June 10, 2026
Good evening, everyone.
So... how do I cope with this sensation?
Just two minutes ago, I was thinking that all my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed. Consequently, I thought about what could be my next move, so here I am.
Firstly, I put down my smartphone to avoid watching Minecraft videos on YouTube. Even if they are so useful to switch off, I thought that I could be less lazy. I told myself that I have a goal to succeed. Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things that I'm forcing myself to do, I have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess.
Unfortunately, I haven't got so many ideas for this topic, about loneliness.
There is just one thing that I'm avoiding every time I feel so bored and lonely: I don't look for my girlfriend.
Sometimes, I feel that some people spend most of leasure their time with their sweet half just because they are bored. I'm so scared to trying confort in that situation with my fiancè. WAIT. I definitely consider my G as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to meet her when I really feel her absence.
However, I'm going for a walk around my neighbourhood.
Have a nice evening.
How do I face loneliness How do I face loneliness
Very good use of “to face” here!
Good evening, everyone.
So... how do I cope with this sensation? So... how do I cope with this sensation?
Excellent 👌
Just two minutes ago, I was thinking that allabout how all of my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed.
Just two minutes ago, I was thinking about how all of my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed.
Good!
‘Thinking that’ = You believed / assumed that all of your friends were busy, it may or may not be true.
- Thinking that + FACT = an opinion or belief.
‘Thinking about how’ = You are ‘reflecting’ on the situation and it is making you feel lonely.
- Thinking about + [noun or situation] = Reflecting or pondering a situation, you may feel an emotion as a result of this.
Consequently, I thought about what could be my next move could be , so here I am.
Consequently, I thought about what my next move could be , so here I am.
English word order is more strict than Italian. English sentences have to follow a subject + verb order. In this sentence ‘my next move’ is the subject and ‘could be’ is the verb, therefore we have to reorder you sentence a little.
Firstly, I put down my smartphone to avoid watching Minecraft videos on YouTube.
Even ifthough they are so useful to switch offfor unwinding , I thought that I could be less lazymore productive.
Even though they are so useful for unwinding , I thought that I could be more productive.
1) Even though = a fact / Even if = a hypothetical guess
2) “for unwinding” = used to relax. “To unwind” is an idiomatic is at of saying “to relax (yourself)”.
3) Productive is the opposite of lazy.
I tolreminded myself that I have a goal to succeed.
I reminded myself that I have a goal to succeed.
“Reminded” works well here because it implies that you have a motivation (a goal) that you are trying to reach.
Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things thatincredibly stressful and I'm forcing myself to do it, I have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess.
Even though writing on this site is incredibly stressful and I'm forcing myself to do it, I have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess.
1) “Incredibly stressful” sounds a little bit smoother- it takes the original idea and makes it ‘snappier’.
2) The second half is perfect.
Unfortunately, I haven't got so many ideas for this topic, about loneliness.
Unfortunately, I haven't got many ideas for this topic, about loneliness.
There is just oOne thing that I'm avoiding every time I feel so bored and lonely: is that
One thing that I avoid every time I feel so bored and lonely is that
I don't look for my girlfriend.
Sometimes, I feel that some people spend most of leasure their free time with their sweet halfpartner just because they are bored.
Sometimes, I feel that people spend most of their free time with their partner just because they are bored.
1) Free time is more popular than leisure time.
2) We are more likely to use partner / girlfriend / boyfriend here.
You can say ‘better half / or fairer half’ but I only hear this in relation to married couples.
I'm so scared tof trying to confort in thatront this situation with my fiancèé.
I'm so scared of trying to confront this situation with my fiancé.
By using ‘trying to confront’ here we acknowledge (show) that we are aware of how difficult it will be to talk about this issue.
WAITDespite this….
Despite this….
Despite (nonostante) this works well here. You are saying, despite the issue that was spoken about earlier, you consider your girlfriend as your best friend. It’s a connector.
I definitely consider my G asgirlfriend to be my best friend, and as a friend, I wouldI like to meet up with her when I really feel her absencemiss her.
I definitely consider my girlfriend to be my best friend and I like to meet up with her when I miss her.
1) Here’s something crazy, in British English the slang term ‘My G’ actually means ‘my friend’. It is very, very informal and only really used by teens.
2) “and as a friend” implies that you only want to be friends with her (not in a relationship when you meet up with her).
3) We say ‘meet up with [someone], when we arrange to do an activity with someone.
4) ‘When I miss her’ is correct here.
