July 29, 2022
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Crayon Shin-chan Shrouded in Mystery! The Flowers of Tenkasu Academy
The movie follows Shinnosuke and his friends who enter a super elite boarding school for a week. And various strange things happen.
B: Have you seen "Tenkasu Gakuen"?
A: I've seen it recently! It was really good!
Have you seen it?
B: I haven't seen it yet.
I'm going to watch when it gets uploaded on a streaming service!
A: It's on Netflix!
B: Really?
I'll watch it this week!
A: I recommend it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan movies, but I shouldn't have made light of it! Gags were reserved though.
B: Were you moved?
A: Yeah.
It made me think about the idea of eugenics and equality.
B: It's a pretty deep theme.
A: It made me realize again, that everyone is different. Our uniqueness is what makes us wonderful.
B: Great point.
A: And, I'm getting used to the new voice actors' voice. Have you gotten used to it?
B: Well, I'm not used to their voices yet .
I really liked Yajima's and Fujiwara's voices. Did you like them both?
A: Of course! It's like I grew up with their voices.
But I think the two new voice actors have adjusted well to their roles as the characters' voices; they have improved since they took over the voice work.
B: They must be under a lot of pressure!
A: Absolutely.
B: What number is this movie in your list of favourite Shinchan films?
A: Hmmm, it's tied with "Yakiniku" and "Yumemi" for fourth! And _Ankoku_ would be nice!
B: Okay, in a nutshell, you love it all, huh? Haha. But do you also like "Yakiniku"?
A: Yeah, I like the ridiculousness of it. Haha What do you think?
B: Ummm, it's not my cup of tea.
I didn't really find it funny.
What's your third favorite?
A: "Robot to-chan"!
B: Nice! Some of scene I didn't make much sense, but lastly I was moved.
A: Yeah, I feel you.
B: Let me guess your first and second favourites.
A: Yeah. But can you do it? lol
B: Of course!
Well... I'm thinking of two options.
Let's see... So the first goes to "Adult" and the second to "Sengoku"!
A: Wrong! Haha
You put them in the wrong order.
B: Oh, c'mon! I screwed up the only two choices. Haha
A: But when I'm a little older, I'll maybe change my ranking to that you said.
What's your ranking then?
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Talk about a Movie
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️
Crayon Shin-chan Shrouded in Mystery!
The Flowers of Tenkasu Academy
The movie follows Shinnosuke and his friends who enter a super elite boarding school for a week.
And various strange things happen.
B: Have you seen "Tenkasu Gakuen"?
A: I've seen it recently!
It was really good!
Have you seen it?
B: I haven't seen it yet.
I'm going to watch it when it gets uploaded ton a streaming service!
I'm going to watch it when it gets uploaded to a streaming service!
A: It's on Netflix!
B: Really?
I'll watch it this week!
A: I recommend it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan movies, but I shouldn't have made light of it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan movies, but I shouldn't have!
This is okay, too.
Gags were reservedThe jokes were subtle though.
The jokes were subtle though.
B: WereDid you movedlike it?
B: Did you like it?
or
Did you find it moving?
or
Did it move you?
A: Yeah.
It made me think about the idea of eugenics and equality.
B: It's a pretty deep theme.
A: It made me realize again, that everyone is different.
Our uniqueness is what makes us wonderful.
B: Great point.
A: And, I'm getting used to the new voice actors' voices. A: And, I'm getting used to the new voice actors' voices.
Have you gotten used to it?
B: Well, I'm not used to their voices yet .
B: Well, I'm not used to their voices yet.
I really liked Yajima's and Fujiwara's voices.
Did you like them bothboth of them?
Did you like both of them?
US alternative
A: Of course!
It's like I grew up with their voices.
ButAnd I think the two new voice actors have adjusted well to their roles as the characters' voices;: they ha've improved since they took over the voice work.
And I think the two new voice actors have adjusted well to their roles: they've improved since they took over the voice work.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: They must be under a lot of pressure!
A: Absolutely.
B: What number iHow does this movie irank on your list of favourite Shinchan films?
B: How does this movie rank on your list of favorite Shinchan films?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Hmmm, it's tied with "Yakiniku" and "Yumemi" for fourth place! A: Hmmm, it's tied with "Yakiniku" and "Yumemi" for fourth place!
And _Ankoku_ would be nice!
B: Okay, in a nutshell, you love it all, huh?
Haha.
But do you also like "Yakiniku"?
A: Yeah, I like the ridiculousness of it.
Haha What do you think?
B: Ummm, it's not my cup of teaI didn't really like it.
B: Ummm, I didn't really like it.
US alternative
I didn't really find it funny.
What's your third favorite?
A: "Robot to-chan"!
B: Nice!
Some of the scene Is didn't make much sense, but lastly I was move to me, but I was moved in the end.
Some of the scenes didn't make much sense to me, but I was moved in the end.
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Yeah, I feel you.
B: Let me guess your first and second favourites.
A: Yeah.
But can you do it?Good luck!
Good luck!
US alternative
lol
B: Of coursekay!
B: Okay!
US alternative
Well...
