July 23, 2023
There are numerous books appear throughout Chinese history, the book Thirty-six Stratagems has been popular and embraced by most people from the elite class over centuries. It has been regarded as one of the most profoundly impacted books In China. I strongly recommend all people who are interested in Chinese culture list it on their agenda.
This book involves 36 collections of strategies and tactics for military action, fulfilled with deception, manipulation and indirect ways to achieve victories. Any Chinese students who have a background of junior high school education would have learned one or two of examples from the book. People In Western countries, however, they have no sense of it, they do and think directly. This cultural difference makes some of them confused when negotiating with Chinese people.
I don't want to give more actual examples here, you can find many from the negotiating history, they often complain the opposite partner does not implement their promises in the agreement. Chinese negotiators would generally consider the agreement is to reach a goal at a certain period, the terms of the agreement is not as important as the result, they can be changeable and re-explained. Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with an unhonest government, place a specific note like this:"If do not implement this term on the deadtime, x x x x".
When dealing with the relationship among people and countries, I personally suggest do not learn from this book. We should consider honesty and mutual benefits. We are tired of deception and strategies, do things directly.
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There are numerous books that have been published throughout Chinese history, but the Book of Thirty-Six Stratagems has remained popular in the elite class for centuries.
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It has been regarded as one of the most profoundly impactedinfluential books Iin China.
It has been regarded as one of the most influential books in China.
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I strongly recommend that all people who are interested in Chinese culture list it on their agendaput this book on their reading list.
I strongly recommend that all people interested in Chinese culture put this book on their reading list.
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This book involvecontains 36 collections of military strategies and tactics for military action, fulfilled withinvolving deception, manipulation, and indirect wayapproaches to achieve victoriesy.
This book contains 36 collections of military strategies and tactics involving deception, manipulation, and indirect approaches to achieve victory.
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AnyMost Chinese students who have a background ofith a junior high school education wouldill have learned one or two of examples from the book.
Most Chinese students with a junior high school education will have learned one or two examples from the book.
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PHowever, people Iin Western countries, however, they have no sense of are generally unfamiliar wit,h they do book and thinkend to think and act directly.
However, people in Western countries are generally unfamiliar with the book and tend to think and act directly.
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This cultural difference makes some of them confused when negotiating with Chinese people.
I don't want to give more actual examples here, you can find many from the negotiating history, they often complain the opposite You can find many examples of Westerners complaining that their Chinese counterpartners does not implement theiruphold promises in themade in agreements.
You can find many examples of Westerners complaining that their Chinese counterparts do not uphold promises made in agreements.
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Chinese negotiators would generally consider the agreement iview agreements as a means to reach a goal atwithin a certain period, the terms of the agreement is not atimeframe, with the terms being less important asthan the end result, t. They can be changeable and re-explainedsee the terms as flexible and open to reinterpretation.
Chinese negotiators generally view agreements as a means to reach a goal within a certain timeframe, with the terms being less important than the end result. They see the terms as flexible and open to reinterpretation.
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Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with an unhonest government, place a specific note like this:"If do not implement this term on the deadtime, x x x x". government you perceive as dishonest, include a specific clause such as: "If the terms of this contract are not implemented by the deadline, consequences will be x, y and z."
Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with a government you perceive as dishonest, include a specific clause such as: "If the terms of this contract are not implemented by the deadline, consequences will be x, y and z."
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When dealing with the relationship amongs between people and countries, I would personally suggest do not learn from this booknot applying lessons from The Thirty-Six Stratagems.
When dealing with relationships between people and countries, I would personally suggest not applying lessons from The Thirty-Six Stratagems.
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We are tiredMany grow weary of deception and strategies, do thindirect tactics. Actings directly and openly can be an alternative approach worth considering.
Many grow weary of deception and indirect tactics. Acting directly and openly can be an alternative approach worth considering.
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Nice writing. Try to avoid overgeneralization. I've never heard of this book before, even though I have lived in China and studied Chinese for many years!
There are numerous books appear throughout Chinese history, the book Thirty-six Stratagems has beenis popular and has been embraced by most people fromthe majority of the elite class over centuries.
There are numerous books appear throughout Chinese history, the book Thirty-six Stratagems is popular and has been embraced by the majority of the elite class over centuries.
It has beenis regarded as one of the most (profoundly) impactedful books In China.
It is regarded as one of the most (profoundly) impactful books In China.
I strongly recommend all people who are interested in Chinese culture list it onadd it to their agenda.