However, I'm going forAnyway / With that in mind, I'm going (to go for / to take) a walk around my neighbourhood.
Anyway / With that in mind, I'm going (to go for / to take) a walk around my neighbourhood.
1) Using ‘however’ here feels very abrupt and clinical. You have just talked about the effects of loneliness and spending time with your partner so to suddenly shift into going for a walk feels a little ‘jarring’. Instead, you could use…
- “Anyway’ this shows that you have changed the subject.
- “with that in mind” this is a very idiomatic way to show that due to the ‘heavy’ topic you have just been speaking about, you are going to go for a walk (it is implied that the walk it to clear your head).
Have a nice evening.
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Very good discussion of a very complex topic. Just a few changes needed, but it was easily understood. Ottimo!
How do I face loneliness? How do I face loneliness?
Good evening, everyone.
So... how do I cope with this sensation?
Just two minutes ago, I was thinking that all my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed.
Consequently, II then thought about what could be my next move, so here I am.
I then thought about what could be my next move, so here I am.
"Consequently" is a great word to use, but usually it specifically implies direct cause and effect. "My friends weren't there. Consequently, I felt lonely". "On the day, it rained - consequently, I stayed inside". You aren't *wrong* to use it here, but it does feel a little off.
Firstly, I put down my smartphone to avoid watching Minecraft videos on YouTube.
First, I put down my smartphone to avoid watching Minecraft videos on YouTube.
Even if they are so useful to switch off, I thought that I could be less lazy.
I told myself that I have a goal to succeedachieve.
I told myself that I have a goal to achieve.
Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things that I'mo me and I have to forcinge myself to do, I also have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess.
Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things to me and I have to force myself to do, I also have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess.
Unfortunately, I haven't got sovery many ideas for this kind of topic, one about loneliness.
Unfortunately, I haven't got very many ideas for this kind of topic, one about loneliness.
There is just one thing that I'm avoiding every time I feel so bored and lonely:
There is just one thing that I avoid every time I feel so bored and lonely:
I don't look forContacting my girlfriend.
Contacting my girlfriend.
Sometimes, I feel that somlike people spend most of leaisure their time with their sweetother half just because they are bored.
Sometimes, I feel like people spend most of leisure their time with their other half just because they are bored.
I'm so get scared to trying conto find comfort in that kind of situation with my fiancèé.
I get scared trying to find comfort in that kind of situation with my fiancé.
I definitely consider my Gpartner as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to meet her when I really feel her absence.
I definitely consider my partner as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to meet her when I really feel her absence.
G usually means "gangster" or "gangsta", which can mean friend but is heavy slang. We usually only say this in person, when talking *to* the person in question.
However, I'm goingI decided to go for a walk around my neighbourhood.
I decided to go for a walk around my neighbourhood.
Feedback
Dealing with loneliness is hard. I don't think you should shy away from your partner if you feel lonely. That's part of why they're there :)
How dDo I fFace lLoneliness?
How Do I Face Loneliness?
Good evening, everyone.
So... how do I cope with this sensationfeeling?
So... how do I cope with this feeling?
Just two minutes ago, I was thinking thatabout how all my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed.
Just two minutes ago, I was thinking about how all my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed.
Consequently, I thought about what I could be my next movedo next, so here I am.
Consequently, I thought about what I could do next, so here I am.
Firstly, I put down my smartphone to avoid watching Minecraft videos on YouTube.
Even if they are so useful to switch off, I thought that I could be less lazy.
I told myself that I have a goal, to succeed. I told myself that I have a goal, to succeed.
Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things that I'm forcing myself to do, I have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess.
Unfortunately, I haven't got sodon't have as many ideas for this topic, about loneliness.
Unfortunately, I don't have as many ideas for this topic, about loneliness.
There is just one thing that I'm avoiding every time I feel so bored and lonely:
I don't look for my girlfriend.
Sometimes, I feel that some people spend most of leasure their time with their sweetbetter half just because they are bored.
Sometimes, I feel that some people spend most of leasure their time with their better half just because they are bored.
Different words for girlfriend: better half, sweetheart. "sweet half" doesnt sound natural to me.
I'm so scared tof trying to confort inront that situation with my fiancèée.
I'm so scared of trying to confront that situation with my fiancée.
fiancé= man, fiancée= woman
WAIT.
I definitely consider my G as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to mseet her when I really feel her absence.
I definitely consider my G as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to see her when I really feel her absence.