I'm thinking of two optionThere are two possibilities.
There are two possibilities.
US alternative
Let's see...
So the first goes to "place is _Adult"_ and the second to "place is _Sengoku"_!
So first place is _Adult_ and second place is _Sengoku_!
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Wrong!
Haha
You put them in the wrong order.
B: Oh, c'mon!
I screwed up the only two choices left. I screwed up the only two choices left.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Haha
A: But when I'm a little older, I'll maybe change my ranking to twhat you said.
A: But when I'm a little older, I'll maybe change my ranking to what you said.
What's your ranking then?
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The Flowers of Tenkasu Academy
The movie follows Shinnosuke and his friends who enter a super elite boarding school for a week.
And various strange things happen.
B: Have you seen "Tenkasu Gakuen"?
A: I've seen saw it recently!
A: I saw it recently!
It was really good!
Have you seen it?
B: I haven't seen it yet.
I'm going to watch when it gets uploaded ton a streaming service!
I'm going to watch when it gets uploaded to a streaming service!
A: It's on Netflix!
B: Really?
I'll watch it this week!
A: I recommend it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan movies, but I shouldn't have made light ofdismissed it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan movies, but I shouldn't have dismissed it!
"Made light of" is not wrong but sounds a bit antiquated and formal.
Gags were reserved though. Gags were reserved though.
Unsure of the meaning here. "Gags" could be pranks or practical jokes. It could also refer to a court order to silence or censor someone, e.g. a "gag order".
B: Were you moved? B: Were you moved?
This sounds a little formal to me. Instead you might hear, "Was it emotional?"
A: Yeah.
It made me think about the idea of eugenics and equality.
B: It's a pretty deep theme.
Our uniqueness is what makes us wonderful.
B: Great point.
A: And, I'm getting used to the new voice actors's voice.
A: And, I'm getting used to the new voice actor's voice.
Singular: ...new voice actor's voice.
Plural: ...new voice actors' voices.
More on the plural possessive: https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/parts-of-speech/nouns/plural-possessive-noun.html
Have you gotten used to it?
B: WellNo, I'm not used to their voices yet .
B: No, I'm not used to their voices yet .
Here I made B answer the question directly
I really liked Yajima's and Fujiwara's voices.
Did you like them both?
A: Of course!
It's like I grew up with their voices.
But I think the two new voice actors have adjusted well to their roles as the characters' voices; they have improved since they took over the voice work.
B: They must be under a lot of pressure!
A: Absolutely.
B: What number is this movie in your list of favourite Shinchan films? B: What number is this movie in your list of favourite Shinchan films?
Very natural and non-trivial sentence, nice work.
A: Hmmm, it's tied with "Yakiniku" and "Yumemi" for fourth!
And _Ankoku_ would be nice! And _Ankoku_ would be nice!
In writing the title would just be capitalized. I'm guessing you're after (markdown) italics here which would be correct but I'm not sure if LangCorrect support it.
B: Okay, in a nutshell, you love it all, huh?
Haha.
But do you also like "Yakiniku"?
A: Yeah, I like the ridiculousness of it.
Haha What do you think?
B: Ummm, it's not my cup of tea.
I didn't really find it funny.
A: "Robot to-chan"!
B: Nice!
Some of scene I dicouldn't make much sense of, but lastly Iin the end it was emovedtional.
Some of scene I couldn't make sense of, but in the end it was emotional.
A: Yeah, I feel you.
B: Let me guess your first and second favourites.
A: Yeah.
But can you do it?
lol lol
Rarely spoken aloud
B: Of course!
Well...
I'm thinking of two options.
Let's see...
So the first goes to "Adult" and the second to "Sengoku"!
A: Wrong!
Haha
You put them in the wrong order.
B: Oh, c'mon!
I screwed up the only two choices.
Haha
A: But when I'm a little older, I'll maybe I'll change my ranking to that you said.
A: But when I'm a little older, maybe I'll change my ranking to that you said.
What's your ranking then?
July 30, 2022
Gags were reserved though.
Unsure of the meaning here. "Gags" could be pranks or practical jokes. It could also refer to a court order to silence or censor someone, e.g. a "gag order".
I wanna say that the gag wasn't very funny.
How're this?
"Gags were shy."
"Gags were quite."
"Gags were subdued."
July 30, 2022
B: WellNo, I'm not used to their voices yet .
Here I made B answer the question directly
Why did you change that B answer the question directly?
July 30, 2022
I wanna say that the gag wasn't very funny. How're this? "Gags were shy." "Gags were quite." "Gags were subdued."
I think I see what you want to say. "Gags" is not used to refer comedy/jokes/humor very often. To say something was not funny, you could say:
The jokes didn't land
-or-
I didn't get the humor
In your examples,
1. Shy doesn't work because it's only for people and animals
2. Quite (or "quiet") is only for noise/sound/voices.
3. Subdued is better. You could say "subdued humor".
The show has a subdued sense of humor.
July 30, 2022
Why did you change that B answer the question directly?
I think it is best to answer yes/no questions directly with a "yes" or "no", though it might just be my personal style :)
July 31, 2022
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