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For general statements, it would be better to use its plural form, if it has one.

The speaker shares a specific message during the speech accordingly based on own intentionals and interests; it can be contradictory to their real emotion.s. The speaker shares a specific message during the speech accordingly based on own intentions and interests; it can be contradictory to their real emotions.

The speaker shares a specific message during their speech accordingly to their own intentionals and interests; it can be contradictory to their real emotions. The speaker shares a specific message in their speech according to their own intentions and interests; it can be contradictory to their real emotions.

"the speech" sounds weird because no speech was previously mentioned, leaving me thinking: What speech?? Describing an "interest" as "intentional" doesn't really make sense, but I don't know what you were trying to convey

Manipulation can be smooth and discreet, and couldan be a request for apologies,. It can involve tears, flowers and gifts, normusually accompanied with cliché phrases together, such as "I committed a mistake,; I will change". Manipulation can be smooth and discreet, and can be a request for apologies. It can involve tears, flowers and gifts, usually accompanied with cliché phrases, such as "I committed a mistake; I will change".

I separated it into two sentences and changed some words for consistency and clarity. The original statement can be understood, however.

Manipulation can be smooth and discreet, and. It could be a request for apologies, tears, flowers and gifts, normallyusually paired with cliché phrases together, such as "I committed've made a mistake, but I will change". Manipulation can be smooth and discreet. It could be a request for apologies, tears, flowers and gifts, usually paired with cliché phrases, such as "I've made a mistake, but I will change".

Splitting it into two sentences flows better "normally" implies that it is abnormal/weird if there aren't cliche phrases "commit" to me has a sense of something done purposefully, and thus saying you've "commited a mistake" sounds oxymoronic. Though I feel like I've heard "committed a grave error" before...

The speaker intentionally wants theo end of the conflict, or add many other justifications. The speaker intentionally wants to end the conflict, or add many other justifications.

The speaker intentionally wantseeks the end of the conflict, or many other justifications. The speaker intentionally seeks the end of the conflict, or many other justifications.

"wanting" can't be "intentional", it is simply an emotion that is felt. However "seeking" is an actual action I don't think "justifications" is the right word here, because "the end of a conflict" is not a "justification", but I'm not sure what you meant

However, their reasoning does not permit one to feel for the othershow real symapthy, recognizetion and regret to be a real "I am sorry." - so, it is only lameSo, they are only useless words. However, their reasoning does not show real symapthy, recognition and regret to be a real "I am sorry." So, they are only useless words.

However, their reasoning does not permit onethem to feel for the other party, recognize andor regret their actions, in order for it to be a real "I am sorry" - so, it is only lameaningless words. However, their reasoning does not permit them to feel for the other party, recognize or regret their actions, in order for it to be a real "I am sorry" - so, it is only meaningless words.

How does the world, the people and life suffertand it? How do the world, the people and life stand it?

How does the world, the people and lif and its people suffer? How do the world and its people suffer?

"life" can't suffer, although life can be "suffering" Maybe "all living things?

PIt is probably it is the price of staying conscious in a world which sleeps. It is probably the price of staying conscious in a world which sleeps.

PIt is probably it is the price of staying conscious in a world whichthat sleeps. It is probably the price of staying conscious in a world that sleeps.

Little by little, manipulation causes the other person to lose themselves;: those who lose themselves lose everything, and those who hold the control also lose the person they once loved. Little by little, manipulation causes the other person to lose themselves: those who lose themselves lose everything, and those control also lose the person they once loved.

Little by little, manipulation causes the other person to lose themselves; those who lose themselves lose everything, and those who hold theare in control also lose the person they once loved. Little by little, manipulation causes the other person to lose themselves; those who lose themselves lose everything, and those who are in control also lose the person they once loved.

While the speaker cheats, the observer suffers, and life continues. While the speaker cheats, the observer suffers, and life continues.

While the speaker cheats, the observer suffers, and life continues. While the speaker cheats, the observer suffers, and life continues.

"observer" sounds odd since it seemed like you were talking about people who are actively involved in the situation, not a bystander