However, I'm going for a walk around my neighbourhood instead. However, I'm going for a walk around my neighbourhood instead.
Have a nice evening.
Feedback
It's easy to get stuck in a negative headspace when you're cooped up in your room. Hope the walk helps clear your head.
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Just two minutes ago, I was thinking that all my friends were busy and I felt so lonely, lying on my bed.
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Just two minutes ago, I was thinking Good! ‘Thinking that’ = You believed / assumed that all of your friends were busy, it may or may not be true. - Thinking that + FACT = an opinion or belief. ‘Thinking about how’ = You are ‘reflecting’ on the situation and it is making you feel lonely. - Thinking about + [noun or situation] = Reflecting or pondering a situation, you may feel an emotion as a result of this. |
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Consequently, I thought about what could be my next move, so here I am.
Consequently, I thought about what I could
"Consequently" is a great word to use, but usually it specifically implies direct cause and effect. "My friends weren't there. Consequently, I felt lonely". "On the day, it rained - consequently, I stayed inside". You aren't *wrong* to use it here, but it does feel a little off.
Consequently, I thought about what English word order is more strict than Italian. English sentences have to follow a subject + verb order. In this sentence ‘my next move’ is the subject and ‘could be’ is the verb, therefore we have to reorder you sentence a little. |
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Firstly, I put down my smartphone to avoid watching Minecraft videos on YouTube. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Even if they are so useful to switch off, I thought that I could be less lazy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Even 1) Even though = a fact / Even if = a hypothetical guess 2) “for unwinding” = used to relax. “To unwind” is an idiomatic is at of saying “to relax (yourself)”. 3) Productive is the opposite of lazy. |
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I told myself that I have a goal to succeed. I told myself that I have a goal, to succeed. I told myself that I have a goal, to succeed.
I told myself that I have a goal to
I “Reminded” works well here because it implies that you have a motivation (a goal) that you are trying to reach. |
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Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things that I'm forcing myself to do, I have to admit that I'm maybe starting to enjoy it... I guess. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Even though writing on this site is one of the most stressful things t
Even though writing on this site is 1) “Incredibly stressful” sounds a little bit smoother- it takes the original idea and makes it ‘snappier’. 2) The second half is perfect. |
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Unfortunately, I haven't got so many ideas for this topic, about loneliness.
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Unfortunately, I haven't got
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Sometimes, I feel that some people spend most of leasure their time with their sweet half just because they are bored.
Sometimes, I feel that some people spend most of leasure their time with their Different words for girlfriend: better half, sweetheart. "sweet half" doesnt sound natural to me.
Sometimes, I feel
Sometimes, I feel that 1) Free time is more popular than leisure time. 2) We are more likely to use partner / girlfriend / boyfriend here. You can say ‘better half / or fairer half’ but I only hear this in relation to married couples. |
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I'm so scared to trying confort in that situation with my fiancè.
I'm so scared fiancé= man, fiancée= woman
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I'm so scared By using ‘trying to confront’ here we acknowledge (show) that we are aware of how difficult it will be to talk about this issue. |
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WAIT. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Despite (nonostante) this works well here. You are saying, despite the issue that was spoken about earlier, you consider your girlfriend as your best friend. It’s a connector. |
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I definitely consider my G as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to meet her when I really feel her absence.
I definitely consider my G as my best friend, and as a friend, I would like to
I definitely consider my G usually means "gangster" or "gangsta", which can mean friend but is heavy slang. We usually only say this in person, when talking *to* the person in question.
I definitely consider my 1) Here’s something crazy, in British English the slang term ‘My G’ actually means ‘my friend’. It is very, very informal and only really used by teens. 2) “and as a friend” implies that you only want to be friends with her (not in a relationship when you meet up with her). 3) We say ‘meet up with [someone], when we arrange to do an activity with someone. 4) ‘When I miss her’ is correct here. |
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However, I'm going for a walk around my neighbourhood. However, I'm going for a walk around my neighbourhood instead. However, I'm going for a walk around my neighbourhood instead.
1) Using ‘however’ here feels very abrupt and clinical. You have just talked about the effects of loneliness and spending time with your partner so to suddenly shift into going for a walk feels a little ‘jarring’. Instead, you could use… - “Anyway’ this shows that you have changed the subject. - “with that in mind” this is a very idiomatic way to show that due to the ‘heavy’ topic you have just been speaking about, you are going to go for a walk (it is implied that the walk it to clear your head). |
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