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I've been reading a Japanese mystery book recently.
It is really interesting than I expected, and I read this book in school today.
I've reading halfway throught the book, so I don't know the ending, but the main character is a man who call himself as a handyman. He is described as his how to speak is just like a machine and his face never change and also describes as there isn't any specific words that describe his looks like.
He send cliants latter that looks handmade to their home.
He helps anything such as establishing a alibi, and discarding items.
every cliants are who involve to wrongdoing and once they decide to rely on him, they are sort of locked in, and they try to see him again. Because he is professional and they worry he might spoil wrongdoing and if he rattle them. However, he don't do things like that, and he changes his phone number on every latter, so they can't see him again.
The man who worked in main police station and used the handman to have him
help killing many people just for his desire that getting money, worries if the handyman spoil. So he tris to see him and search him with getting people who stand by him.
I'm looking forward to reading the end.

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The book

I've been reading a Japanese mystery book recently.

I'm looking forward to reading the end.

The book


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I've been reading a Japanese mystery book recently.


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It is really interesting than I expected, and I read this book in school today.


It is reallyhas been more interesting than I expected, and I read this book in school today. It has been more interesting than I expected, and I read this book in school today.

"Than" is for comparison, so it needs to be accompanied by either "more interesting" or "less interesting".

I've reading halfway throught the book, so I don't know the ending, but the main character is a man who call himself as a handyman.


I've readingm halfway throught the book, so I don't know the ending, but the main character is a man who calls himself as a handyman. I'm halfway through the book, so I don't know the ending, but the main character is a man who calls himself a handyman.

"Have been" is for ongoing past actions. It works for reading the book, as that takes a while. But here it makes more sense to just say that you ARE halfway through the book OR you HAVE MADE IT halfway through the book.

He is described as his how to speak is just like a machine and his face never change and also describes as there isn't any specific words that describe his looks like.


He is described as his how to speak is just like a machine and his face never change and also describes as there isn't any specific words that describe hisspeaking like a machine, with a face that never changes. We never find out what he looks like. He is described as speaking like a machine, with a face that never changes. We never find out what he looks like.

This would be better as two sentences. I tried to reword the second part to make it a bit clearer.

He send cliants latter that looks handmade to their home.


He send cliants latter that looks handmade to their home. He send cliants latter that looks handmade to their home.

Not sure what you mean by "cliants latter", sorry.

He helps anything such as establishing a alibi, and discarding items.


HeThis helps anything such ashim with establishing an alibi, and discarding items. This helps him with establishing an alibi and discarding items.

every cliants are who involve to wrongdoing and once they decide to rely on him, they are sort of locked in, and they try to see him again.


everyAll the cliaents are who involve towho hire him are involved with the wrongdoing, and once they decide to rely on him, they are sort of locked in, andso they try to see him again. All the clients who hire him are involved with the wrongdoing, and once they decide to rely on him they are sort of locked in, so they try to see him again.

Because he is professional and they worry he might spoil wrongdoing and if he rattle them.


Because he is a professional and they worry he might spoil wrongdoing and if he rattlerat on them. Because he is a professional and they worry he might rat on them.

Rat on someone = to tell the police about their crimes.

However, he don't do things like that, and he changes his phone number on every latter, so they can't see him again.


However, he doesn't do things like that, and he changes his phone number on every latter, so they can't see him again. However, he doesn't do things like that, and he changes his phone number on every latter, so they can't see him again.

Latter?

The man who worked in main police station and used the handman to have him


There is a man who worked in main police station and used the handyman to have him There is a man who worked in main police station and used the handyman to

help killing many people just for his desire that getting money, worries if the handyman spoil.


help killing many people just for his desire that getting money, to get more money, and he is worries ifd that the handyman spoilmight talk. kill many people just to get more money, and he is worried that the handyman might talk.

In this case, talk means tell the police.

So he tris to see him and search him with getting people who stand by him.


So he tries to see him and search him with getting people who stand by him. So he tries to see him and search him.

I'm looking forward to reading the end.


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