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LeahLeah

Feb. 6, 2026

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About Storage Auction

Yesterday was my day off.
I was thinking of going shopping, when I go shopping, I end up buying something.
So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.
The TV shows was about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, it features a Japanese comedian
and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.
The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve
sometimes found incredible treasures.
This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.
The other contents were about McDonald's fries.
The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries originated in Belgium.
It looked like the poutine was very good. It was so interesting that time flew by.


昨日は仕事がお休みでした。
買い物でも行こうかと思いましたが、買い物に行くと何かしら買ってしまいます。
なので、お金の節約のため家で録画をしていたテレビ番組を見ることにしました。
アメリカのカリフォルニアで行われるストレージオークションについての番組で、日本人の
コメディアンと日本のSixTONESというアイドルグループの一人、ジェシーが参加をしていました。
荷物の中を確認しないままオークションにかけられるので、過去にはすごいお宝があったみたい
ですね。
今回はコメディアンとジェシーのどちらが儲かるかで勝負した内容でした。
その他の内容はマクドナルドのフライドポテトについてでした。
カナダ発祥のフライドポテト「プーティン」やフライドポテトはベルギー発祥などの内容
でした。
とても面白かったので時間が経つのが早かったです。

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About Storage Auction

Yesterday was my day off.

I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I end up buying something.

So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.

The TV shows wasere about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, it featuresd a Japanese comedian

You must use were instead of was if there is more than one item.

Because was/were was past tense, feature must also be past tense.

The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve

sometimes found incredible treasures.

This time, the contents were the comedian and Jesse competeding over to see who could make more money.

I may be a but confused about what you want to say here

The other contents were about McDonald's fries.

I may be a but confused about what you want to say here

The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries originated in Belgium.

I may be a but confused about what you want to say here

It looked like the poutine was very good.

It was so interesting that time flew by.

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LeahLeah

Feb. 7, 2026

5

Thank you for correcting me and your comment. 😀

About Storage Auction

Yesterday was my day off.

I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I usually end up buying something.

So instead, I ended up watching thsome TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.

The TV shows wasepisodes were about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, itand features a Japanese comedian

ands well as Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.

TheIn the show, luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so i. In the past, they’ve

sometimes found incredible treasures.

This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse were competed overing to see who could make more money from the auction contents.

ThSome of ther contents were about McDonald's fries.

TOther content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries which originated in Belgium.

It looked like the poutine was very good.

It was so interesting that time flew by.

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Nice work! I made a few adjustments! Lmk (let me know) if anything requires and explanation!

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LeahLeah

Feb. 7, 2026

5

Thank you for correcting me and your comment. 😀
I appreciate it.

About Storage Auction

Yesterday was my day off.

I was thinking ofabout going shopping, whenbut whenever I go shopping, I end up buying something.

So, I ended upin order to save money, I decided to stay at home to watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.

TOne of the TV shows was about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, and it featuresd a Japanese comedian

and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.

The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents being checked, so in the past, they’ve

Luggage specifically refers to suitcases that you use while traveling, unlike the Japanese word 荷物 which covers a much broader range of items.
I did not change it in case they really used a suitcase.

sometimes found incredible treasures.

This time, the contents wershow was about the comedian and Jesse competed oving against each other to see who could make more money.

When talking about a show, we don't often use the word "content" to describe it. We just say what it is about.

The Another contents wereshow was about McDonald's fries.

Here I assumed it is a separate show from the Storage Auction. If it is not, you can say "The other part of the show was about McDonald's fries."

The content wasIt talked about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries, which originated in Belgium.

It looked like the poutine was very good.

It was so interesting that time just flew by.

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Good job writing such a long post!
One thing I miss about Canada is the poutine! They actually have it at many different restaurants including KFC. Some restaurants even started adding other flavors to the fries such as "Butter Chicken Fries". 😆

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LeahLeah

Feb. 7, 2026

5

Thank you so much. 😀
This time, I was struggling to write texts this time as well.

However, I had a fun time while watching the show.
poutine! I want to go to Canada and have poutine someday.
At that time, I think there are more and more varieties of poutine. 😆

About Storage Auctions

When using "About _____" as a title, if the word in the blank is a non-proper noun, non-gerund noun, it's usually plural. If you're talking about just one specific thing, you can add "a" to make it singular, as in "About a Storage Auction".

Yesterday was my day off.

I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I always end up buying something.

So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded at home to save money at home.

The TV shows was about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, and it features a Japanese comedian,

and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.

The luggagestorage unit is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, being checked, so they’ve

sometimes found incredible treasures from previous storage units.

This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money from the storage auction.

The othershow also included contents were about McDonald's fries.

The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries, which originated in Belgium.

It looked like the poutine was very good.

It was so interesting that time just flew by.

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Well done! It sounds like you had fun watching your recorded shows!

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LeahLeah

Feb. 6, 2026

5

Thank you for correcting me and your comment. 😀
I enjoyed watching the TV shows.

About Storage Auctions

Yesterday was my day off.

I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I end up buying something.

So, I ended up staying home, watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.

Rephrased the sentence to help with readability.

The TV shows was about Sstorage Aauctions held in California, USA, it featuresing a Japanese comedian

and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.

The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve

sometimes found incredible treasures.

This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.

The other contents weresection was about McDonald's fries.

Is this part of the same show as the previous one, or a completely different one?

The contenttopic was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and Ffrench fries, which originated in Belgium.

It looked like tThe poutine waslooked very good.

The original sentence is correct, this is just a more natural way to phrase it.

It was so interesting that time flew by.

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UmbrellaTerms

Feb. 6, 2026

60

The storage auction show reminds me of a very similar show called Storage Wars.

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LeahLeah

Feb. 6, 2026

5

Thank you so much. 😄
I've never heard about "Storage Wars", so I looked it up.
It said there were up to 13 series.
I want to watch these TV shows, I researched it.
I can currently watch them on YouTube, but there are almost no subtitles, and it seems like, I can't use closed captions function.
I can't catch what they said, but I'll try to watch them.

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and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.


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This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.


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This time, the contents were the comedian and Jesse competeding over to see who could make more money.

I may be a but confused about what you want to say here

This time, the contents wershow was about the comedian and Jesse competed oving against each other to see who could make more money.

When talking about a show, we don't often use the word "content" to describe it. We just say what it is about.

The other contents were about McDonald's fries.


The other contents weresection was about McDonald's fries.

Is this part of the same show as the previous one, or a completely different one?

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ThSome of ther contents were about McDonald's fries.

The other contents were about McDonald's fries.

I may be a but confused about what you want to say here

The Another contents wereshow was about McDonald's fries.

Here I assumed it is a separate show from the Storage Auction. If it is not, you can say "The other part of the show was about McDonald's fries."

The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries originated in Belgium.


The contenttopic was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and Ffrench fries, which originated in Belgium.

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It looked like the poutine was very good.


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