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Last night, one friend asked me if there are gun-abuse issues in China, which reminded me of the story my mother once told me.

About 30 years ago, my mother in 20s got an assignment to take a 3-day alone business trip to a big city. My grandfather, who clearly knew how dangerous the distance-trip was for a young girl during this unrest period, gave his revolver to my mother and warned her to keep alarmed.

Let me introduce that period for readers reference. China once kept a considerable amount of militiamans(about 30 million) in case the unpredicted wars from enemies. Accordingly, gun is delivered to militiamans who served as farmers or workers in peaceful times and as soldiers when wars come.

My mother, however, as a young and innocent girl from a small county, after getting her assignment done smoothly, loosed her tention nerves and entered a restuarant for dinner. When heading back to hometown, she was scared to found the bag with gun was lost. Although government didn't ban people from owning gun, owners had to prove their legal ownership. Unfortunately, though the gun has already been subjected to local police by the owner of the resturant, my mother's explanations failed to convince police.

Since 1996, the government intensively lanched numorous overwhelming movement to collect all kind of guns from average people. After that, guns gradually fade away from our life.

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Since 1996, the government intensively lanched numorous overwhelming movement to collect all kind of guns from average people.


Since 1996, the government intensively launched numoerous overwhelming movements to collect all kind of guns from the average people. Since 1996, the government launched numerous overwhelming movements to collect all kind of guns from the average people.

Since 1996, the government intensivelyhas launched numorous overwhelming movementan intensive search to collect all kinds of guns from average people. Since 1996, the government has launched an intensive search to collect all kinds of guns from average people.

Since 1996, the government has intensively launched numoerous overwhelming movementcampaigns to collect all kinds of guns from average people. Since 1996, the government has intensively launched numerous overwhelming campaigns to collect all kinds of guns from average people.

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Last night, one friend asked me if there are gun-abuse issues in China, which reminded me of the story my mother once told me.


Last night, one friend asked me if there are gun-abuse issueany gun problems in China, which reminded me of thea story my mother once told me. Last night, one friend asked me if there are any gun problems in China, which reminded me of a story my mother once told me.

Last night, onea friend asked me if there are gun-abuseany gun issues in China, which reminded me of thea story my mother once told me. Last night, a friend asked me if there are any gun issues in China, which reminded me of a story my mother once told me.

About 30 years ago, my mother in 20s got an assignment to take a 3-day alone business trip to a big city.


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About 30 years ago, my mother in 20swas in her 20s and got an assignment to take a 3-day alone business trip by herself to a big city. About 30 years ago, my mother was in her 20s and got an assignment to take a 3-day business trip by herself to a big city.

My grandfather, who clearly knew how dangerous the distance-trip was for a young girl during this unrest period, gave his revolver to my mother and warned her to keep alarmed.


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Let me introduce that period for readers reference.


Let me introduce that period for the reader's reference. Let me introduce that period for the reader's reference.

Let me introduce that period for the reader's reference. Let me introduce that period for the reader's reference.

Let me introduce that period for the reader's reference. Let me introduce that period for the reader's reference.

China once kept a considerable amount of militiamans(about 30 million) in case the unpredicted wars from enemies.


China once kept a considerable amount of militiamansen (about 30 million) in the case the unpredicted warof unexpected attacks from enemies. China once kept a considerable amount of militiamen (about 30 million) in the case of unexpected attacks from enemies.

China once kept a considerable amount of militiamans soldiers (about 30 million) in case the unpredicted warre were sudden attacks from enemies. China once kept a considerable amount of militia soldiers (about 30 million) in case there were sudden attacks from enemies.

China once kept a considerable amount of militiamansen (about 30 million) in case theof unpredicted wars from enemies. China once kept a considerable amount of militiamen (about 30 million) in case of unpredicted wars from enemies.

Accordingly, gun is delivered to militiamans who served as farmers or workers in peaceful times and as soldiers when wars come.


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Accordingly, gun iss were delivered to militiaman soldiers who served as farmers or workers in peaceful times and as soldiers when wars coame. Accordingly, guns were delivered to militia soldiers who served as farmers or workers in peaceful times and as soldiers when war came.

Accordingly, the gun iwas delivered to militiamansen who served as farmers (or workers) in peaceful times and as soldiers when wars coame. Accordingly, the gun was delivered to militiamen who served as farmers (or workers) in peaceful times and as soldiers when wars came.

My mother, however, as a young and innocent girl from a small county, after getting her assignment done smoothly, loosed her tention nerves and entered a restuarant for dinner.


My mother, however, as a young and innocent girl from a small county, after getting her assignment done smoothly, loosed her tention nerves and entereddecided to go to a restuaurant for dinner to unwind. My mother, however, as a young and innocent girl from a small county, after getting her assignment done smoothly, decided to go to a restaurant for dinner to unwind.

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When heading back to hometown, she was scared to found the bag with gun was lost.


When heading back to her hometown, she was scarhocked to foundind that the bag with the gun was lost. When heading back to her hometown, she was shocked to find that the bag with the gun was lost.

When heading back to hometown, she was scared to foundbecause she lost the bag with gun was lostthe gun. When heading back home, she was scared because she lost the bag with the gun.

When heading back to her hometown, she was scared to fouind the bag with the gun was lost. When heading back to her hometown, she was scared to find the bag with the gun was lost.

Although government didn't ban people from owning gun, owners had to prove their legal ownership.


Although the government didn't ban people from owning guns, owners had to prove their legal ownership. Although the government didn't ban people from owning guns, owners had to prove their legal ownership.

Although the government didn't ban people from owning guns, owners had to prove their legal ownership. Although the government didn't ban people from owning guns, owners had to prove their legal ownership.

Unfortunately, though the gun has already been subjected to local police by the owner of the resturant, my mother's explanations failed to convince police.


Unfortunately, though the gun has already been subjected togiven to the local police by the owner of the restaurant, my mother's explanations failed to convince police. Unfortunately, though the gun has already been given to the local police by the owner of the restaurant, my mother's explanations failed to convince police.

Unfortunately, though the gun hasd already been subjectedturned in to local police by the owner of the restaurant, my mother's explanations failed to convince the police. Unfortunately, though the gun had already been turned in to local police by the owner of the restaurant, my mother's explanations failed to convince the police.

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After that, guns gradually fade away from our life.


After that, guns gradually faded away from our lifeves. After that, guns gradually faded away from our lives.

After that, guns gradually faded away from our life. After that, guns gradually faded away from our life.

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