Oct. 4, 2020
An interesting thing when I was a child in the countryside was roasting sweet potatoes on farmland. It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season has finished. But there were still some of them remaining in the farmland and we fellow kids regularly carried a basket and a shovel to dig them out. After we got a few of them, we roasted them on the farmland. First off, we dug a small ditch, then put the sweet potatoes over the ditch. Last, we lit the crops seedlings and put them into the ditch to burn the sweet potatoes. When we considered them that was almost done, we pushed them down to the ditch and covered them with the mud which dug from the ditch. After keeping this situation for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat. Sweet potatoes roasting in this way tasted very delicious. Have you ever eaten this kind of roasting sweet potatoes?
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An interesting fact is when I was a child in the countryside, I roasted sweet potatoes on the farm.
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It was usually around late October when sweet potato harvest was finished.
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But there were usually still some remaining in the ground, so as children, we would regularly carry a basket and a shovel to dig them out.
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After digging them out, we would roast them.
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We would dig a small ditch, then put the sweet potatoes over it.
Last, weWe would then light the crops seedlings (kindling?) and put them into the ditch to burnroast the sweet potatoes.
We would then light the seedlings (kindling?) and put them into the ditch to roast the sweet potatoes.
When we considered them that was almostOnce the sweet potatoes were done, we would pushed them down into the ditch and covered them with the mud which dug up from the ditch.
Once the sweet potatoes were done, we would push them down into the ditch and cover them with the mud dug up from the ditch.
After keeping this situationem in the mud for thirty minutes or so, it was, they were ready to be eaten.
After keeping them in the mud for thirty minutes, they were ready to be eaten.
Roasting Sweet potatoes roasting in this way twasted very delicious.
Roasting Sweet potatoes this way was very delicious.
Have you ever eaten this kind of roastinged sweet potatoes?
Have you ever eaten roasted sweet potatoes?
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Roasting Sweet Potatoes
An interesting thing when I was a child in the countryside was roasting sweet potatoes oin farmlandthe fields.
An interesting thing when I was a child in the countryside was roasting sweet potatoes in the fields.
It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season hasd finished.
It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season had finished.
But there were still some of them remaining in the farmlandields and we fellow kids regularly carried a baskets and a shovels to dig them out.
But there were still some of them remaining in the fields and we kids regularly carried baskets and shovels to dig them out.
After we gotdug a few of them out, we roasted them oin the farmlandields.
After we dug a few of them out, we roasted them in the fields.
First off, we dug a small ditch, then put the sweet potatoes over the ditch.
LasNext, we lit the crops' seedlings and put them into the ditch to burncook the sweet potatoes.
Next, we lit the crops' seedlings and put them into the ditch to cook the sweet potatoes.
When we considered them that wa sweet potatoes almost done, we pushed them down into the ditch and covered them with the mud whichthat we dug from the ditch.
When we considered the sweet potatoes almost done, we pushed them down into the ditch and covered them with the mud that we dug from the ditch.
After keeping this situationwaiting for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat.
After waiting for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat.
Sweet potatoes roastinged in this way tasted very delicious.
Sweet potatoes roasted in this way taste very delicious.
Have you ever eaten this kind of roastinged sweet potatoes?
Have you ever eaten this kind of roasted sweet potatoes?
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Overall, your writing is very good! I could only find some small errors that didn't affect my understanding at all.
Roasting sSweet pPotatoes
Roasting Sweet Potatoes
Titles should always be capitalized unless for aesthetic purposes.
An interesting thing when I was a child in the countryside was roasting sweet potatoes oin farmland.the fields.
An interesting thing when I was a child in the countryside was roasting sweet potatoes in the fields.
It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season hasd finished.
It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season had finished.
‘Has’ indicates present tense, had is better since it follows the tense for the first part of your sentence.
But there were still some of them remaining in the farmland and we fellowus kids regularly carried a basket and a shovel to dig them out.
