I started to playing jazz drums 2 years ago. I started playing jazz drums 2 years ago.

Recently, I've practiced/I've been practicing the song 'Numb' a lot. Recently, I've practiced/I've been practicing the song 'Numb' a lot

I've practiced or I've been practicing works better than the present tense here, as it flows more naturally :)

Recently, I've been practiceing the song 'Numb' a lot. Recently, I've been practicing the song 'Numb' a lot.

It's bpm is 110played at 110 bpm, which is quite fast. It's played at 110 bpm, which is quite fast.

Its rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. Its rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play.

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ItsThe rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. The rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play.

I practice it a lot, so that I can eventually play it without musicthe score sheet. I practice it a lot, so that I can eventually play it without the score sheet.

What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, or in other words, I can really enjoy it, and become a part of it. What I want to reach is that I can play it by heart, or in other words, I can really enjoy it and become a part of it.

What I want to reach is thatthe level where I can play it by my heart,; in other words, where I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. I want to reach the level where I can play it by heart; in other words, where I can really enjoy it, become a part of it.

By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve atd in the beginning. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieved in the beginning.

Relaxed可能更合适

For theis reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. For this reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song.

For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice theis song. For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice this song.

After playing it for half an hour later, I will begin to feel irritable. After playing it for half an hour, I will begin to feel irritable.

This helps the sentence to flow a bit better :D

After playing it half an hour lafter, I will feel I play it, I will start to get irritable. A half hour after I play it, I will start to get irritable.

After playing it half an hour later, I will feel half hour into playing the song, I start to get irritable. A half hour into playing the song, I start to get irritable.

Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listenito keep listening to this song for thirty minutes. Maybe because it is too noisy to keep listening to this song for thirty minutes.

Maybe because it is too noisy forto continuinge listening to for thirty minutes straight. Maybe because it is too noisy to continue listening to for thirty minutes straight.

Then I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to- this makes me feel good again. Then I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' - this makes me feel good again.

Then, I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes meyself feel good again. Then, I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to make myself feel good again.

It seems that I play the drums isn'not because of a love of music, but instead the need of a mood ventilation.ve improvement. It seems that I play the drums not because of a love of music, but instead the need of a move improvement.

It seems that I play drums isn't becausenot out of a love of music, but rather the need of mood ventilationto blow off steam. It seems that I play drums not out of a love of music, but rather the need to blow off steam.

如果用“不是因为…”就要说“什么什么的原因不是因为…”