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About Storage Auction

Yesterday was my day off.
I was thinking of going shopping, when I go shopping, I end up buying something.
So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.
The TV shows was about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, it features a Japanese comedian
and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.
The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve
sometimes found incredible treasures.
This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.
The other contents were about McDonald's fries.
The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries originated in Belgium.
It looked like the poutine was very good. It was so interesting that time flew by.


昨日は仕事がお休みでした。
買い物でも行こうかと思いましたが、買い物に行くと何かしら買ってしまいます。
なので、お金の節約のため家で録画をしていたテレビ番組を見ることにしました。
アメリカのカリフォルニアで行われるストレージオークションについての番組で、日本人の
コメディアンと日本のstonesというアイドルグループの一人、ジェシーが参加をしていました。
荷物の中を確認しないままオークションにかけられるので、過去にはすごいお宝があったみたい
ですね。
今回はコメディアンとジェシーのどちらが儲かるかで勝負した内容でした。
その他の内容はマクドナルドのフライドポテトについてでした。
カナダ発祥のフライドポテト「プーティン」やフライドポテトはベルギー発祥などの内容
でした。
とても面白かったので時間が経つのが早かったです。

Corrections

About Storage Auctions

Yesterday was my day off.

I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I end up buying something.

So, I ended up staying home, watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.

Rephrased the sentence to help with readability.

The TV shows was about Sstorage Aauctions held in California, USA, it featuresing a Japanese comedian

and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.

The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve

sometimes found incredible treasures.

This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.

The other contents weresection was about McDonald's fries.

Is this part of the same show as the previous one, or a completely different one?

The contenttopic was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and Ffrench fries, which originated in Belgium.

It looked like tThe poutine waslooked very good.

The original sentence is correct, this is just a more natural way to phrase it.

It was so interesting that time flew by.

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The storage auction show reminds me of a very similar show called Storage Wars.

About Storage Auction


About Storage Auctions

Yesterday was my day off.


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I was thinking of going shopping, when I go shopping, I end up buying something.


I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I end up buying something.

So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.


So, I ended up staying home, watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.

Rephrased the sentence to help with readability.

The TV shows was about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, it features a Japanese comedian


The TV shows was about Sstorage Aauctions held in California, USA, it featuresing a Japanese comedian

and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

sometimes found incredible treasures.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.


This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.

The other contents were about McDonald's fries.


The other contents weresection was about McDonald's fries.

Is this part of the same show as the previous one, or a completely different one?

The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries originated in Belgium.


The contenttopic was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and Ffrench fries, which originated in Belgium.

It looked like the poutine was very good.


It looked like tThe poutine waslooked very good.

The original sentence is correct, this is just a more natural way to phrase it.

It was so interesting that time flew by.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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