tThanks you for reading. Thank you for reading.

In more formal situations, such as here where you are submitting works to be corrected, it's just a tad bit better to say "thank you" instead of "thanks".

thanks for reading. thanks for reading.

Lunar nNew yYear Lunar New Year

New Year should be capitalized.

Lunar nNew yYear Lunar New Year

This year's nNew yYear’s vacation was just like the others, wyears previous. We had a dinner together with some relatives on the nduring New yYear'’s eve and so as others activitiesEvr. This year's New Year’s vacation was just like years previous. We had dinner together with some relatives during New Year’s Evr.

This year's nNew yYear's vacation was just like the others,: we had a dinner together with some relatives on the nNew yYear's eEve and sos well as others activities. This year's New Year's vacation was just like the others: we had a dinner together with some relatives on New Year's Eve as well as other activities.

Review how holidays are spelled out. Two independent clauses can't be connected with a comma.

This year's nNew yYear's vacation was just like the others,; we had a dinner together with some relatives on the nNew yYear's eEve, and so aslong with some others activities. This year's New Year's vacation was just like the others; we had a dinner together with some relatives on New Year's Eve, along with some other activities.

After the mealdinner, some of us went to the lottery shop to purchase some scratch off lottery tickets for fun. After dinner, some of us went to purchase some scratch off lottery tickets for fun.

After the meal, some of us went to the lottery shop to purchase some scratch tickets for fun. After the meal, some of us went to the lottery shop to purchase some scratch tickets for fun.

I have never heard of lottery shops. If those exist, that's really interesting! Otherwise I would clarify that you got the tickets from a gas station or other vender.

The way we bought itmanner in which we raised funds was by holding a fundraiser amongst our family and, with plans to split the prize if we wion. The manner in which we raised funds was by holding a fundraiser amongst our family, with plans to split the prize if we won.

The way we bought ithe tickets was to holding a fundraiser among our family and, splitting the prize if we wion. The way we bought the tickets was to hold a fundraiser among our family, splitting the prize if we won.

I would elaborate the purchase of the tickets instead of leaving it in the air with "it". A comma makes the sentence a lot more natural. Review the tense adjustments as well.

The way we bought it was holding a fundraiser among our family an. We'd split the prize if we wion. The way we bought it was holding a fundraiser among our family. We'd split the prize if we won.

I'm a little confused, do you mean everyone pitched in money to buy the ticket?

Different from the Western world's religions, most of the oriental religions hasve numerous gods that all of them. The gods are in charge of different fields individually. Different from the Western world's religions, most of the oriental religions have numerous gods. The gods are in charge of different fields individually.

Different from Western world'soccidental religions, most of the oriental religions hasve numerous gods that all of them are in charge of different fields individually. Different from occidental religions, most of the oriental religions have numerous gods that are in charge of different fields.

Occidental is the inverse of oriental; using them in conjunction makes the sentence flow better. More pronoun + tense changes were also made.

Different from Western world'sIn contrast to Western religions, most of the orientalEastern religions hasve numerous gods that all of them are in charge of/deities, each presiding over a different fields individually/profession(?). In contrast to Western religion, most Eastern religions have numerous gods/deities, each presiding over a different field/profession(?).

ItHowever, we ended up 0with no net profit because an uncle decided to use the remaining funds to buy only 1 ticket with 2000NTD, and w. We didn't even get anything back from it. However, we ended up with no net profit because an uncle decided to use the remaining funds to buy only 1 ticket with 2000NTD. We didn't even get anything back from it.

ItWe ended upwith 0 net profit because an uncle decided to use the remaining funds to buy only 1 ticket with 2000NTD, and w. We didn't even get anything back from it. We ended with 0 net profit because an uncle decided to use the remaining funds to buy only 1 ticket with 2000NTD. We didn't even get anything back from it.

Because you and your family were pooling in the money, you were the ones left with nothing; "it" is vague. Separate independent clauses.

ButYet, we still have faith that we would getill be luckier after praying to gthe Gods. Yet, we still have faith that we will be luckier after praying to the Gods.

But we still haved faith that we would get luckier after praying to gods. But we still had faith that we would get luckier after praying to gods.

Tense

But we still haved faith that we would get luckier aftery praying to the gods. But we still had faith that we would get lucky praying to the gods.

On the first day, we visited 2 temples to pray for a blessing. On the first day, we visited 2 temples to pray for a blessing.

On the first day, we visited 2 temples in order to pray for a blessing. On the first day, we visited 2 temples in order to pray for a blessing.

