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"Bosai" Festival

I joined the "Bosai" festival with my family today.
"Bosai" means preparing for disastars, for example tayhoon, earthquake etc...
It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect us when we are suffered disastars.
~~~~(I want to say police, self defence force, firefighter, amburace etc..) attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizes.
A lot of boothes which sell foods or do workshop were joined, too.
In one of these, we tried to make a whistle by a paper.
It was little bit difficulte but I felt very helpful when I'll get disastars.
Of cause, we enjoyed some foods.
I ate a cuban sandwitch for the first time, and it was so nice.

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Koheisan

Nov. 9, 2025

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"Bosai" Festival

I joined the "Bosai" festival with my family today.

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Koheisan

Nov. 9, 2025

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"Bosai" Festival

I joined the "Bosai" festival with my family today.

"Bosai" means preparing for disastars, for example tayhoon, earthquake etc...

It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect us when we are suffered disastars.

~~~~(I want to say police, self defence force, firefighter, amburace etc..) attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizes.

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Koheisan

Nov. 8, 2025

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"Bosai" Festival


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I joined the "Bosai" festival with my family today.


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"Bosai" means preparing for disastars, for example tayhoon, earthquake etc...


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"Bosai" means preparing for disastaers, for example tayphoon, earthquake etc... "Bosai" means preparing for disasters, for example typhoon, earthquake etc...

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"Bosai" means preparing for disastaers, for example tayphoons, earthquakes etc... "Bosai" means preparing for disasters, for example typhoons, earthquakes etc...

It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect us when we are suffered disastars.


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It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect us when we are sufferedourselves when disastaers occur. It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect ourselves when disasters occur.

"when we suffer disasters" would work here, but this is a less wordy alternative that feels more natural to my ears.

It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect uourselves when we are suffered disastaers. It's an annual event, and we learned how to protect ourselves when we suffer disasters.

~~~~(I want to say police, self defence force, firefighter, amburace etc..) attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizes.


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~~~~(I want to say police, self defence force, firefighter, amburace etc..)Various emergency services attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizzes. Various emergency services attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizzes.

"Emergency services" is generally the collective term for the various services you mentioned. This would give the impression that there are multiple there without having to specifically list them all.

~~~~(I want to say police, self defence force, firefighter, amburace etc..)Emergency services attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizzes. Emergency services attended this festival and taught some protection methods with quizzes.

A lot of boothes which sell foods or do workshop were joined, too.


A lot of boothes which sell foods or do workshop were joined, too. A lot of boothes which sell food or do workshop were joined, too.

A lot of boothes which sellold foods or doran workshops were joinedthere, too. A lot of booths which sold foods or ran workshops were there, too.

"joined in too" might work here

A lot of boothes which sell foods or do workshops were joinedpresent, too. A lot of booths which sell foods or do workshops were present, too.

In one of these, we tried to make a whistle by a paper.


In one of these, we tried to make a whistle by afrom paper. In one of these, we tried to make a whistle from paper.

In one of thesem, we tried to make a whistle by aout of paper. In one of them, we tried to make a whistle out of paper.

In one of these, we tried to make a whistle by afrom paper. In one of these, we tried to make a whistle from paper.

It was little bit difficulte but I felt very helpful when I'll get disastars.


It was a little bit difficulte but I felt it was very helpful when I'll get disastarsa disaster will happen. It was a little bit difficult but I felt it was very helpful when a disaster will happen.

It was little bit difficulte but I felt it would be very helpful when I'll get disastara disaster happens. It was little difficult but I felt it would be very helpful when a disaster happens.

"little bit difficult" is fine, but "little difficult" is probably more natural. "when I get disasters" doesn't really make sense. Disasters are things that happen to you, as opposed to something you get.

It was little bit difficulte but I felt very helpful for when I'll get disastaers. It was little bit difficult but I felt very helpful for when I'll get disasters.

Of cause, we enjoyed some foods.


Of cauourse, we enjoyed some foods. Of course, we enjoyed some foods.

Of cauourse, we enjoyed some foods. Of course, we enjoyed some foods.

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Of cause, we enjoyealso had some foods. Of cause, we also had some foods.

"enjoyed" sounds pretty unnatural in this context, I think.

I ate a cuban sandwitch for the first time, and it was so nice.


I ate a cCuban sandwitch for the first time, and it was so nice. I ate a Cuban sandwich for the first time, and it was so nice.

I ate a cCuban sandwitch for the first time, and it was so nice. I ate a Cuban sandwich for the first time, and it was so nice.

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I ate a cuban sandwitch for the first time, and it was sovery nice. I ate a cuban sandwich for the first time, and it was very nice.

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