But there were still some of them remaining in the farmland and us kids regularly carried a basket and a shovel to dig them out.
After we gotdigging a few of them, we roasted them oin the farmland.ields.
After digging a few of them, we roasted them in the fields.
First off, we dug a small ditch, then put the sweet potatoes over the ditch.
Last,Then we lit the crops seedlings and put them into the ditch to burn the sweet potatoes.
Then we lit the crops seedlings and put them into the ditch to burn the sweet potatoes.
When we considered twhemn that wasey were almost done, we pushed them down to the ditch and covered them with the mud from which we dug from the ditch.
When we considered when they were almost done, we pushed them down to the ditch and covered them with the mud from which we dug from the ditch.
After keeping this situationletting it sit for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat.
After letting it sit for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat.
Situation describes more of a problem/dilemma than a moment of waiting.
Sweet potatoes roastinged in this way tasted very delicious.
Sweet potatoes roasted in this way taste very delicious.
Have you ever eaten this kind of roastinged sweet potatoes?
Have you ever eaten this kind of roasted sweet potatoes?
Roasting sSweet pPotatoes
Roasting Sweet Potatoes
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It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season hasd finished.
It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season had finished.
But there were still some of them remaining in the farmland and we fellowields and we kids regularly carried a basket and a shovel to dig them out.
But there were still some of them remaining in the fields and we kids regularly carried a basket and a shovel to dig them out.
"fields" is what a native speaker would say. Farmland is not ... an error, but it does not sound native.
After we got a few of them, we roasted them oin the farmlanield.
After we got a few of them, we roasted them in the field.
First off, we dug a small ditch, then put the sweet potatoes over the ditch.
LastThen, we lit the crops seedlingsdried vines left after the harvest and put them into the ditch to burncook the sweet potatoes.
Then, we lit the dried vines left after the harvest and put them into the ditch to cook the sweet potatoes.
"seedlings" is for baby plants, like in springtime. There are not seedlings in October. I think you mean the dead vines from the sweet potatoes that were in the fields? "burn the sweet potatoes" is "light them on fire". It is usually a cooking mistake. "Cook" is "add heat to make food".
When we considered them that was almostnearly done, we pushed them down sweet potatoes down into to the ditch and covered them with the mud which dug from we had dug to make the ditch.
When we considered them nearly done, we pushed the sweet potatoes down into to the ditch and covered them with the mud which we had dug to make the ditch.
After keeping this situationwaiting for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat.
After waiting for thirty minutes or so, it was ready to eat.
Sweet potatoes roastinged in this way tasted very delicious.
Sweet potatoes roasted in this way tasted very delicious.
Have you ever eaten this kind of roastinged sweet potatoes?
Have you ever eaten this kind of roasted sweet potatoes?
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Good work! I could understand what you were trying to tell me and this was not an easy thing to explain. I have eaten roasted sweet potatoes, but only cooked in an oven, not field-roasted like this.
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An interesting thing when I was a child in the countryside was roasting sweet potatoes on farmland.
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It was about late October, and the sweet potato harvest season has finished.
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But there were still some of them remaining in the farmland and we fellow kids regularly carried a basket and a shovel to dig them out.
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After we got a few of them, we roasted them on the farmland.
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First off, we dug a small ditch, then put the sweet potatoes over the ditch. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Last, we lit the crops seedlings and put them into the ditch to burn the sweet potatoes.
"seedlings" is for baby plants, like in springtime. There are not seedlings in October. I think you mean the dead vines from the sweet potatoes that were in the fields? "burn the sweet potatoes" is "light them on fire". It is usually a cooking mistake. "Cook" is "add heat to make food".
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When we considered them that was almost done, we pushed them down to the ditch and covered them with the mud which dug from the ditch.
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Sweet potatoes roasting in this way tasted very delicious.
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Have you ever eaten this kind of roasting sweet potatoes?
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