Tense + pronoun for blessing

On the first day, we visited 2 temples to pray for a blessing. On the first day, we visited 2 temples to pray for a blessing.

Best to keep the tenses consistent

Not only for the fortune of course.

Not only for the fortune, of course. Not only for the fortune, of course.

One of them I prayed the most this year is called 文昌帝君, he isI prayed to one of the gods the most this year, 文昌帝君, the god of studying and taking test. I prayed to one of the gods the most this year, 文昌帝君, the god of studying and taking test.

One of them I prayed the most this year is called 文昌帝君,; he is the god of studying and taking tests. One of them I prayed the most this year is called 文昌帝君; he is the god of studying and taking tests.

Separate independent clauses; taking something in this sort of general context is almost always referred to in terms of taking multiple.

OnThe of themne I prayed to the most this year is called 文昌帝君, he is the god of studying and taking tests. The one I prayed to the most this year is called 文昌帝君, the god of studying and taking tests.

That's very interesting! :)

Nearly everyone who is preparing forto takinge tests will pray to him. Nearly everyone who is preparing to take tests will pray to him.

If you wanted to use "preparing for", then you would remove taking entirely.

Nearly everyone who is preparing for taking testexams will pray to him. Nearly everyone who is preparing for exams will pray to him.

Instead of praying for luck andor high score or satisfied results, I told him that all I need is self -discipline. Instead of praying for luck or high scores, I told him that all I need is self-discipline.

Instead of praying for luck and high score or a satisfiedactory result, I told him that all I need is self discipline. Instead of praying for luck and high score or a satisfactory result, I told him that all I need is self discipline.

Very wise of you. Use satisfactory instead of satisfied because satisfactory means that the result makes YOU satisfied, not the other way around!

Instead of praying for luck and high scores or satisfiegood results, I told him that all I need is self -discipline. Instead of praying for luck and high scores or good results, I told him that all I need is self-discipline.

And I'm still seeking methoda solution to solve this issue. I'm still seeking a solution to solve this issue.

And I'm still seeking methods to solve this issue. And I'm still seeking methods to solve this issue.

Because self discipline is a very multifaceted endeavor, you'll want to specify that you're seeking methods not just one method.

And I'm still seelooking method to solve this for solutions to this problem/issue. I'm still looking for solutions to this problem/issue.

I'm a bit confused of using had or have had, if you know how to make it easily understandable, please let me know. I'm a bit confused of using had or have had, if you know how to make it easily understandable, please let me know.

I'm a bit confused of usingabout how to use had or have had,; if you know how to make it easily understandable, please let me know. I'm a bit confused about how to use had or have had; if you know how to make it easily understandable, please let me know.

As a person who has been living in America my whole life, I don't really know how to explain how to distinguish between had or have had. Some situations just call for it, so I would get a lot of appropriate sentences and gradually learn the distinction that way. I would say though that anything that has relevance to the present day calls for "have had". So like if I am really stressed about school work, I would say "I have had a really hard time with schoolwork lately" instead of "I had a really hard time with schoolwork" because it is a problem that still has an active role in my life.

I'm a bit confused of using had or have had, if you know how to make it easily understandable, please let me know. I'm a bit confused of using had or have had, if you know how to make it easily understandable, please let me know.

I think you can use either! Had vs. have had is just past tense vs. present tense.

I had watched some websites about it, but the way they explained it is unclear. I watched some websites about it, but the way they explained it is unclear.

I had watchbrowsed some website about it, but the way they explained it was unclear. I had browsed some website about it, but the way they explained it was unclear.

We browse websites; we don't watch websites. Other corrections include tense and grammar.

I had watched some website about it but the wayvideo online about self-discipline, but the explanation/solution was unclear. OR I had tried reading an article on self-discipline, but they explained isnation was pretty unclear. I watched some video online about self-discipline, but the explanation/solution was unclear. OR I had tried reading an article on self-discipline, but the explanation was pretty unclear.

I know that I have the skill and intelligence to complete the preparation, but what is really stopping me is that I goet distracted easily. I know that I have the skill and intelligence to complete the preparation, but what is really stopping me is that I get distracted easily.

I know that I have the skill and intelligence to complete the preparation, but what's really stopping me is that I got distracted easily. I know that I have the skill and intelligence to complete the preparation, but what's really stopping me is that I got distracted easily.

This sentence is almost perfect.

I know that I have the skill and intelligence to complete the preparation, but what's really stopping me is that I gotgetting distracted easily. I know that I have the skill and intelligence to complete the preparation, but what's really stopping me is getting distracted easily.