I was twenty-two years old and I had just broken up with my ex boyfriend. I was twenty-two years old and I had just broken up with my ex boyfriend.

I was twenty-two years old and I just broke up with my ex boyfriend. I was twenty-two years old and I just broke up with my ex boyfriend.

I was twenty-two years old and I just broke-up with my ex -boyfriend. I was twenty-two years old and I just broke-up with my ex-boyfriend.

At the same times, I had left my job. At the same time, I had left my job.

At the same times, I left my job. At the same time, I left my job.

At the same times, I left my job. At the same time, I left my job.

At the same times, I left my job. At the same time, I left my job.

I told myself:, "I quit one guy, I can quit two!". I told myself, "I quit one guy, I can quit two!".

ThereforeSo, I return at the beginning: ed to my origins: my mother's home. So, I returned to my origins: my mother's home.

or "I had to restart from the beginning: at my mother's home" I think it sounds weird because a "home" cannot be a "beginning," it can only be a place where something began

Therefore, I return ated to the beginning: my mother's home. Therefore, I returned to the beginning: my mother's home.

Therefore, I return ated to the beginning: my mother's home. Therefore, I returned to the beginning: my mother's home.

Therefore, I return at thed to my humble beginnings: my mother's home. Therefore, I returned to my humble beginnings: my mother's home.

SadnessI was so sad. I was so sad.

Sadness would be fine for poetry but grammatically it doesn't work.

It was like a big regression and it was really hard tofor me, because I had lived alone since myI was seventeen years old. It was like a big regression and it was really hard for me, because I had lived alone since I was seventeen years old.

I would drop "like a" from "like a big regression" in writing, but it's normal when speaking

It was like a big regression and it was really hard to me, because I had lived alone since myI was seventeen years old. It was like a big regression and it was really hard to me, because I had lived alone since I was seventeen years old.

It was like a big regression and it was really hard tofor me, because I lived alone since my seventeen years old. It was like a big regression and it was really hard for me, because I lived alone since my seventeen years old.

It was like a big regression and it was really hard to me, because I lived alone since myI had been seventeen years old. It was like a big regression and it was really hard to me, because I lived alone since I had been seventeen years old.

At thisat moment, my self -esteem and self -confidence were not far from zero. At that moment, my self-esteem and self-confidence were not far from zero.

"that" is better since the moment is far away from your current situation, whereas "this moment" sounds like you're talking about something currently happening

At this moment, my self -esteem and self -confidence were not far from zero. At this moment, my self-esteem and self-confidence were not far from zero.

So I decided to realize one of my biggest dream s: go alone ato the other side of the world, into New Zealand. So I decided to realize one of my biggest dreams: go alone to the other side of the world, to New Zealand.

So I decided to realize one of my biggest dream :s, go alone ato the other side of the world, in New Zealand. So I decided to realize one of my biggest dreams, go alone to the other side of the world, New Zealand.

A great choice! In Aotearoa New Zealand we spell "realise" with an "s".

So I decided to realize one of my biggest dreams : go alone ato the other side of the world, in New Zealand. So I decided to realize one of my biggest dreams : go alone to the other side of the world, in New Zealand.

So, I decided to realize one of my biggest dream : go alone ato the other side of the world, in: New Zealand. So, I decided to realize one of my biggest dream: go alone to the other side of the world: New Zealand.

At worst, I will deadould die there andbut I doidn't care, because I'm was dead anyway. At worst, I would die there but I didn't care, because I was dead anyway.

change to past tense

At worst, I will deadould die there, and I doidn't care, because I'm felt dead anyway. At worst, I would die there, and I didn't care because I felt dead anyway.

This sentence loses the past tense. "Would" is the past tense of will, but also at this point you're discussing your thoughts before going, so this is a hypothetical past.

At worstWorst case, I will diead there and I wouldon't care, because I'm dead anyway. Worst case, I will die there and I wouldn't care, because I'm dead anyway.

At worst, I will dead it there and, but I don't care, because I'm dead anyway. At worst, I will dead it there, but I don't care because I'm dead anyway.

At best, I will learn a lot of things, about life and myself. At best, I will learn a lot of things, about life and myself.

At best, I willould learn a lot of things, about life and myself. At best, I would learn a lot of things, about life and myself.

At best, I will learn a lot of things, about life and myself. At best, I will learn a lot of things, about life and myself.

At best, I will learn a lot of thing,s about life and myself. At best, I will learn a lot of things about life and myself.

RThe result :? I'm alive so.... The result? I'm alive so....

You like colons! Me too.

Result : I'm alive so.... Result: I'm alive so....

It was my best trip ever and next year, I startwill go back again for one year. It was my best trip ever and next year, I will go back again for one year.

It was my best trip ever, and next year, I startwill travel again for one year. It was my best trip ever, and next year I will travel again for one year.

This sentence is a little unclear? Are you going back to NZ again for one year, or travelling alone again for one year. I'm not sure.