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A & B Talk73

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple. Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, then you can go there without changing trains.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Wait, do you have this app?
B: Hmm? No, I don't.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so maybe very useful for you. Check it out, if you want.
B: Thanks. What's the name of it?
A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.
B: Okay, I understand. I'll give it a try.
A: Yes. Have a nice day!
B: Thank you. You too.

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A & B Talk73

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.

Do you know how to get there?

A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, then you can go there without changing trains.

B: Oh, thank you.

A: Wait, do you have this app?

B: Hmm?

No, I don't.

Check it out, if you want.

B: Thanks.

What's the name of it?

A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.

B: Okay, I understand.

I'll give it a try.

A: Yes.

Have a nice day!

B: Thank you.

You too.

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July 16, 2022

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A & B Talk73

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.

Do you know how to get there?

B: Oh, thank you.

A: Wait, do you have this app?

No, I don't.

Check it out, if you want.

B: Thanks.

A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.

I'll give it a try.

Have a nice day!

B: Thank you.

You too.

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July 14, 2022

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A & B Talk73

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.

Do you know how to get there?

B: Oh, thank you.

A: Wait, do you have this app?

B: Hmm?

No, I don't.

B: Thanks.

What's the name of it?

A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.

Have a nice day!

B: Thank you.

You too.

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July 14, 2022

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July 14, 2022

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Do you know how to get there?

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B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.

Do you know how to get there?

B: Oh, thank you.

A: Wait, do you have this app?

B: Hmm?

No, I don't.

Check it out, if you want.

B: Thanks.

What's the name of it?

A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.

B: Okay, I understand.

I'll give it a try.

B: Thank you.

You too.

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Or you can change whatever you want!

Sounds more natural to reverse these sentences:

You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'll give it a try.


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I'll give it a tryLooks cool. I'll try it. Looks cool. I'll try it.

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A & B Talk73


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


Or you can change whatever you want! Or you can change whatever you want!

Sounds more natural to reverse these sentences: You can change whatever you want! It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.


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B: Excuse me, I want to go towhere is the Sensoji temple.? B: Excuse me, where is the Sensoji temple?

change "I want to go" to "where is." More direct.

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Do you know how to get there?


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A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, then you can go there without changing trains.


A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, t. Then you can go there witit's a straight shout changing trainsto Asakusa (station). A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station. Then it's a straight shot to Asakusa (station).

A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, tgo to Platform 2. Then you can goet there without changing trains. A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, you need to go to Platform 2. Then you can get there without changing trains.

The way this sentence is written I think the conversation is in Souka Station. You don't need to say the name of the station, just the direction. Removing "change" to "go" is more natural in English.

A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so first you need to change tgo theo Platform 2 at souka station, then you can goet there without changing trains. A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so first you need to go to Platform 2 at souka station, then you can get there without changing trains.

A: The nearest station is Asakusa sStation, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at sSouka station, and then you can goet there without changing trains. A: The nearest station is Asakusa Station, so you need to change to Platform 2 at Souka station and then you can get there without changing trains.

We don't need "the" in front of Platform 2 since it's a specific platform at Asakusa Station. This sounds more natural in the US.

A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Pplatform 2 at sSouka station, then you can go there without changing trains. A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to platform 2 at Souka station, then you can go there without changing trains.

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B: Oh, thank you.


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A: Wait, do you have this app?


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B: Hmm?


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B: Hmm? B: Hmm?

Could also say: pardon?/excuse me?/what's that?

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No, I don't.


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A: It's a train navigation app in English, so maybe very useful for you.


A: It's a train navigation app. It's in Englisch, so mayit could be very useful forto you. A: It's a train navigation app. It's in Englisch, so it could be very useful to you.

A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it may be very usefulhandy for you. A: It's a train navigation app in English so it may be handy for you.

'handy' is slang for useful. It can be used in place of "very useful".

A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it may be very useful for you. A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it may be very useful for you.

A: It's a train navigation app in English, so mayit could be very useful forto you. A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it could be very useful to you.

or It's a navigation app for trains. It's in English, so it could be very useful for you.

A: It's a train navigation app in English, so mayit might be very useful for you. A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it might be very useful for you.

A: It's a train navigation app in English, so maybe veryitโ€™d be useful for you. A: It's a train navigation app in English, so maybe itโ€™d be useful for you.

You need to use โ€œit wouldโ€ because you are talking about a possibility.

Check it out, if you want.


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Check it out, if you want. Check it out.

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B: Thanks.


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What's the name of it?


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What's the name of it?it called? What's it called?

More natural in English.

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A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.


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B: Okay, I understand.


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B: Okay, I understandgot it. B: Okay, got it.

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B: Okay, I understand. B: Okay, I understand.

Ok, cool!/ Ok, got it!

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A: Yes.


A: Yes.Alright then, I gotta run, A: Alright then, I gotta run,

A: Yes.Awesome A: Awesome

In the US, we wouldn't really reply with, "yes," in this situation. "Awesome," "cool," or even "groovy" can be said.

A: Yes. A: Yes.

Unnatural to respond with 'yes' here. Try: Hope you find it/ good luck

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Have a nice day!


Hhave a nice day! have a nice day!

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B: Thank you.


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You too.


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