What I hHate on a pPacked tTrain What I Hate on a Packed Train

Titles are capitalized.

What I hate on aabout packed trains What I hate about packed trains

Can't explain why, this just sounds better to me.

What I hate on aThe worst thing about packed trains is when I getgetting off. The worst thing about packed trains is getting off.

another way of rephrasing the sentence that sounds a little better to me

There' are so many people that weyou can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from the back as if they tell us topush people in front of them, as if to say get off quickly. There are so many people that you can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to push people in front of them, as if to say get off quickly.

"There are" is often contracted to "there're" in speech, but not in writing.

There're so many people that we can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from the back as if they're telling us to get off quickly. There're so many people that we can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from the back as if they're telling us to get off quickly.

There' are so many people that weus passengers can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from the backbehind as if they're telingl us to get off quickly. There are so many people that us passengers can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from behind as if they're telingl us to get off quickly.

I've never seen a native use "There're" even in informal text. "There're" is how we slur it in speech, but we never write it - in my experience. Adding "us" in front of "passengers" makes it more natural to say "we" and "us" later on.

Some other people hit uothers with their bags, and some other people repeatedly clear their throats noisy, repeatedily to make the others move aside. Some people hit others with their bags, and other people repeatedly clear their throats noisily to make others move aside.

Some other people hit us with their bags and some other peopleothers clear their throats noisy,ily and repeatedly to make the otherspeople move aside. Some people hit us with their bags and others clear their throats noisily and repeatedly to make people move aside.

Sounds more natural without the repetition.

Some other people hit us with their bags and some other people clear their throats noisy,ily and repeatedly to make the others move aside. Some other people hit us with their bags and some other people clear their throats noisily and repeatedly to make the others move aside.

I get really get disgusted justwhen I seeing these people. I get really disgusted when I see these people.

Or: I get really disgusted when I see this kind of behavior.

When I get off a train, I say loudly, "Excuse me! I'm getting off!", t Then many people try to move aside to let me pass me through. When I get off a train, I say loudly, "Excuse me! I'm getting off!" Then many people try to move aside to let me pass through.

When I get off a train, I say loudly say, "Excuse me! I'm getting off!", t Then many people try to move aside to let me pass me through. When I get off a train, I loudly say, "Excuse me! I'm getting off!" Then people try to move aside to let me pass through.

Sounds better without the "many".

When I get off a train, I say loud,ly: "Excuse me! I'm getting off!", t. Then many people try to move aside to pass me through. When I get off a train, I say loudly: "Excuse me! I'm getting off!". Then many people try to move aside to pass me through.

When I say "Thank you" as I passing, many people quickly clear themselves on my waystep aside. When I say "Thank you" as I pass, many people quickly step aside.

WThen I say "Thank you" while passing, and many people quickly clear themselvesout onf my way. Then I say "Thank you" while passing and many people quickly clear out of my way.

"to clear out" isn't reflexive

When I say "Tthank you" passing by, many people quickly clear themselves onff my way. When I say "thank you" passing by, many people quickly clear themselves off my way.

When I ignored what my grandma saidtold me as a child, she saidwould ask me, "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to athe hospital right now and have your mouth and vowel got rid ofremoved by a doctor. Give them to children who haven't had their mouths and vowels since they were born." I feel sometimes I'mfeel glad I had such a strict grandma. When I ignored what my grandma told me as a child, she would ask me, "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to the hospital right now and have your mouth and vowel removed by a doctor. Give them to children who haven't had their mouths and vowels since they were born." I sometimes feel glad I had such a strict grandma.

I'm not sure what you mean by vowel. Also, I'm not sure what it means to give mouths to children who haven't had mouths since they were born. Perhaps this is an expression that doesn't translate to English.

WhenAs a child, whenever I ignored what my grandma said as a child, she said, she would say to me, "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to a hospital right now and have your mouth and vowel got rid ofs removed by a doctor. Give them to children who haven't had their mouths and vowels since they were born." I feel sSometimes I'm glad I had a strict grandma. As a child, whenever I ignored what my grandma said, she would say to me, "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to a hospital right now and have your mouth and vowels removed by a doctor. Give them to children who haven't had their mouths and vowels since they were born." Sometimes I'm glad I had a strict grandma.

"tell someone something" or "say something to someone". If you don't want to say "my", you should capitalize "grandma". By "vowel" do you possibly mean tongue or voice box?

When I ignored what grandma said, as a child, she said to me,: "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to a hospital right now and have your mouth and voweltongue gotten rid of by a doctor. Give them to children who havweren't had theirborn with mouths and vowels since they were borntongues." I feel sometimes I'm glad I had a strict grandma. When I ignored what grandma said, as a child, she said to me: "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to a hospital right now and have your mouth and tongue gotten rid of by a doctor. Give them to children who weren't born with mouths and tongues." I feel sometimes I'm glad I had a strict grandma.

I suppose you meant tongue instead of vowel?

I think many of Japanese people tend to takeput up with bad behaviors and not saying anything. I think many Japanese people tend to put up with bad behavior and not say anything.

I think many of Japanese people tend to takolerate bad behaviors no without saying anything. I think many Japanese people tend to tolerate bad behavior without saying anything.

I think many of Japanese people tend to take bad behaviors no without saying anything. I think many Japanese people tend to take bad behavior without saying anything.

These people are just cowardsPeople who can't speak outup and say what they want to sayare just cowards. People who can't speak up and say what they want are just cowards.

These people are just cowards who cawon't speak outay what they want to say. These people are just cowards who won't say what they want to say.

Just a point on word choice. "Can't" implies that they do not posses the ability to speak out. "Won't" implies that they have the ability to say it, but will not say it because they are afraid, etc. So, I feel using "won't" pushes the point you made about them being cowards a little more.

I read today it'll be difficult to speakthat if you don't speak at all for a long time, it becomes difficult to speak because the vowel shrinks. I read today that if you don't speak at all for a long time it becomes difficult to speak because the vowel shrinks.

Again, I'm not sure what you mean by vowel.

I read today it'll becomes difficult to speak if you don't speak at all for a long time, because the vowel shrinks. I read today it becomes difficult to speak if you don't speak at all for a long time, because the vowel shrinks.

I read today that it'll be difficult to speak if you doidn't speak at all for a long time, because the voweltongue shrinks. I read today that it'll be difficult to speak if you didn't speak at all for a long time, because the tongue shrinks.

As you get older, more clearly it'llit stands out more clearly. As you get older, it stands out more clearly.

As you get older, more clearly it'll stand ouit'll become more apparent. As you get older, it'll become more apparent.

As you get older, more clearly it'll stand out more clearly. As you get older, it'll stand out more clearly.