolate cake, h. He added pink frosting, red berries, blue berries, and yellow sprinkles.

The cake looked bight and happy.


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The cake looked bright and happy.

Boddy held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room,


Boddy (Dobby?) held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room,.

Did you mean 'Dobby'?

BoddDobby held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room,.

BoddDobby held the cake with both hands and arrived in the Gryffindor common room,.

It´s quite and warm.


It´s quitet and warm.

It´s quitet and warm.

It´ was quitet and warm.

He sat on the soft chair and waited.


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Soon Harr went down and saw Boddy.


Soon Harry went down and saw BoddDobby.

Soon, Harry went down and saw BoddDobby.

Soon, Harr wenty came down and saw BoddDobby.

What are you doing here?


"What are you doing here?

What are you doing here?

"What are you doing here?"

, he asked.


, he asked.

, he asked.

Dobby stood up proudly,"


Dobby stood up proudly,"

Dobby stood up proudly,"

Dobby stood up proudly,"

Happy birthday, Harry Potter"


"Happy birthday, Harry Potter"!

Happy birthday, Harry Potter"!

"Happy birthday, Harry Potter".

¡Dobby made a cake!


¡Dobby made a cake!"

¡Dobby made a cake!

¡Dobby made a cake!"

"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, thank you" Harry said.


"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, thank you," Harry said.

"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, thank you",” Harry said.

"Dobby, this is the kindest gift anyone could make, tgive. Thank you" Harry said.

Ron and Hermione came downstairs; they both praised the cake.


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Ron and Hermione camealso went downstairs; they both praised the cake.

They all sat together.


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They ate a cake and laughed.


They ate athe cake and laughed.

*because it is a specific cake

They ate athe cake and laughed.

They ate athe cake and laughed.

They told stories and felt safe and warm.


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They told stories and felt safe and warm.

When the cake was finished, Harry thanked Boddy.


When the cake was finished, Harry thanked BoddDobby.

When the cake was finished, Harry thanked BoddDobby.

When the cake was finished, Harry thanked BoddDobby.

Boddy felt like belonged.


BoddDobby felt like he belonged.

BoddDobby felt like he belonged.

BoddDobby felt like he belonged.

He knew that Harry was his best friend.


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He knew that Harry was his best friend.

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