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alexwong2164

Sept. 24, 2020

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2Germany interesting product

Just watch a video introduce two very interesting products.

Can find both items in German super market.

1 Caffeine shampoo

When I saw that name laughed immediately.

But after I search that in internet.

Actually, that is a popular product.

Sorry about my ignorance.

I should try it but maybe our supermarket may not have this product.

2 Organic Curry Chocolate

I asked all my friends and the answer is 100%.

100% No!

Will you try?

Corrections

Just watched a video introduceing two very interesting products.

CYou can find both of these items in German super markets.

1. Caffeine shampoo

When I saw that name, I laughed immediately.

But after I search that inAfterwards, I looked it up on the internet.

Actually, thait is a popular product.

Sorry aboutfor my ignorance.

I should try it, but maybe our supermarket may not haveprobably doesn’t not carry this product.

2. Organic Curry Chocolate

I asked all my friends and the answer is 100%.whether that would be willing to try this product, and the answer was unanimous.

100% Nsaid no!

Willould you try it?

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is product made by Germans? Are you in two Germanys?

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I should try it but maybe our supermarket may not have this product.

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peregrina2021

Sept. 25, 2020

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Very understandable, just awkward in places

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peregrina2021

Sept. 25, 2020

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haven't learned to edit my comments yet

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100% NThey all said no!

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Or you can rearrange the sentence so the number isn't first: "Obviously, 100% said no!"

Willould you try it?

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Consider two interesting German products

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Just watch a video introduce two very interesting products.


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Just watched-introducing is more modern text messaging usage

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Can find both items in German super market.


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1 Caffeine shampoo


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1. Caffeine shampoo

When I saw that name laughed immediately.


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But after I search that in internet.


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It is actually a popular product. Is correct and more interesting as a story-telling voice
.

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Sorry about my ignorance.


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Sorry aboutfor my ignorance.

I should try it but maybe our supermarket may not have this product.


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2 Organic Curry Chocolate


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2. Organic Curry Chocolate

I asked all my friends and the answer is 100%.


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100% No!


100% NThey all said no!

Usually it's best to avoid starting sentences with numbers, and if you do, to write it out in letters: "One hundred percent said no!" Or you can rearrange the sentence so the number isn't first: "Obviously, 100% said no!"

100% Nsaid no!

Will you try?


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Willould you try it?

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