I strongly recommend all people interested in Chinese culture add it to their agenda.
This book involves 36 collections of strategies and tactics for military action, fulfilled with; in addition to deception, manipulation and indirect ways to achieve victories.
This book involves 36 collections of strategies and tactics for military action; in addition to deception, manipulation and indirect ways to achieve victories.
Any Chinese students who have a background ofith at least a junior high school education wouldill have learned one or two of examples from the book.
Any Chinese students with at least a junior high school education will have learned one or two examples from the book.
People In Western countries, however, they have no sense of it, they doact and think directly.
People In Western countries, however, have no sense of it, they act and think directly.
This cultural difference makes some ofcan cause them confusedion when negotiating with Chinese people.
This cultural difference can cause them confusion when negotiating with Chinese people.
I don't want to give more actual examples here, as you can find many from the negotiating historyhistory of negotiation between our countries, they often complain the opposite partner does not implement their promises inof their agreement.
I don't want to give actual examples here as you can find many from the history of negotiation between our countries, they often complain the opposite partner does not implement the promises of their agreement.
an alternative: they often complain of unfulfilled promises on part of the opposing party.
Chinese negotiators would generally consider the agreement is to reach a goal atnegotiation simply a means to an end by a certain periodoint, the terms of the agreement isare not as important as the result, they can be changeable and re-explained.
Chinese negotiators generally consider the negotiation simply a means to an end by a certain point, the terms of the agreement are not as important as the result, they can be changeable and re-explained.
Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with an undishonest government, placmake a specific note like thisuch as:"If do not implement this term on the deadtime, x x x xthen XYZ... will take place".
Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with an dishonest government, make a specific note such as:"If do not implement this term on the deadtime, then XYZ... will take place".
When deahandling with the relationships amongst people and countries, I personally suggest do not to learn from this book.
When handling relationships amongst people and countries, I personally suggest not to learn from this book.
We are tired of deception and strategiesy, do things directly.
We are tired of deception and strategy, do things directly.
alternatively: carry out things directly.
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This was very informative and interesting.
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There are numerous books appear throughout Chinese history, the book Thirty-six Stratagems has been popular and embraced by most people from the elite class over centuries.
There are numerous books appear throughout Chinese history, the book Thirty-six Stratagems
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It has been regarded as one of the most profoundly impacted books In China.
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I strongly recommend all people who are interested in Chinese culture list it on their agenda.
I strongly recommend all people
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This book involves 36 collections of strategies and tactics for military action, fulfilled with deception, manipulation and indirect ways to achieve victories.
This book involves 36 collections of strategies and tactics for military action
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Any Chinese students who have a background of junior high school education would have learned one or two of examples from the book.
Any Chinese students w
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People In Western countries, however, they have no sense of it, they do and think directly.
People In Western countries, however,
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This cultural difference makes some of them confused when negotiating with Chinese people.
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I don't want to give more actual examples here, you can find many from the negotiating history, they often complain the opposite partner does not implement their promises in the agreement.
I don't want to give an alternative: they often complain of unfulfilled promises on part of the opposing party.
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Chinese negotiators would generally consider the agreement is to reach a goal at a certain period, the terms of the agreement is not as important as the result, they can be changeable and re-explained.
Chinese negotiators
Chinese negotiators - Changed "would generally consider" to "generally view" for concision. - Simplified wordy phrasing. - Used "within a certain timeframe" instead of "at a certain period" for clarity. - Fixed run-on sentence by separating into two sentences. - Changed "changeable" to "flexible" and "re-explained" to "open to reinterpretation" for clarity. |
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Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with an unhonest government, place a specific note like this:"If do not implement this term on the deadtime, x x x x".
Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with an
Therefore, I suggest when negotiating with a - Changed "unhonest" to "you perceive as dishonest" to avoid making accusations. - Replaced "note" with "clause" to use vocabulary related to contracts - Corrected use of passive in example contract clause - Replace "deadtime" with "deadline" — the former is not a word |
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When dealing with the relationship among people and countries, I personally suggest do not learn from this book.
When
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We should consider honesty and mutual benefits. |
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We are tired of deception and strategies, do things directly.
We are tired of deception and strateg alternatively: carry out things directly.
- Changed "we" to "many" to avoid overgeneralization - Fixed run-on sentence by separating into two sentences. - Replaced "do things" with "acting" - Changed wording of second clause to soften tone and to use more academic language |
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