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If I am allowed to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries. The first is the most developed countries like America, England and Germany. The second is the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia,
France and Switzerland. The third is the most civilized countries, like Finland, Japan and
Singapore, etc. it's said developed countries almost all adopted the Capitalist system, but I have never seen it in the field and I am so curious about it. Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue. As for beauty, I think everybody likes it and I especially worship nature beauty. In my opinion, there is nothing that can beat down nature. I hope I can realize these hopes and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are,
China is not any worse than those countries and I love China the most because it is my mother country. Anyway, you only live once, be yourself, do things you like as much as you can.

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France and Switzerland.

Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue.

In my opinion, there is nothing that can beat down nature.

I hope I can realize these hopes and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are,

Anyway, you only live once, be yourself, do things you like as much as you can.

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If I am allowed to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries.


If I amwere allowed to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries. If I were allowed to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries.

If I am allowedwere to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries. If I were to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries.

The first is the most developed countries like America, England and Germany.


The first isare the most developed countries like America, England and Germany. The first are the most developed countries like America, England and Germany.

"is" = singular "are" = plural (America, England, Germany)

The first is the mostFirst, I would love to go to very developed countries likesuch as America, England and Germany. First, I would love to go to very developed countries such as America, England and Germany.

The second is the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia,


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The sSecond is, to the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia, Second, to the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia,

France and Switzerland.


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France, and Switzerland. France, and Switzerland.

You don't need a new line here, since you're continuing a list :)

The third is the most civilized countries, like Finland, Japan and


The third isare the most civilized countries, like Finland, Japan and The third are the most civilized countries, like Finland, Japan and

The third isird, I would love to travel to the most civilized countries, likesuch as Finland, Japan, and Third, I would love to travel to the most civilized countries, such as Finland, Japan,

Singapore, etc.


Singapore, etc. Singapore.

Do not use "etc." together with "and". In a list, "and" should always go before the final item.

it's said developed countries almost all adopted the Capitalist system, but I have never seen it in the field and I am so curious about it.


iIt's said almost all developed countries almost allhave adopted the Ccapitalist system, but I have never seen it in the field and I am so curious about it. It's said almost all developed countries have adopted the capitalist system, but I have never seen it in the field and I am so curious about it.

iIt's said that nearly all developed countries almost allhave adopted the Ccapitalist system, but I have never seen it in the fieldcapitalism in real life and I am so curious about it. It's said that nearly all developed countries have adopted capitalism, but I have never seen capitalism in real life and I am so curious about it.

Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue.


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Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities, and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue. Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities, and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue.

Not sure what you are trying to say here.

As for beauty, I think everybody likes it and I especially worship nature beauty.


As for beauty, I think everybody likes it and I especially worship natureal beauty. As for beauty, I think everybody likes it and I especially worship natural beauty.

As for beauty, I think everybody likes it andbeauty. I especially worshipappreciate natureal beauty. As for beauty, I think everybody likes beauty. I especially appreciate natural beauty.

To say that you "worship" beauty sounds a little strange, you would use "worship" when talking in religious contexts.

In my opinion, there is nothing that can beat down nature.


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In my opinion, there is nothing that can beat downdefeat nature. In my opinion, there is nothing that can defeat nature.

I hope I can realize these hopes and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are,


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I hope I can realize these hopemy dreams and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are, I hope I can realize my dreams and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are,

China is not any worse than those countries and I love China the most because it is my mother country.


China is not any worse than those countries and I love China the most because it is my mother country. China is not any worse and I love China the most because it is my mother country.

The sentence is grammatically correct as-is, but it is wordy and so I eliminated some repetition.

China is not any worse than those countries and. I love China the most because it is my mother country. China is not any worse than those countries. I love China the most because it is my mother country.

Anyway, you only live once, be yourself, do things you like as much as you can.


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Anyway, you only live once, b. Be yourself, and do things that you like as muchoften as you can. Anyway, you only live once. Be yourself, and do things that you like as often as you can.

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