Today my old friend painter wriote me message that she has had a crush on me onefor a year ago. Today my old friend wrote me message that she has had a crush on me for a year.

I’m not sure what “painter” is in this sentence. A painter is some who paints.

Today, my old friend painter wfriend wrote me a message saying that she hasd a crush on me onea year ago. Today, my old painter friend wrote me a message saying that she had a crush on me a year ago.

Today my old friend painter friend wriote me a message, saying that she hasd a crush on me one year ago. Today my old painter friend wrote me a message, saying that she had a crush on me one year ago.

It was so prettywonderful, because I didn’t guess andshe would because I am so critical ofor myself. It was so wonderful, because I didn’t guess she would because I am so critical of myself.

Pretty is more for describing physical appearance than events.

It was so prettynice, because I dicouldn’'t guesstell and I am so critical ofor myself. It was so nice, because I couldn't tell and I am so critical of myself.

It was so prettygreat, because I didn’tnever would have guessed and I am'm usually so critical ofor myself. It was great, because I never would have guessed and I'm usually so critical of myself.

She said that she thought I amwas very beautiful when she met me at first timet me and itshe was interesting toed in listeneding to my ideas. She said that she thought I was very beautiful when she first met me and she was interested in listening to my ideas.

“Was very” and not “is very” because she is referring too an event in the past. This does not mean she no longer believes you’re beautiful.

She said that she thought I amwas very beautiful when she met me at first timet me and it was interesting to listened to my ideas. She said that she thought I was very beautiful when she first met me and it was interesting to listen to my ideas.

She said that she thought I amwas very beautiful when she met me atfor the first time, and it was interesting to listened my ideas. She said that she thought I was very beautiful when she met me for the first time, and it was interesting to listen my ideas.

I feel like I am Dorian Grey or differentsome other muse in a novel. I feel like I am Dorian Grey or some other muse in a novel.

Instead of “muse” you probably want “protagonist” or “character” Muse is an often mythical entity that inspires someone to create.

I feel like I am Dorian Grey or differentsome other muse in a novel. I feel Dorian Grey or some other muse in a novel.

I feel like I am Dorian Grey or a different muse in asome novel. I feel like I am Dorian Grey or a different muse in some novel.